MG SS: MENTAL LOVE updated part 16 on page 87 on 22.09.15 - Page 21

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Wow lovely update maaneet dance together

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awesome part
maaneet danced together

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part 6
nice part...
lovely...
so Maan has seen Geet and is smitten...
cont soon dear...

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waiting

Part 7 :

Geet : m feeling so nice being wet...

Rahul : ye ladki sach me pagal hai, log gussa karte hai aur ye.. devi maa uth jaa...

Agli baar se bathroom me hi le jaunga and tub me daal dunga.. aaj itne se pani se kaam chala.. chal uth ab... fir pata nai kya dream dekhri hai...

Uth jaldi.. coll jana hai ya chod diya ? then he empties whole of the jug on her...

Geet : tsunami tsunami... bachao bachao koi... sab dub jayenge...

Rahul : haan yahi baki tha,, iss hamare flat me tsunami aana...

Bhagwan bachaye uss insaan ko iss ladki se shaadi karega..

Rahul drags her out her bed, she falls down..

Geet " oouuchhh" bhaiyya...

Aap ready ho gaye ? vow... jao aap aur mujhe sone do...

Rahul : to bunk karne ka irada hai.. chalo enjoy... bye bye tc...

Pinky comes to her flat..

Pnky : geet bore hora hai.. chal kuch karte hai..

Geet : movie chale ? ummm mast lunch karte hai aur shopping to banta hi hai boss,,

Pinky : tune mere muh ki baat cheen li.. shopping to already rehta hi hai.. fav tp jo hai..

Geet : chal ready hoke chalte hai..

They both goes off for their day plan.. enjoys movie and lunch... now shoping..

Pinky gets a cll from her sister...

Pinky : sorry yr Geet, jana padega.. kuch prob hai dii ne bulaya hai..

Geet : ok.. mai chalu sath me ? ya fir ph karliyo.. jarurat pade to...

Pinky nodes and goes off..

Geet (st) : chal bhai tu hi kar le shopping.. uss din to maan the, aaj .. kash vo yah hote to mai daud ke unki baaho me chali jaati aur kehti" Maan aaj bhi shopping karaoge kya ? " chichi chi.. babajee kitni lalchi lagungi mai.. but Maan ke liye kuch bhi...

Geet loks out for a sec and notices someone exactly like Maan..

Geet: maan kiske sath me hai?? Kahi vo chudail to nahi ya fir mai hallucinate karri hu.. dekhna padega...

She notices Maan sitting with a girl who is realy beautiful and guess what hot too...

Her face turns red with anger.. she appears there...

Maan : arre Geet tum yaha ? geet jus shows her hand to him to stop and bursts out..

" chudail.. to tum ho vo chudail.. tumhara naam kya hai ?

Vaise ye naam bhi suit karta hai tumhe but fir bhi naam batao...

Hmmm to nahi bataogi..."

Excuse me ? who the hell are u?

Hell, my foot.. gawar kahi ki.. naam pucha to vo bh batana nahi aata tumhe..

Kaun ho tum j mere Maan ke peeche itne dino se padi ho ? hmmm

Mr Khurana... !!!

Udhar kya dekhri hai hai, mujhe dekh.. mujhe...

Agli baar se mere Maan k aas paas bhi dikhi to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga..

Wat u ll do ? haaan...

Maan(st): shitt kyu muskkaan geet se panga leri hai.. muskan to gai ab...

Geet: i... I cn do nothing buttt

I should show u som demo I think... u ll love it.. I promise...

She takes the jug full of water and pours it on her (muskaan ) head..

Ssplaaassshhh!!!!!

Geet: holi haaaiii "

Verybody present their gets shocks wth the act...

Maan : geeettt, watt the hell u think about urself?

Do u even know that who she is?

Itna tamasha kar diya hai ki main kya kahu.

Mujhe to lagta tha is tum sensible yet thodi mad ho but I was wrong about u?

U r so irresponsible about ur life, career n people around u?

Tumne bohut kar diya pleassseee jao.

Geet had tears in he eyes as she didn't expected Maan will say so much to her n rans away.

Maan brushes his hair back and goes from there...

At khurana mansion :

After coming out of his anger he realizes Geet was having tears...

Maan thinks abt the situation over n over.

Maan (st ) : ye maine kya kar diya ? itna nahi chillana tha mujhe..par galti bhi to uski hi thi.. kya bole jaari thi... par maine ye kaise bol diya ki she is irresponsible .. but use bhi to surrounding ka dhyaan rakhna chahiye than a... but I kn her.. she is like dat, she is stupid, cute n innocent.. decorum bhi to maintain karna than a... client thi vo meri. But Geet ko bhi to pata nahi tha.

Par vo muskaan ko baar baar chudail kyu bulari thi... ek baat hai, jab vo " mere maan mere maan " bolri thi to kuch diff feeling ayi mujhe.. jaise vo boht possessive hai mere liye aur pata nahi par kuch to hai.. aaj jaan gaya ki sirf mai hi diff feel nahi karta uske liye, vo bhi karti hai... Maan bte kuch karna padega... aaj to tune jhaad diya use ab manana padega varna tum to gaye, tumhari khair nahi bacchu...

