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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#951

Haww.. distances are increasing their love n craving for each otther.. skypewala scene..😳 bechara Maan..😆😛.. Finally dev came there to help maan.. N yeipee Man in HP near to his mishti... N Mishti dreaming abt him.. So maan will definitely tease her now..😆😉 So next part is definitely going to be on blog..Yup.. this isn't right place to stop..😡😆😉

Edited by CutieTeju - 11 years ago

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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#952

Ooommmggg ❤️ I just love this part... Speechless

Maan-Geet missing each other Awww doori Se piyar barhta hai its so true

Just love their interaction.

Pinky 😆 bleed to death Hahahaha... She only need a reason to eat more and made Geet conscious too... And she missed Her Maan more. Actually I am glad pinky asked her doubts esi liye tu Geet went n slept in Maan's room 😛

Maan and Dev Understanding twins and Cool Dadi 👍🏼 maan came for his mishty to surprise her and his return gift was already in his Bed sleeping and moaning his Name 😃 Awww loved that scene sweet, adorably vute and Romantic Too ❤️

Amazing Part and thank you for such long Valentine's treat and PM

Loved it so much

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#953

no need to head to conclusion.i can never get enough of these two.loved this update.

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#954

happy valentie's day in advance... enjoy ur weekend

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UNICORN75

@UNICORN75

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#955

Ufff..what an update..my heart went thud thud throughout the update...beautifully written...felt i was actually watching the show.
The romance,the longing,the desperation..can go on on...Wonderful update Avi
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But evil Avi stopped and left us desperate for the next update...
Have a wonderful valentine day ahead

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#956

iss update padne ke baad main comment doon mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aarahi hai avi patha nahi kitni baar padi main yeh update the longing to be near ur loved one and the most dev and dadi understanding the plight of maan and geet's longing just lovely. Geet thinking of maan and sleeping on his bed and maan reaching hp wants to give surprise instead he received a sweet shock surprise by having geet on his bed and she thinking about him just made maan to love her more and more and without wasting time he just came beside her and geet thinking as a dream just went in flow with what ever maan did😆poor souls kitna tadap rahe hai ek doosre ko paane keliye

just mindblowing avi and thank u for such a lamba wala update

lakshu banner tho mast banayi tune editing was just superb👏👏

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abinaya.m

@abinaya.m

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#957

Hey Avi

I am extremely and terribly sorry for not commenting for the last 2 updates. As I told u before I had fractured my hand and it jus got allrite. And anyways enough of my sorry puran and coming to the updates they were brilliant and mind blowing and exceptionally good. U know wat I did I fell in love wid ur story somuch that I have read all ur updates all over again and wat more can I say simply beautiful. Eagerly waiting for more

Abinaya

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#958

Chapter 70 -

Seriously Avi...things you write. They are so realistic and hilarious...you really know how to be romantic and funny.

Loved Dev's teasing which finally garnered him the BMW keys though the plan changed. But seriously - aankhon aankhon mein baat hone do...it was too funny...

Maan I guess is so thinking like a guy...sometimes it is so hard to write like that but you just pull it off brilliantly - dress pehni usne, and besharm mein...waise bhi besharmi ki kahan hai abhi...

I love Bryan Adams...and this along with some other of his songs make him my favorite singer...very good song choice once again Avi

Chapter 71 -

What a sensual bike ride...but before that what struck me were so many conflicts running inside Geet's head. Life is so complicated...so many things going on and so much less time to talk and express all...

All of it culminates into their night at beach...what a beautiful update. She has been restrained for so long and finally she is trying to flutter her wings of love. She adores him and today she just showed him how her passion and love matches his in every sense. Yet there are strings of society and morality with which she has grown. And he accepts her as she is...perfect for him. He has loved her as she is and that is what matters...

After so much pain and separation, they have managed to be together and their happiness truly touches my heart...awesome update...

Chapter 72 -

Yeh duri...haye yeh duri...

Awesome update once again Avi...

Fight over kids...their little naughty and little serious talks...so much like two lovers who are exploring their world...

Brij's history was dark and I hope he gets caught very soon and no harm comes to Megha. She has already suffered a lot along with everyone in Thakur family.

Daadima did a good job of making Maan understand his responsibilities towards Geet's family as well. Daarji should have same place in his life which he expects Geet to give to Daadima. I also loved when he actually asked is she was ok with Dev-Tara's decision. That was a wonderful and sensitive thing to do.