MG (FF) Back to You# III (#ThrowBack: Pg. 105) 26/03/15 COMPLETED

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lily

@LILY111144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

wonder ful writing,,,,👏

very painful hw dey partd in past

samars entry in present,,,,,

hs wrds 2 geet shows he s going 2 cupid in deir union,,,,

lovd de stry,,,,⭐️

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ruchsweety

@ruchsweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

beautiful poetry...
hope the drive is long...

readers pls read...

I came across this when I saw it has reached the third thread so started reading and now am addicted...

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vidyaniru

@vidyaniru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Loved the update! There are so many layers to a person and you do full justice in describing the nuances in the personality of a character.

I love your writing, the metaphors you use to describe intense emotions, and the poetry in your words is unique. I've read each update multiple times and have gone back to re-read chapters too. I apologize for not commenting on all chapters, but will definitely try to put in a few words henceforth.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

part 39 - both past & present beautifully described...actually sad in present how they are facing each other in such a bad fate...

what happend to samar...so samar & meera were parted away mutually

I loved how samar tried to sort things bet geet & maan...assuting her he will marry her with her dream person and pushing maan to do things before late

maan so hates yash...dev mingled very well ih their group

Is it "Grey Emperor" or "Khurana Empeor"...just curious..

I came accross this FF thr' Avi's Post😉😃

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Samar n Maan met after long time.. Meera n Samar didn't go well in their reation.. n both parted away with mutual decision.. But now just want them as afriend.. becoz don't want our sweet dev hurt..😉 Huum.. abt Maneet..gosh.. what's in their fate..? koi samjhon inko..
Well frosty.. I liked ur positive attitude abt likes...😆😊 I think this story need some appreciation ... so this one from me..👏

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

hey dear...

was reading this story from 3 days...finished atlast and it was a awesome...and extra beautiful journey...

and now i just want to read once more...

the way you have narrated the story makes the story much more delicate and beautiful...

i loved the way you have written this story in both past and present mode...

i want to tell much more...but short of words...

the importance to each character and with that what i liked the most was in both past and present , then maan , now geet are embracing their self respect ..leaving the love...and maan's goal to become someone...and now geet's to become mother of her sister's child...that was awesomely portrayed...

love and loved person is important to everyone...but above that self respect is much needed...because i think maan had hurted her badly over 8 years with the separation and i really don't want geet to run so easily to him...he needs to know that one should not take anyone for granted...and in past geet just needed his assurance that he was there

but she just got lonliness...self bearing in all those years...

can understand maan's situation...but there was no harm if they had kept contact...and assured geet that he is their for her ...but it didn't happen...and geet's selfless love for the child...loved it..

and the most cute thing is maan geet and child...i loved those chapters...

and above all...i am becoming fan of your writing...

just waiting for further parts eagerly...

and the last part...where they met coincidentally...uff that was awesome...loved it.

and i love the stories where there is no particular villain but their fate and their decisions..

Edited by maaneetmaahi - 11 years ago

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

nice update...never expected that maaneet would have this kind of meeting...friends reunion made me remember soo many things we used to do... 😊😊 hope samar will be of some help in bringing them together...i wonder how you ll bring them together...😊 do continue soon