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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 63 Part 4
Hahaha Maan's drama :-) and Dev partner-in-crime :-)

"Ms. Non stop chappar chappar", you do choose words girl, brilliant!!! Would be nice to see Giit react to it though lol

Wow!!! Megha and Kabir getting engaged!! yay!!!

Bless Dev for talking to Poonam, opening her up. Showing them Megha's pictures. This inadvertantly helped bridge the gap Poonam had created between Chandan and her. Well done Dev!!!

Misunderstandings!!! They are so easy to create and so difficult to clear!! One more pair sorted, I mean Pinky & Adi :) Could never imagine poor Adi going thru all of this, had a clue the girl would be a relative though.

Naureen's collection is awesome, must say!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 63 Part 5
The song finally!!! Fabulous way to capture Maan and Geet's emotions, well done!!! Can relate to Geet not understanding her feelings, whether it is right or not. It is not about trust, liking it or not. Geet needs to understand what she wants and Maan needs to wait for her understanding. There is no need to feel guilty. She will understand and accept these sooner or later. Glad Geet could express her insecurities to Tara and she rather than tease her helped Geet understand them. Beautiful :-)

So sweet, both of them feel guilty about hurting each other and realize cannot stay away from the other. Awesome portrayal and visualization of the song, must reiterate your thoughts are very vivid.

Don & Inspector Eagle Eyes hahahaha

Chooo Chweeettt and Cute!!!

Who are you planning for Teji though?

Thanks for splitting your updates into parts girl, they already are long can't imagine how long the entire chapter would be to fit in one update!!!
Edited by romanceorlove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 71

Absolutely amazing!!

Giit wanting to live every moment of their togetherness as she is leaving for HP😭
Poor Maan not aware of it

Geet is torn between her love and society pressures😕
Maan respecting it and Geet confessing her inner feelings on pretence of being slightly high😳

Loved their moments they were so touching and real!

Wonderful update 😃
as u already mentioned no bashing so me not bashing🤔 😆

Avi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 64
Oh boy!! Pari Singhania!! She was forgotten completely, at least by me!!! Both Tara and Dev forgave her as expected, they would eventually!

It must have been so painful for Maithili to go thru all of it. No woman should need to go thru this pain and torture. Credit to you as well for portraying it so well, bringing society's beliefs, MCPs in to the story, questioning their righteousness. Today's women are definitely stronger than they were but there is still a section of women who need to get in touch with their inner strength, identify themselves.

Appreciate the way Dadi maa handled Maithili and bring her face-to-face with her inner self.

Antakshari was fun and icing on the cake was "buddha mil gaya"... 10 15 saal hahahaha ye dono itna intezar karenge?!

Nakul ji what timing!! Could not be better :-) how would he know Maan was doing things in the kitchen not meant to be done?! Poor him, Maan keep scowling him for no reason. "White hair", Nakul ab to definitely gaya.

Billi chali sher ke den mein!! bhugto!! As if!!!! Chukar dekhegi to reh payegi!!!

A perfect song chosen again girl!!!
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Iss teaser ka jawaab mein TQ mein doongi😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 65 Part 1
Her time to tease him and he deserves it for all he does to her!! Though I am not a fan of this song, loved the VM. How do you girls make these wonderful VMs and Banner?

Silence and words. Difficult choice, which is more important, infact both have their role in different situations in life.

Pillows fights are such fun :)

It would be so difficult for Geet to walk away seeing Maan swim, aw! poor girl!

Adi and Maan have shared a bond in every story but here you have added a background to it as well :)

This sneaking is fun and creates memories cherishable for life ;) Aw!! Geet calls him "Maahi", how sweet :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 65 Part 2

This looks like a continuation from Chap 63 part 5, you tie all loose ends. But how do you manage remembering where you took a break?

Gawd, what a b*****d this Sumeet is! Maan would have been angry with Kabir's tone but would be proud of his thought process. Good job Kabir. Sumeet deserved this thrashing and Maan took care of the rest. Such men should never be spared. Lovely!!! Maithilima turning into Maithili the sherni!!! Loved the transformation. Wish all the females in the world could summon their inner strength in time of need and say no to torture.

Following it up with Part 1, watching Maan is still a treat to the eye. Imagining him in the pool raises goosebumps!! Poor girl, with him watching her affects her so much, how would she be able to match up with him in person ;)

hahahaha Geet asking Dadi about Maan directly? Will happen but not yet :) Can only think of the song "Saathiyaa" from Singham right now.

Girls shopping away is the best ice breaker, brave one Geet for saving Megha's chain for her.

Damn!!! You had to get Maan into an accident didn't you?! What plans have you got girl? Though we know it is fiction, we readers are so involved in it! We almost live the emotions you write, though I believe you go through them even more. It must have been earth shattering for all of them. Poor Geet but as we say, all's well that end's well. Maan though hurt from the crash, is safe. This called for a love filled confession, much awaited with no frills attached. Love you Avi!!!

But I still am waiting for my SRK song...
Edited by romanceorlove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 66

After a love confession, he tells her about he talking to Daarji. Wow! But did he? and when? Of course, Daarji would have been more than happy to say yes. Hahaha, Geet following Maan, oh how he loves teasing her! Tara might be a shrew but Geet is no simple!

Love the hospital scenes, Maan missing to spend time with Geet and the mischeiveous Dev. Hahaha Geet embarrassed yet again due to a song lol

Maan finally got what he had been craving for, did he not! Oho, to good night kiss aise dete hain ;) lol

I so wish I could press like multiple times for your chapters!!! Alas!!
Edited by romanceorlove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 67 Part 2

Love you love you love you love you so much!!!

This song is one of my favs and you have done justice to it. The attention to detail is amazing! Though people would know about Taj Mahal, you went ahead and wrote about it and boy, were you wonderful!! Love the proposal. I have read this one over and over. If I remember it right you had shared a link with Maan's voice when you introduced this letter in the story for the first time, I can still hear the voice!! I can't say anything to appreciate your efforts enough girl. Can only say, keep it up!!
Edited by romanceorlove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 67 Part 1

Dadi is an ultimate Drama Queen!! She should be awarded!! But really, haiyee, Maan is finally gonna propose :D Haw :D love you Maan, what a lovely idea muah

Chocolate? Rajdhani? This girl is definitely mad!! You add so many "Aw!!!" moments in your chapters, I have to be careful my parents are not around when I am reading them lest they start questioning me!!!

Love you girl, I m moving to the next one, I have a whole cake in front of me yumm but desperately waiting for "Saans"

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