MG~ SS~The Torment -- UPDATED Pt 6 / Pg 111/ 8th Feb. .............. - Page 17

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Babbie.. kab milega update.. aaj me bhot upset hu.. or zyada der tk ruk nahi skti.. ajj lily ki jagah me kehti hu.. jldi krona.. m waiting..
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Babbie.. kab milega update.. aaj me bhot upset hu.. or zyada der tk ruk nahi skti.. ajj lily ki jagah me kehti hu.. jldi krona.. m waiting..


kyun kya hua aisi surat kyun bana k rakhi hai
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kyun kya hua aisi surat kyun bana k rakhi hai


kal meri sacchi me bend bajne wali hai.. mene firse apne specs kho diye.. iss barr to ghar me hi.. pata nahi kaha rakh diye hai.. ajj 2 din hogye.. mil hi nahi rhe.. ye mere ab tak k 6th specs he jo mene kho diye hai.. abhi last month hi nw liye the.. ajj mera sir fata jaa raha hai pain se.. mom ko kese bolugi... ohh God.. plzzz mere specs mil jaye kal.. wrna me gayi..
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 2





All thought that Maan is happy with this alliance and gave each other a smile but d next set of words of Geet were like a bomb blast for all.

Geet: I'm sorry , I can't do this marriage.


Every body was froze at their place and only Maan was jumping with joy inwardly * his path was clear to marry Sam * Brij became furious listening this and came to Geet with swift move.


Brij : kya bola tune , tu ye shaadi nahi ker sakti ,, lekin teri rai(wish) puchi kisne hei , ye hum tai(fix) karenge tujhe kahan shaadi kerni hei.


Maan got angry on this and looked at Brij angrily he feared that his plan is going to flop , in his greed and to save his plan he blurted out.


Maan: mujhe bhi ye shaadi nahi kerni , ye kisi aur ko pasand kerti hei aur mei ess condition mei ye shaadi nahi karoonga , chalo Dadima.


Geet looked at him shocked * he was dumping his shit on her to save him ... mean * but d damage was done and all looked at Geet disgustingly * Dadima felt very bad and hurt * she was very much sure about Geet but now it is she who is refusing for this marriage * she was hurt not to fulfil her son's wish .


Dadima: Balwant Singh ji , koi baat nahi agar Geet kisi aur ko pasand kerti hei to hum bhi ye shaadi nahi chahenge , Maaf kijiye aapko takleef di, chalo Maan.


She got up looking at Geet with lil anger , she never thought that Mahinder's daughter could do this * she was very hopeful about her.


Maan and Dadima went back to their Haweli Dadima with a heavy heart and Maan was on cloud9 * Dadima felt a burden on her heart not compleating d promise of his son and DIL and pile on d agony was she was bounded to her words * now she can't stop Maan to marry that girl * she quietly went to her room and sat there lost in her thought * after seeing Geet she felt a hope for a good future of Khurana Khandan but all her hopes mingled in dirt with Geet refusal * now she didn't want to live here any more .


After leaving d Handa Haweli Brij and Darji's rage burst out on Geet * Brij caught her hair and gave a tight slap on Geet's face * she fell down and brij hit her with her toe * Darji came near her and hit her with his stick * he started absusing her taking her mom's name.


Darji: akir isne bhi muh kala kara hi diya , jaisi maa waise dhee (daughter), ganda khoon ne apna rang dikha hi diya .


Brij: Darji , esse mujh per chod do , eskka hisab mei baraber karunga ,bahot hawa lagi hei esse bahar ki , essa haal karunga ki roshni ko bhi tarsegi * 2 din ke ander eski shaadi kerwata hun * mei bhi dekhta hum kaise apni marji se shaadi keregi apne maa-baap ki tarah .


Darji: Brij band kerde esse peeche wali kothri(room) mei , awaz bhi bahar nahi aani chahiye * Handa Khandan ki izzat se khelne chali hei .


Brij caught her hair and dragged her towards d kothri * his parents were watching all this silently at her with anger * Rajji was shivering in fear in d corner of d varanda and Tito was standing there holding her arm .


