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Ann

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Posted: 11 years ago

#591

maan n geet's moments were soo cute .. discussing about no. of children dey want n deir names ..

i loved da admiration in maan for geet ..

his each n every word depicts his love for her ..

daadi is a superwoman ..

she knows hw to make dem dance in her single finger .. hw to make dem understand deir situation , problems .. she can be a devil too by teasing dem .. a mother ... mentor .. guide .. and want not ..

brij ... 😡

he is back .. 😡😡 ..

but y hoshiyarpur ..

hmm .. i think geet can refresh her karate skills very well with brij ..

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: muskanp
Yeppy me first
Long & very emotional update

So beautifully written the flow emotions
How they r bound
How deep & back their love goes

🤗

I can't begin to tell you how happy it made me.

Thanks for your support at all times Muskan🤗

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: punam2712
ABHI SHAADI HUI NAHIN AUR BACHON KE NAM KO LEKAR LAD RAHE HAI
BOTH ARE CRAZY

AVI I AM NOT SURE WHETHER I TOLD YOU - BUT I FUND THE BIKE RIDE TO BE SO SEXY AND HOT WITH GEET DRIVING AND MAAN BEING HIS USUAL BESHARAM SELF

WAITING FOR A NEW STORY FROM YOU AVI
BUT I WANT SOME MORE OF POONAM/CHANDAN AND MY FAV COUPLE HERE DEV/NAINA TOO

Khwaishen aissi

ki har khwaish pe dum nikhle

bohut nikle mere armaan

lekin phir bhi kam nikle..

😆😆

Tick Tock Tick is not giving me anytime Punam

warna Avi doston ko kabhi naraaz nahi karti.

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: aditi_2010
Geet was simple, shy my sweet innocent Bambi. It was a treat reading about her. I had loved her through your writing.
But then there was this Giit hidden inside our sweet bambi. The way you made her come out was just awesome. I loved how you let the date progress. it was beautiful and I cannot really find words to describe his love and her love...just it honestly made me cry just by the sheer beauty of your writing...🤗

Loved it. Sorry for late comment but Di do write.I just want you to continue even if locket gets over.😊

I might not be able to comment soon but I will always comment be it late. so asking sorry beforehand 😉

She is a very subtle character, not screechy, not preachy, not invasive but she does a lot and somehow the whole story is tied with her threads.

It is an honor to get such lovely comments from writers whom I like.

Thanks Aditi.😃

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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Aww looovvveeeddd the update... Each and every word was awesome..All maaneet scenes were amazing... Loved the way Dadi made maan understand what Geet is going through and About Darji ❤️ Geet's new name for maan is 👍🏼 besharm...

Maaneet & Devtara marrige on the same day... Great Double mastii Double mazza 😆

Brij is such rascal... Hate him so much... Now why he is going to hoshiyarpur I just hope Geet Safe rahe Os Se...

Waiting for the reunion of Maaneet already 😊

Amazing part

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: chavvi16
wow another update wooo man
wait crap not brij
he is going to HP
and geet is going too
this cannot be good
plus no maan either
god save him from maan if he comes near geet
It will be different I hope than anyone imagined. Let's see if you guys liked it.

awww they were so cute man
but then in the end they have to part again
well this last time before they are together forever
sad seeing them like this
but she has to go to her darji
he too needs her naa
maan is so besharam but we all love him like that
so his besharami harkate will continue
well of course they would
A besharam husband is a good thing, believe it or not..😆

ahhh brij is just rotten through and through right
damn right he is
lets see what more drama happens
The story has to end on drama right😃

dadi your pota is very good in finding loopholes to be with his geet
dude shaadi ho jaane dijiye then you will see how motu she is or isn'tChance maru Khurana hai yeh... though we can't blame him, he has waited so long for her.
cheers for pm

Thanks Chavvi.😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: aditi_2010
The update was awesome di!!! It was so beautiful how Maan and Geet talked about future . Sometimes fighting makes life beautiful. This small fights makes a stronger bond. I loved the crazy bambi yet how she opened up in front of Maan was superb.
Dadima is awesome. Maan and her bonding is so special and the level of understanding they share is just awesome. Loved how she made Maan understand the two sides of a women's life. nd the way maan subtly include Daarji in their life was just beautiful.I loved everything.

I hate Briz.😡. he is big... beeep

I hate him. He is also going to hoshiarpur so di please don't make him do any harm to our sweet little bambi...

She finally let go of her shyness and opened up what she really is. I like couples who have nok jhok. Life is not stale then, there is always a pep when they are roothi and manaying each other; though there is a line that cannot be crossed; no one should get hurt from it.

Thanks Aditi.

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#598

loved the update beautifully done loved it so emotional and brij is one sick man he blames the people who tried to give him a good life to bad all the goodness they taught him it could not change the blood inn his veins so sad and maan and geet so emotional both doing want to separate but have to loved the talk with dadima awesome update brilliantly done loved how maan was teasing geet loved how they were talking about the future and brij is on his way to geet home town thanks for the pm.

Edited by dumas - 11 years ago

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#599

am sad..😭

u r really going to end this... i thought u will give more maaneet thuds ... dev tara...maaneet dev...

main agar kuch boli tho muhe tum bhelwaali bana dogi🥱

main kya karoo ab??

mera dil nahi bhara

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romanceorlove

@romanceorlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#600

Girl!!!! Thread # 17 and I still am on 15!!! Way to go girl!!!

I am back after a long holiday, let me see how much catch-up I can manage before getting into bed tonight. In all, thanks so much for all the PMs you have given me, the faith you have had in me.

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