Shittt mai to Geet ke language me baat karne laga hu. But mast hai vo aur uski har baat...

At home Geet

Geet(st) : khotta kahi ka.. kya laga use mai uss type ki ladki hu jo rote hue din guzaar dungi..

Mai GEET hu Geet handa.. itni asaani si peecha nai chodungi mai.. mujhe itne saare logo ke samne danta, maafi to mai mangwa ke hi rahungi.. aur haan ab ye to nipat gayi, aura b vo chudail num 1 (nuts) usko line pe laana hai... Geet handa se panga liya hai.. ab kya kare dushmani ki hai, nibhani to padegi...

Precap : Maan says ...???? n something big will happen

One more part updating

hey dearies in this update in red color is the negative thought of maan n green color is the positive thoughts

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Part 8 :

Geet in college...

Geet : samajhta kya hai vo apne aap ko... vo vo hai to mai bhi mai hu...

Pinky : kya badbada rahi ho ? pagal toh pehle se hi thi. Itne gusse main kyon ho ?

Geet: kuch nahi yaar chalo baad mein bataungi.chal canteen chalte hai.

They go to canteen

Geet saw Maan enters into canteen n approaches her but nuts come in between n drag Maan away..

Geet couldn't see pari anywhere saw nuts and Maan sitting alone...

Geet was fuming in jealousy.. she dint wanted nuts to be with Maan.. but she was helpless as she herself was angry with Maan..

Maan was looking at Geet constantly and Geet was looking at him with the corner of her eye..

Maan knew that..

Nuts : hey Maan aaj aap yaha ? jarur mujhse milne aye ho naa?? Boht dino se mai ghar pe nahi ayi to aap yaha chale aaye...

Maan : aarre nahi nuts vo naa mai...

Nuts : its ok Maan I understand, u dnt need to hide anything.. I kn m very beautiful and ur stunned with my beauty..

Geet : beauty my foot.. sadi hui chipkali lagti hai...

Pinky : kaun kya lagta hai ?

Geet : kuch khayegi ? noodles ?

Pinky : chalega.. chalo laate hai..

Maan : come lets join Geet and Pinky...

Nuts : yes y not... (st) : acha maja ayega... Maan ke sath aur flirt karungi to Geet ko aur pareshani hogi.. vaise bhi mujhe hamesha se use pareshaan karne me bada maja aya hai...

Geet uss din ka maja aaj lungi tumse...

Maan : hey pinky, can we join here ?

Pinky : sure sir.. aap pari ke bhai ho naaa.. the MSK..

Maan : haan.. aur call me Maan not sir and all.. tumhare frnd ka bhai hu.. so chill with me..

Pinky : yeah... pinky to Geet : arre yr ye to bada smart hai...

Geet : chup kar pinky...

Maan : ummm hiii Geet... kaisi ho ?

Geet : kaisi dikhri hu ?

Maan : tum achi dikhri ho..

Geet : bus to fir.. achii hu...

Maan (st) : Maan beta bade gusse me hai ye.. kabhi bhi blast ho sakti hai.. kuch karr varna mar jayega tu..

Nuts : hey Geet, tum thik thak dikhri ho.. mujhe dekho.. m so beautyfull, gorgeous... hana Maan?

Geet : ohhh sorry nuts, mai lesbo nai hu.. tumhe dekhne mujhe koi interest nahi hai..

Nuts : ohh so tumhe keh kaun raha hai.. mai to Maan se bolri hu... rt Maan, nuts is always rt...

Geet : pinky lets go.. I dnt wana sit here...

Nuts : ruko geet, kaha jaari ho.. meri baat suno..

Geet : m not at all interested, dnt stop me.. u ll suffer.. I hv bad Mood..

Nuts : stop Geet.. sit down..

With this nuts made Geet sit down and spoke few words with her..

Nuts : are u jealsous of me Geet, that I hv everything, Class, Money, Status, Boys, High class frnds, Cars , and Now the MSK...

Maan (st ) ye to gai kaam se..

Geet : nuts .. rt... I think u are not worth of anything.. money- I too have money, jus that I dnt show off.. I dnt want to actually.. , status - I dnt wana status of chipkali which u hv in college, the girl jo kisi bhi paise wale se chipakti hai.. sorry boss not interested.. Boys - hmm that u hv plenty of .. rt.. I dnt need ur baby baby wale boys.. I want hunk types.. someone who is capable of making me realize my mistake and if he does anything then the one who wouldn't mind asking me sorry..( with this she looked at Maan) , high class frnds- those frnds who are fake Geet dnt entertain them.. I cherish real frndship.. which I see in my frnds.. pinky is my best frnd and I m proud of her.. frnds are the ones who r with u in ur bad times n also naughty times.. not only while wasting money in discs.., Cars- wat to do of cars.. after u reach college u hv to get down on road and walk wit ur own legs.. ur car cnt cm to drop u in classroom rt ?? so I prefer my legs, Class- to vo to mere paas bachpan se hai.. see I ll tell u.. I was in Class 1, then pass hoke I went to Class 2.. etc.. I passed my class 10 with merit.. did u ?..

