THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: JayeetaGurtian
superb update...👏...maaneet moments r amazing...🥳...their nok jhoks r so adorable......but now the time of their separation has come...😭...Geet going to her darji leaving Maan behind......Oh no Brij is in Geet's village...😲...hate this Brij...😡...loved maaneet moments...❤️❤️❤️...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

Thanks. Glad you liked it😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
am sad..😭

u r really going to end this... i thought u will give more maaneet thuds ... dev tara...maaneet dev...

main agar kuch boli tho muhe tum bhelwaali bana dogi🥱

main kya karoo ab??

mera dil nahi bhara

Diye na

itne saare moments diye..

Please no tears

waise bhi my writing is going bad to worse as I am writing only on little time and sleep...

Aise mat kaho Lakshmi

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romanceorlove

@romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Chapter 68

Thanks again for the PM Avi. What a password!! Should have guessed what was coming but then I would not be the reader, would I?!

Another all time fav song!!! Beautiful imagination yet again!! Lion on a mission to change our cool Ms Handa! Least does he know she holds the demeanour with such great difficulty! Lets see how long does this continue :-)

Love Maan in black :-) Enjoy Nakul and enjoy his taking-care-of-Maan lol

Great job again!! Keep it up!!

Too late now, got to sleep, play catch up again soon :-)

4 more to go... though it is nice to have the next chapter ready to read and having to experience desperate need to know what is next, I still would want to get back to the wait, hopefully soon!!!

Kudos to you for being patient with readers like me 😳 and not giving up on your passion to write!!! Thanks again for all the PMs you have been sending me Avi ⭐️

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear..

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: vidyaniru
Loved it! Loved the continuation of their date, loved their cute chattering and bantering. Maan gets to see different shades to her character, her opinions on different things. They've never had such long conversations before.

Sharukh Khurana and Salman Khurana!! You come up with the most hilarious ideas!

Loved Daadi and Maan's chat that he should be a good SIL too. So many times we are so wrapped up in our world that we forget about others. Loved Dev and Chotu's relation. And then Maan bringing her out of her weepy state was really cute and so full of love!

Brij really is getting out of control. Need a fitting end to this monster!

Definitely😃

Thanks Vidya.

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: srisho
The party dance of maan and geet is excellent.

Thank you so much. I am so glad to see your comment.😃 You became an IF member today. Welcome. Hope you have lots of fun here.😃😃

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

meri comment pending hai😛

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: --Fairy--
Amazing update ...i m loving maaneet relation
arghhh i hate brij , how is run away from jail now ?

He had run away with the money before he could get caught or jailed.

Thanks Fairy😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: priya111111
meri comment pending hai😛

Abhi se bore ho gayi Priya.. Ab one or two updates baki hai..😆

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: dqno1

Diye na

itne saare moments diye..

Please no tears

waise bhi my writing is going bad to worse as I am writing only on little time and sleep...

Aise mat kaho Lakshmi

its only natural that u find fault in ur writing... but humse poocho... ur awesome dear... dont think other wise

yes u have given lots and lots... actually i thought u will end it with their proposal at taj... but all the parts followed were like bonus for me then😃

but am happy that we will be getting an another story after this... so mein ab chup..😃 achi bachi ke tarah😛

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