THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 79

Originally posted by: Onir

Hey hi 😃
Happy Chocolate day to you too. 🤗

Originally posted by: muskanp

Aur kitna tadpayegi becharen ko 😉

Originally posted by: crazydream

The Started reading this ff. I m totally hooked on it from two days. Never leaving the chance of reading it. I thot I will read it slowly but now I read it even I get 5 min brk.

The story is fabulous. I like how you u Hv written Maaneet as well Dev -Tara love story n u Hv given them equal weightage.

Maaneet r shy couple where as Dev-Tara r ferocious. I actually enjoy reading Dev-Tara part because it was spicy, full of nok -jhok, their cute argument. Nt trying to be in limits n controlling Dev. She n her rule book made me laugh. Dev had given her a very nice nickname "I-star ". Nt had a very tough past. She couldn't attach to any one person n get love.
Her n Dev journey was like a roller coaster. The taming of shrew. Lol. I wonder who was tamed n who tamed.

U described each character beautifully whether it be Maan, Geet, Dev, Naintara, Kabir, Megha.

Geet was very reserved. She came here with a aim n she wud not indulge in any other luxury. At first Maan wud satisfy himself just by looking at her. Slowly slowly he pushed her luck n helped her silently n be at her side everytime she wud need. Liked their silent conversation where only their eyes would do the talking.
Baby part was so so cute. City boys n city babies. Lol. Geet is a masterpiece. Us baby ke wajah se they took one more step towards their relationship. Darji n Geet bonding was strong. Their part was beautifully portrayed. Geet confided everything to him. Maan Helping her with her tension removing all her worries.

N the trip. It was most memorable time for both of them. Maan savored each n every moment spent with her.

Kabir n Megha. Feeling sad for them. They both r helpless in front of destiny. Both love each other but can't be with each other at present.
Hope they unite soon.

Megha n Maan relationship was also very good. How he pamper her like a brother. Geet jealous.

Dev- Tara. Tara family after her. She is horrified as to how she will deal with them. Dev tensed for her. She doesn't want to get close to him fearing his safety. But she has developed feelings for him despite many protest from her mind. Dev giving an open challenge to her with three conditions for each of them. Dev laid out conditions very smartly in a way she will be linked to him from morning to night. That was fun to read how their days went.

Will read more n comment on further parts. Will u give me ur blog link n password? Read it till part 51. I come to IF from cell so chalte phirte I read it. I can't be in peace till I finish it.
N I would like Dev Tara part more if that's possible. Or all four together.

Hats off to u for writing this Ff. I. m simply in love with it.

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

kaan pakadke sorry... had to go out of station yes and reached only today... thats y am late lateef this time... though u have updated teaser... i havent read it... socha jab tak update par comment nahi karthi teaser nahi padoongi... teaser pad liya tho usmein pakka kho jaaoongi.. 😳
Sorry, wo bhi kaan pakkad ke? Meri impression kuch bohut buri kar rakhi hai sab ne😆
maans surprise seeing the decisive geet was too good... seeing the chui mui and silent geet in college days he may have thought that she will agree to what ever he says... ab patha chala hoga ki mini sherni hain😆...but this is surely possible only becoz of maan... his love hav given her the confidence to open up with him ...
She is from such a sheltered background so it would be her way to be silent until she finds confidence in the person opposite her. Her true nature is most out with Pinky so far.
maans way to win fights 😳 kya kahoo... bande ko dekhthe hi geet ki sitti vitti gul ho jaathi hain... and when he comes to his seduction mode... she is gone... and if he kisses her like an olympic champion geet kare bhi tho kya kare... 😉

brijs reality was shocking... hope chandan comes to know about all this soon... he has gone to hoshiyarpur and geet too is going there... 😲😲😲 kya hone waala hain??DHULAAI!

love this dadi a lot... as a gal we all know how much we wish our hubbys to respect our parents just like they expect us to ... the way dadi explained to maan was fab and she also gave the hint of motichoor ladoo... maan is realy lucky to have such a superb daadi...

loved maaneet moments... and yes i too love this besharama waala maan😉😳
Don't we all😆
am so curious now to read the teaser... aur rok nahi sakthi apne aap ko... 😛Thanks Lakshmi 😃

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi avi,,,,choclate dy pe sirf tser,,,,,updtt to bnta hei,,,,😉

Originally posted by: honeygrape

hayeee...geeet thud this tym!!! 😆😆kab milega update??? plsss aaj ??😳