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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#311

But what has he given closure to?

I do believe it is finally a closure to the chaos in her mind.😛

More than her drinking binge, the use of the native language shows a clearer picture of her state of mind.

We fall back to comforting things when we are at our most disturbed.

In a relationship, whether it be a budding one, or a long intimate one, every once in a while one needs to step away from the heat to put things really into perspective

I do believe this is exactly what Maan has done.

Woman you do a mean job of writing about the labyrinth of a human mind. You have keen observation sweetheart and you know how to exactly put the chaos in words.

Can't help but use the cliched words Awesome Update for this one😆

I really really mean it though.😉

Edited by Susegad - 10 years ago

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

Gosh I will definitely remember this story when I am in Rome😃

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#313

Part 13 - maan was too hurt he left their house. he did not want to force her for anything. she felt rejected by him that he left so suddenly.

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maancrazy

@maancrazy

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#314

2 updates in a row !!! Thank you 😃
Why is she pushing Maan away ? The reaction in the first update was definitely not for Maan-- it stemmed from something deep within her. It's as if she was in an abusive relationship and that's why she is so scared about letting a man have any control on her.
As always , you did a great job portraying her emotions

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#315

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Please do not encourage Plagiarism.

Edited by ChandlerBing - 10 years ago

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Ah!

Absence, it makes the heart fonder or in this case more introspective.

So many reasons and validations one can give but there is nothing like being in the present.

Maan is becoming successful and staying fit 😆

The candle and the dare still are imprinted in my mind as I am sure they are in theirs.

Thanks so much for updating 😃

Loved it a lot

Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#317

WOW!! fantastic update... Loved it...😃

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#318

hi thanks 4 updating again! really enjoying this SS! hope u will update WOL n RDE soon! spectacular update! beautifully written! 👏 Geet cannot stop thinking abt him! Its been four months since he left bt everything reminds her of him! She has fallen 4 him bt has not realised it! Geet thinks abt tht night n the candle! she tells herself tht its cos of her guilt tht she is thinking abt him! Maan nw successful! His business is dng well! Geet lots in her thoughts wen she sees him! Maan looks powerful! Payal notices wt she is dng! update soon! Waiting!