Geet was all numb with this sudden hitting and abusing she tried to explaine her side or d truth ... veerji ye sach nahi hei , meri baat to suniye * but Brij gave her one more slap and threw her on floor saying ... muh khola to jabaan kheench lunga teri ,, aur ek baat acche se sun le 2din ke ander teri shaadi ker dunga , agar jara sa bhi muh khola na to tukde -tukde ker dunga tere * he came out and bolted d door from outside * Geet patted d door and begged for listening her side once but nobody was there to listen her* she slump on floor and cried out .


All d Handas were gathered in Darji's room to take d further steps * this alliencs went in drain and now Brij and Darji had d fear that Savitri ji would take their land back from him and this was a big lose for them .


Brij: ess ladki ke karan humara kitna nuksaan ho jayega , ye saari property humare haath mei hoti hamesha ke liye , lekin ab jo hei wo bhi jayegi.


Darji: pind mei humari be-izzati hogi wo alag * Savitri ji ko to mai kaise bhi kerke mana lunga lekin is musibat ka kya karen * eski jaldi se jaldi shaadi kerni hogi.


Brij's maa: Brij koi munda pakad ker esko vidda kero , baat bahar gai to koi hath nahi thamega * pahale hi eske baap ke karan kaafi be-izzati ho gai thi.


Brij: tussi fikar na karo biji , munda meri nazar mei hei , thode paise denge usse daud ker shaadi ker lega .


Brij' Father: kaun hei wo ?


Brij: Tejinder.


All agreed with this and started to plan for further steps * Rajji and Tito was listening all this from outside * rajji felt disgusted for her family who was going to ruin a girl's life * Tejinder was a jerk and had all d bad habits * he was a crime partner of Brij's gang *Rajji came back to her room quietly and decided to save Geet's life * Rajji was a pure soul away from all evils and love Geet like her elder sis * She knew how mean her family was * she was waiting for a good chance .


It was late eve and Brij went out to meet his friends * Biji was busy in kitchen and her father was in his room busy in drinking * she sent Tito to keep an eye on all and sneaked in d Kothri where Geet was locked * both d girls hugged each other .


Rajji: Di kuch bhi theek nahi ho raha , ye log aapki life barbaad ker denge ya maar dalenge * veerji and Dadrji aapki shaadi ek gunde se kerne ja rahe hei * Di plzz yahan se bhaag jao aur bacha lo khud ko .


Geet was shocked , she don't have anybody in this world and her own so called family was going to stab her ... kya karu mei ,, kahan jaun?


Rajji: Di time nahi hei , koi to aapke college ke friends honge , unki help le lo lekin yahan se bhaag jao jitni jaldi ho sake * kal nahi to parso tak ye aapki shaadi us gunde se ker denge .


Geet thought for Meera and Prem, her classmates but she was feeling hesitate to take their help like this * she never disclose her family matters infront of them and now d things were tatally different but now d question of her life ... kya karu Babaji !! , ku aapne esse jindgi de di ?


Rajji : Di mai jyada nahi ruk sakti kisi ne dekh liya to meri bhi aafat aa jani hei * plzz kuch socho .


Geet decised to go and requested Rajji to bring her red back bag and a pair of cloth and Rajji agreed and said that she would come getting an opportunity * she left from there leaving Geet in thoughts * Rajji saw that weather turned cloudy and it could be rain any time ... disaster * she was also very worried for Geet * she packed her red bag and brought d clear foil from d kitchen and wrapped all d things to save from water if it would rain and waited for d right time .


Precap - a battle for life ...


Part - 3



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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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mujhe kuch nahi kehna
i just wanted to kill maan😡😡
how dare he itna bada jhut bola usne selfish usske liye wo sam hi thaik hai...
i hope maan ko bohut badi kimat chukani pade grrr mujhe galiya dene ka mann kar raha hai usse
aur geet k ghar wale inki baat main jitni na karu utna hi achha
di plzz maan ko bohut rulana iss k liye iss jhut k liye...
usske ek jhut ki wajah se geet ki zindagi barbad hone ko aayi...
main to chahti hu wo khub tadpe geet ko dur se khus dekh kar aur rahe wo apne khokle pyar k sath...
maan ko asani se geet k pass bhi bhatak ne mat dena😡😡😡

PS.
sorry bohut faltu likhabt gussa bohut aaya

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago

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