THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 98

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


How sweet! It's lovely!



😳 thank u so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
🤢 after reading the update
this was too much for my nazuk dil
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Doracake

🤢 after reading the update

this was too much for my nazuk dil


oh no 😔

mujhe rewrite karna padega 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111

Too hot! though I haven't read d earlier two parts despite loading them in my mobile, I couldn't stop myself frm reading this part!

Loved d song... mein tenu samjawa ki... one of my favs! Anyways will read all d pending updates n comment properly next weekend after my test!


will wait for the comments 😃

best of luck😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhanyabinu

yaar what an update.another faultless display of romantic moments of maneet . i should say you are a great writer.


Thank you😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Loved pinky and her blabberings. So sweet of dev to understand maan and geet. Maan must have been on cloud nine to see geet in his bed...wowwow


I think most people ignored Pinky 😃 Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago

kuch toh bolo 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

hum maaneet ke rang maine aur rangna hai...

Baahon mein chale aao
humse sanam kya parda.
Yeh aaj ka nahin milan.
Yeh sang hai umar bhar ka.
finally Maan reached Geet .. haye yeh judaai ke baad ka Milan...


Thank you😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream


Beautiful update.

Awesome

Maan rushed to see Geet. Now it seems He can't stay away from Geet for too long.

Maan mesmerised to see Geet playing with kids. Her each Ada makes him fall flat on her. Geet caught Maan. N now in shararat mood teasing him by touching him n calling him kids name. Maan ke sath sath Geet bhi naughty ho gayi. Maan enjoying her touch n at the same time mad calling him Aman.

Maan watching her interact with Maithili. Touched by her behavior.

Now Geet n Maan alone. Geet kahi Bach ke nahi ja sakti. Slowly all her senses lost in Maan passion.
Can't get enough of Maaneet.

Dev enjoying full to teasing Maaneet. Lol. Love the dining table scene. N then he wants to watch movies with Chotu. Maan khud ke pair me kulhadi mar raha hai.

Going to Disco. Maan can't see Geet in short dress.Geet knowing Maan frnds.
Maaneet getting lost in their dance.


Thank you so much for such lovely comments.

Glad you are enjoying the story😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

enough and maaneet i can never say that😆
always eager to read more and more maaneet
nice surprised valentine's update avi
like the way u wrote maaneet's feeling for each other and
how much they effect each other's
then dev telling maan to go even without maan asking
and dadi never leave me without surprising
is it same dadi who took promise from maan not to go geet's room and
now happy for maan to go to meet geet😉

ufff bechari geet 😆 aankhein kholoong to maan chala jayegaa😉😉😉
but this is reality geet and woh bhi bhooka sher is in front of her now😆😆😆
aise nahin shodegaa

omggg pinky and her questions😆 lol

thanks for updating


Thanks Jas. Glad you enjoyed it.😃

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