THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 63

Originally posted by: Ameeraalikhan

lovely update avi😊

dadimaa is sweetheart how she explained geet responsiblites towards her darji and him

oh no brij in hoshiyarpur maan going overseas for work

maan & dev happiness is incomplete without each others happiness

ladoo for darji those little things matter for geet & for all girls

"Maan, you could have given me the world's largest treasure but it would not equal to this", she kisses over my heart.👍🏼

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

its only natural that u find fault in ur writing... but humse poocho... ur awesome dear... dont think other wise

yes u have given lots and lots... actually i thought u will end it with their proposal at taj... but all the parts followed were like bonus for me then😃

but am happy that we will be getting an another story after this... so mein ab chup..😃 achi bachi ke tarah😛

Originally posted by: dqno1

Abhi se bore ho gayi Priya.. Ab one or two updates baki hai..😆

Originally posted by: anant90

awsome update..👍🏼

geet or maan ..the are as always adorable toghether..😃

ye brij to..😡😡

wo thakur nahi hai fir bhi tahkur ki wealth par nazar jama ke betha hai..😡

or kisi ko shanti se rehne bhi nahi de raha hai..ab wo bhi hoshiyar pur ja raha hai..😲

aww..dev and maan ek hi din par shaadi karnewale hai..😛

thanks for update..update soon

Originally posted by: priya111111

kaha ki bore meri dictionary mein wo word hi nahi hai maaneet keliye😆😆😆

actually do din se pc problem tha issliye updates nahi padpaayi
issliye comments mein deri😉

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

i so much wanted to comment tonite itself... but my eyes are drooping... will comment here the first thing i open my lappy tom...😃

good night to me

and good day to u avi

Originally posted by: dqno1

Maine nahi dekha tumhe yaha... was looking for a VM but phir ye mil gaya 😃

Mazaak kar rahi hu.. take your time Priya..😃

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

awesome update...

loved how Maan and Geet talking about everything in life upto how many children they will have...they even fighting about what name should be given if they will have daughters or sons...loved how Maan is trying to make her irritate so that she will open up with him and can talk with him on any subject...so that she will not hesitate to tell him anything...

they understand each other so well but some things have to be spoken, right. Maan is helping her overcome her shyness with him. He wants her to be free with him, no hesitation.

u told that u will separate and then make them meet again in same update...but here Geet is going away...

I wanted to but I work 6 days a week, plus married, plus the weather and snow here takes its toll, so am exhausted. I figured I will post what I have written and you guys will enjoy their Milan more.

Daadima is so sweet...she removed Maan's sadness and made him realize that with new relationship with Geet he get to be bound with daarji also so he should acknowledge that relation and support Geet...

but more scary is that Brij is also going to Hoshiarpur...he is so devil... he will surely create problem for Geet there...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: heytal

Chapter 70

That was a superb update Avi

😃

Dev ki shaitaani Maan ki pareshaani

Dave and Sameera are here

The foursome go to meet them😊

Giit in lovely white dress and Maan floored seeing the angelic beauty😳

My all time fav song

Its just perfect!!!!!

Loved it lots

Thanks for the update

🤗