MG (FF) Back to You# III (#ThrowBack: Pg. 105) 26/03/15 COMPLETED - Page 10

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tanya94 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
hey frosty..lovely update..well I cnt like it since it shows that there is an error ...im waiting for their unon I the present...n I like how u r taking the past n the present together n not the past n then the present as it gives us a reason to be happy for maan geets upcoming union even though we feel bad about what happened earlier but we know the end is good...waiting for their union..also hope that u dnt end the story their and show their bond and relationship
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have to agree with Dqn01😃
You're story is so deep with many intricate layers one needs to read it more than once to understand all the subtle nuances. In laymans terms its a lovely story full of emotions and twists which encourages the reader to read it more than once. 😉😃
Nice part. Wonder what happened to Samar and how he got hurt.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Doubt first... hear me out dialogue was maans right??? And geet refused to listen to his confession or it was other way around??? My pea sized brain says maan was about to confess and she stopped him

amazing as always
uou never fail to amuse me with your writing frosty
the story gets better with each passing update
this will be archived in my all time favourite tales
so destiny or say samar did bring maan to mumbai
nt only mumbaj to their adda too
so seeing maans reaction seems like he dinno about her wedding
he was shocked when he heard abt sangeet
samar seems to have a plan up his sleeves nt plan actually but determination to make his frnd realise he has last few hours to claim his love or wish to see his best frnd and sister like frnd together where they belong
samar ne maari entariyaaa mere hopes ne maari enterriya
geet you heard him right he is here to hand you over to the man of your dreams
go samar...I am with you...mission wedding maaneet
the past did bring tears in my eyes
for maaneet it was like do pal ruka khwabon ka karwa aur fir chal diye tum kaha hum kaha
loved cute geet while replying maan little did she know her life was going to take a turn
samar babu is artist not bad
it was triangle meeting day maan-geet-yash dev-meera-samar situation of both the triangle is different but still the sparks can still be seen
maan saw geet in her sangeet lehnga and couldn't take his eyes off her and oopsss jealous angry possessive maan could be seen with yash around
precap sounds interesting ahaan more than interesting
maan is now invited for her wedding
maans line when yash said she din talk much abt college frnds made be take a deep breath

in dono ko mila do frostyyy...plllzzz
hope next Friday will treat us with an extraaa longgg update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
nice part diverging and converging.
samar is lot mature than Maan.

came across ur story in forum.
got hooked to it bcoz of ur writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

As if the wind angels had clenched their teeth, taken a drag of the Arctic and blown icy shards of cold with demonic rage

lonely glistening streets gaping like snakes out of an alien galaxy

Your words are so picturesque 👏
Merci darling! The appreciation makes me so feel-goody😃
Surrender was the sweetest seduction she had discovered.

Frosty, sigh. Superb chapter. My heart was racing along with hers; and then Maan's entry. Loved it all. Sweet first kiss. Especially loved the ending where he took matters in his hands and the raid caught all the low lives.

You write so beautifully.

Sorry for the late comment. I have been burning the candle on both ends and I did not want a glance through for your story😃
Thank you Avi. Sigh! Awesome comment; I was grinning for an hour after reading it😆
Oh thats just so sweet of you to deem my story is important by relishing it fully. Love you sooo much you know🤗

😃 Oui mademoiselle! Avec plaisir!
I am glad to make you grin😃
You are an awesome writer so of course you deserve the credit. No if we can only get you away from writing tragedies, we will have perfection..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
wow lovely update dear. every one's emotions and samar's entry and meeting maan and it seems he has changed a lot and he bringing maan to mumbai .samar sharing his and meera's past and dev's entry to receive samar. did samar know dev is dating meera.

aisa kyun lagraha hai ki samar purposely brought maan and he telling geet

Hey little thing there! I am here to get you wedded to the man of your dreams"

seems that something has in his mind the way he spoke to geet and insisting maan to propose geet may be he will play cupid in making maan and geet to confess before marriage.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
That moment when you feel loss of words for an update 😕 I am totally speechless & I don't know how to say but still let me try
first I was on edge of seat throughout with bated breath pondering will they or won't they meet ? 😆 the meeting with Samar their talks on their lives , going to Mumbai , their cafe joint for all their old time's sake , Maan learning about Geet's sangeet & finally seeing Geet dressed up & getting down with her would-be was just just 👏 salute~👏

then once they met the undercurrents , their emotions that are so powerful & I experienced that for the former updates floated in front ! how they were & how far have they come? what they shared & how now both are standing ? 👏


Maan & Yash 🤣 for a moment I thought he will land up in Infirmary for sure 😆 but then Maan's self talk brought realization that unsaid gap is still there that needs to be bridged between Geet & Maan . Why do I feel Samar is here on some undercover mission ? 🤔😛

Lastly , their past the way they parted 🥺 seriously the way both their emotions reflected through the words was touching & kudos to you for that 👏

Precap looks amazing can't wait ❤️

I stumbled upon this story by way of my usual visit to GF I cannot read all stories at once so I pick one & stick with that hehe 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Samar was perfect.. confess or go take Sanyas... waiting to c what he does..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
I'm more happy to see your self motivation n write for yourself which ultimately reaches our hearts.
All good things happens for few blessed souls 😆
I always regretted while reading Muskan's work that i couldn't be a part of the journey n when i read Back to you i feel immensely happy as i have been a part of this story :))

N sadistic proud feel knocks me on learning not many are blessed to read your work !

Btw i discovered your story while reading Palindrome's beauty...

More then anything i feel possessive of you n this FF... strange but true ! I got the warmest welcome on the first day n i literally think for a long to comment , a sense of sibling protective instinct will be there for you.

@ Update

Deja vu

You swept us again ! Omg i thought this update would be last but looks like there is lots more in stores for us. 2 couples in ackward situation...


*** will edit later
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful part
Samar & maan convo was too good
All joining at the adda so nice
Maan watching geet frm head to toe😉
Yash gas to go due to emergency
Precap...😊

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