MG (FF) Back to You# III (#ThrowBack: Pg. 105) 26/03/15 COMPLETED

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

hi , I am Sanghita Dey . I have started reading parts of "Back to you " , but not finished yet... ...it is awesome ...plz pm me from now onwards this story also along with others...I will love to comment...as I am busy due to competitive exams so will take this week to finish previous updates...hope u r okay with it as I don't want to rush while reading such beautiful story & just want to take my own time...waiting for ur response...

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Maan's arrival before geet's marriage may be planned by somebody in their friend circle...

it must be Dev along with Samar...Dev is the one who can schedule Maan's appointment here in Mumbai and Samar is there so that Maan will not suspect the plan...

Maan don't really know that Geet is going to married...he didn't keep tab on her and he claims to love her to such an extent...

let's see what happen now...as Maaneet fan I always want Maaneet together...but here Yash seem as a easygoing very supportive guy in love with Geet...but in the end passionate love between Maaneet wins...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

superb story and writing...

Loved the way you have narrated it..

Great command of the language and the words 👏

very well portrayed the characters of Maan & Geet, their persona and the changes in their views towards life over a period of time..

the way the titles and the poems conveyed the essence of the chapter, that was brilliant !! in such a few words they expressed the emotions of Maan and/or Geet, what they felt at that moment and their thought process...

At the end of each chapter, I scrolled up the page to re-read it, and the meaning it carries always deepened.

And the parallel tracks of present and past are running like a chord, well connected & synchronized...and they did not come at random but progressed in forward direction, and I guess they are going to not only collide but merge in future chapters..

okay, so long comment, feeling like I have written a thesis 😆

Finished up to thread II, will be starting with chapters on this thread...😊

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

NOTE

Hey Guys,

I know its a Friday night and many of you might be waiting for an update...

I apologize for the delay but it will happen tomorrow.

This week has been very hectic and my computer was down for servicing until today evening.

But, but...dont let that frown form on your face...come on! You know I don't come empty handed 😆

Here's the bargain,

Frosty's FF Discussion Thread

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3922362/ff-discussion-frostys-ff

This thread has been opened by maaneetmahi for all of us to discuss my stories. Now, since I started writng on this forum I've only receieved one sided views on them...so it is one great chance for all of us to interact!

Go ahead, discuss the stories among one another, with me; question me, give me suggestions...I will be open to all questions. You guys can ask me about myself too and I will try and be as candid as possible.

Update, tomorrow.

Love yaa all😃

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Read the last few parts...the way you are taking it towards the climax is just brilliant...looks like we are going to have past separation and present reunion side-by-side.

Samar played the trick one more time to bring Maaneet face to face like in the past...but how does Dev know him that he came to receive Samar at the airport...

and while Meera is baffled seeing him, Samar seems to have taken it calmly, and then Maan also could not cope up with in his own case...guess varies from person to person depending on their nature.

Regarding your question -- I just randomly opened your update on IF few days back, and found it interesting mainly due to the writing style which resembles classic literature type (and I did not know the story then).

Though I missed the journey as a reader while the story was shaping up, I am glad to have come across it and could join it before it's ending...😊

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fffanatic

@fffanatic

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Tick tock tick tick bring it on
friday gone Saturday also gone please let sunday be the update day
waiting waiting

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

So sorry guys...I am not being able to update
Computer is shut with the update in it...
Coming here from my phone.
You know I feel so guilty right now for not updating

Will try and give a long teaser if i can access my dropbox

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fffanatic

@fffanatic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit
So sorry guys...I am not being able to update
Computer is shut with the update in it...
Coming here from my phone.
You know I feel so guilty right now for not updating

Will try and give a long teaser if i can access my dropbox

its ok frosty u cannot help when the damn computer ditches you

will wait for the uodate as well as the teaser

just hoping u have the update saved in your dropbox

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fffanatic

@fffanatic

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit
So sorry guys...I am not being able to update
Computer is shut with the update in it...
Coming here from my phone.
You know I feel so guilty right now for not updating

Will try and give a long teaser if i can access my dropbox

its ok frosty u cannot help when the damn computer ditches you

will wait for the uodate as well as the teaser

just hoping u have the update saved in your dropbox

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mhappy

@mhappy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Hi dear

sorry for the delay

got little busy with personal things

missed ur writing

now abt the updates

where to start from

this story of urs full of emotions

and this maan and geet victims of circumstances and the choices they made in response to those circumstances

loved all the updates so much

when I read first missed update wanted to comment then and there

but get greedy

want to know what happened further

and could not control reading all of them

and forgot to comment

get so involved in the story their pain that everytime forced me to introspect or amazed by ur wonderful writingytin

everytime maan and geet are together

how I wish them to forget everything abt the past and just hug each other so tightly that all the pain of the past leave their system

when max revealed maan's uncle's doing

the pain u portrayed

oh dear so very painful ( and u have the mastery over that)

and then geet came

maan's confession

ur writing make it so real that I feel it is real

and somewhere feel to console maan

oh my dear maan don't worry don't loose heart ur geet will come back to u

get so involved with the story

get so painful with their pain that I totally forget abt pressing likes or commenting

all that matters to me is taking away their pain

( so if u want more likes for ur work then stop writing so brilliantly 😆😆)

ah dear that chapter where maan confessed his pain geet's helplessness

and her words

I am not leaving bcoz u were selfish I m leaving bcoz I am selfless

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

wonderful thought and wonderful line

maan geet's kiss on the road after the unfortunate incident

their longing

geet 's realisation

everything was wonderful

geet's reasoning why she loves him

and her chalega

was so very sweet

and maan's love for grammar and the language

I want to say that to u also

love ur command of the language the way u word each and every subtle emotions , feelings gesture

and ur powerful vocabulary

I sometimes have to refer to dictionary

which I hate to do in the middle of reading an update

and this latest chapter

I cant say how my heart was pounding reading each and every word

only waiting for them to re unite

waiting for geet not b so selfless or maan to b selfish again

the tension u r creating for their reunion

with a prefect mix of past and present

is commendable dear

I was not so curious even in the movie kuch kuch hota hai where the climax was pretty much same

or even in ddlj or even in veer zaara

the way I want my maan and geet to come together

pls pls pls update soon very soon

and one request

u have given so much pain to my dear maan and geet that I want so much happiness for them in the latter updates

pls pls

just a request

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