Rahi baat tumhare The MSK ki.. " so vo tum unhe apne pass hi rakho, I dnt want him.. apne dupatte se band ke.. ooopsss sorry... dupatta tumhe pata hi nahi hoga na.. chaddi jitney kapde to pehenti ho.. its ok rakho unhe apne paas.. bus agar vo rehna chahte ho to... ho gaya.. should I go ya u want me to sit here for some more time ?? hmmm

Aur haan boht flirt karri thin a kisi ke sath to karo aur karo n beautiful dikho..

With this she emptied the noodles bowl on nuts...

Nuts was stunned and boiling with her ans.. she wanted to Kill her rt now...

Maan stood up and started clapping hands.. then all of the people started clapping... Geet went away and nuts went another direction... Maan was totally impressed with her reaction and ans..

Maan ran to catch Geet as he wanted to speak to her..

Maan caught her with her hand and made her stop...

Maan : vwooovvv Geet.. wat an ans.. totally impress...

Geet : apko bhi du koi isi type ka ans...

Maan : hey Geet.. ruko to... tumse milne aya hu college... baat to suno...

Geet : hmmm bolo, time nai hai mere paas jyada..

Maan: achaa to MSK ko attitude dogi ?

Geet haan to.. kya karoge aap

Maan: nai to doo naa.. kaha mana kiya maine.. do jise chahe use attitude do.. MSK ko do , SRK ko do..

Geet laughed invertly but dint show on her face..

Geet: bolo jaldi

Maan: ummm vo geet, mujhe na tumse kehna tha .. vo Geet... tum apni ankhein band karo naa pehle.. plzz mujhe thoda odd lagra hai kehne me.. pehle kabhi bhi kisi se kaha nahi hai.. na isliye

Geet:mai ankhein band nahi karungi, jo kehna hai bolo.. jaldi.. aap.. "

Maan: vo Geet... "

precap : Geet met with an accident ... ohhh crap.. now ??

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Hey friends

today i updated two part

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part 7
awesome update...
ufff again geet n her dreams 🤣
feeling bad for rahul 😆
becharo ko geet ke liye kya kya jhelna pad raha hai 😆😆
log gile hokar gussa karte hai but humari geet ko bhig kar maza aata hai adhe neend me 😆
rahul ne achha kaha itna achha lagta hai bhigna to next time se tub me dubo dega geet ko😆
ek jug pani se tsunami aagaya 😲😆😆
bhagwan bachaye maan ko geet jaisi antique piece se😉😆😆
geet aur pinky chale lunch aur shopping pe but pinky shopping se pehle hi chali gayi call pakar
kya wish hai geet kash maan aaj bhi hota shopping me usske sath lage rahi geet😆
wish puri bhi ho gayi
geet ko maan dikh gaya but sath me hot n beautiful chudail 😆
geet ne kya sunaya usse aur pani bhi daal diya
geet ko pani kuchh zyada hi pasand hai lagta hai har waqt pani ya drinks girati rehti hai
maan ne geet ko dant diya...
lo maan pehle data an ghar jakar soch rahe ho
geet ke ansu ne asar kiya tum par...tumhe bura lagga...
maan ko geet ki possessiveness dekh kar kuch feel hua...
ab maan ka mission geet manao..
OOpppsss geet to apne sherni avatar me aagayi...
maan se mafi magwa ke hi chodegi lagta hai...

part 8
awesome update...
maan geet se milne college aaya
but ye nuts 😡
in dono ke bech kyun aayi ye !!
isse aur kaam nahi hai kya...
geet maan ko dekhing chup chup ke..
iss nuts ko apne bare me kuchh zyada hi galatfehmi nahi hai !!!!!
maan ko jaise yaha koi aur kaam ho hi nahi sakta usse milne aane ke siwaye...
sach i think nuts needs a doc di...
wo to khud ki tareef khud hi kiye ja rahi hai 😕
maan ki puri baat bhi nahi sun rahi 😡
maan geet aur pinky ko join karna chahta hai...
nuts ki thinking 😡
usse maza aata hai geet ko sata ke ruk ja geet jab apne roop me aayegi teri shamat aani hai 😆
maan ke sawalo ka geet ne teda jawab diya..
maan babu geet abhi bhi aapse gussa hai remember 😆
geet aur geet ke jawab 😆😆
nuts ne to khud hi khud ki kabar khod li 🤣
money status beauty MSK BF sab hai nuts ke pass
geet aa gayi sherno mood me
ab dekho geet kaisa band bajati hai tunhara nuta
kya jawab diya hai geet nuts ko 👏👏
maan ki tarah maine bhi taliya bajayi tumhare liya 😆
maan ko finally geet se baat karne ka mouka mila
hehehehe maan sarma raha hai kya geet se ke usse ankhe bandh karne ko bol raha hai😆😆
loved it...


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