MG SS: MENTAL LOVE updated part 16 on page 87 on 22.09.15 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 8
nice part...
Geet is too much...
my God she was so naughty...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 7

Fantastic update !!
geet's tsunami tsunami ..sab doob rahaa hai was fab 🤣
hehehe ..geet ne toh muskaan ki zindagi bhar ki muskaan cheen li ..
aww maan shouted on geet 😡 bt our geet is nt abla nari to cry over it for long time balki nw she turned into angry sherni ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 8

Amazinggg update !!
chudail nuts tried on wrong time to mess with geet 😉 wahh geet wahh ..love u ..geet ne toh ekdum chutti kardi nuts ki ..
hahaha ..i really loved tht class wala dialouge ..i have class frm one then pass hoke two se ten tak 🤣
maan babu trying to say sry to geet bt my cutie geet showing attitude ..
oh no geet's accident ..waiting for nxt ..cont. soon ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING N LIKING FOR THE LAST UPDATES








Edited by angelic_cute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelic_cute

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING N LIKING FOR THE LAST UPDATES






well m back partially 😆😆
so m waiting too😃😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

MENTAL LOVE

Part 9

Geet:"bolo bhi"

Maan: geet I m sorry..."

Geet: itna time ek sorry kehne me laga diya "

Maan: aaj tak maine kabhi kisi se nahi kaha bt tumse kehta hu.. mujhse galti hui.. uss din itna nahi chillana tha mujhe tumpe.. sorry Geet "

Geet: hmmm thik hai"

Maan: but thodi se tumhari bhi galti thin na , aise paani nahi dalna tha tumhe vo bhi sabke saamne.. aur jise tum janti bhi nahi "

Geet: haan, sorry Maan.. "

Maan: its ok "

Geet: agli baar se dhyaan rakhungi, pehle naam puchungi.. jaan lungi fir paani daal dungi naa "

With this geet goes off...

Maan (st ) : ye ladki puri tarah se pagal hai.. par dil ki saaf hai.. jitna bhi janna baki tha , aaj iske tadake baaj lecture se utna bhi jaan liya Geet tumhe... u r jus perfect... perfect for MSK... did I jus said those lines.. Gosh its being impossible staying so away from her.. now willing to take her close to me..

Geet (st) : Geet aaj to unhone sorry bhi keh diya , ab kaisi naraazgi.. agar vo naa bhi kehte to bhi 2 din baad tu to bhul jaati hi naa ki unhone daanta coz tu apne Hottie se naraaz kaise reh sakti hai.. but he himself came to coll to say sorry.. so be happy n feel lucky.. oyy jyada na muskura.. abhi tak ye pata nai hai ki Maan single hai ya fir mehnat karni padegi unka aur unke gf ka brk up karne me.. heheeehee babajee kitni mehnat karate ho aap apni maasum si bacchi se..

Geet was in her own thoughts and Maan in his own...

Yash : bhai vo jo pari ki frnd hai naa vo boht boht hot n achi hai...

Maan : arre yr vo nuts boht boring aur rude hai. Soch bhi mat uske bare me...

Yash : mai nuts ki nahi... mai to Geet ke bare me keh raha hu... she is tooo...

Maan glares at him...

Maan : tu kabse sidhi sadhi girls pe dhyaan dene laga.. vo us type ki nahi hai.. nuts hi thik hai tere liye... Geet ke bare me aisa soch bhi mat...

Yash giggled and went away...

Yash : pari I think u r rite.. bro ne itne possessively ya concern hoke aaj tak kisi bhi ladki ke bare me nahi kaha.. infact he never denies me for any girl...

Pari : maine kaha na, vo kuch to hai unke mann me.. shayad vo khud nahi jaante... I dnt say its love but liking to jarur hai...

Yash : mujhe bhi yahi laga unke baato se.. lets spy.. pata chal hi jayega...

Pari : yash bhai aap na.. boht chant ho...

Yash : to bhai kiska hu.. the MSK ko spy karna itna easy nahi hai.. lets plan up...

Geet : rahul bhaiyya aap kaha jaare ho ?

Rahul : mai frnd k ghar studies ke liye jaara hu.. thoda late ho jayega. Hv food.. I ll be eating with him. Tc baccha..

With this rahul leaves... Geet plans to go to Maans house to see whether He is alone or with some girl...

Its 9:00 pm...

She decides to climb the tree to get a better view...

Geet : babajee raksha karna.. raat ke samay hai... aur haan Maan akele hi ho isme hi unki bhalai hai.. thik hai babajee..

She sits on the tree and looks at his room...

Geet : ye Maan kaha hai... dikh nahi rahe.. ab raat bhar yaha baith nahi sakti naa.. ullu to nahi hu mai.. vaise rahul bhaiyya mujhe hamesha ullu hi kehte hai.. but Geet iska matlab ye nahi kit u ullu ki tarah yaha baithi reh..

Geeto tu kitni mast hai naa.. kabhi khud se bore hi nahi hoti... khud se baate karna interesting cheese hai... cheese... Bhuk lag jayegi mujhe.. geet concenterate... Maan pe.. dekh kahi dikh to nahi raha..

Maan enters his room with his towel on his waist and full wet..

Geet sees him..

Geet : babajee ye hamesha kyu nahate hai.. mujhe to ek baar hi nahana bore hota hai.. aur hamesha aise nange punge kyu ghumte hai.. kitna mushkil hota hai mujhe control karna...

Maan comes in balcony to talk to someone on ph...

Geet : chudail hogi jarur...

Geet moves a lil bit back side..

Maan sees the leaves moving and something shaking...

Maan : iss wakt na hawa chali na kuch fir bhi is sped se kaisi awaaz aayi...

Maan ek danda leta hai bada sa aur ped ke taraf karke maarta hai...

Geet: ooouuuchhh... pagal ho kya ? "

" marr jaungi na mai"

Maan(st) : ladki ki awwaz... abhi aur ped ki taraf se...

Maan bends more to take a proper view of the tree...

He sees some girl on tree..

Maan : kaun hai aur yaha kya karri ho ?

Geet(st) : shit ab kya karu.. pakdi gayi mai to..

Maan : niche utaro varna guards ko bulaunga...

Geet: wait wait.. no plzzz.."

Maan: awaaz to jaani pehchaani hai"

" whose this, wats ur name.. come here, I kn if u cn climb tree then u can hop into my balcony"

Geet: hmmm"

Geet comes to the balcony and enters there..

Maan: Geeettt tummm "

Geet: yaaa.. "

Maan: yaha kya karri ho ? itni raat me "

" aur lagi to nahi naa, chalo andar aao room me"

She enters his room and observes it carefully... she notices everything was a masterpiece.. he was indeed a royal person... Geet started feel odd.. whether she deserves him or not.. coz indeed she is is rich but not exactly like him.. nuts was rt somewhere.. there class is diff...

Maan: geeet baitho... "

Geet comes out of he thoughts and take a seat on sofa..

Maan brings first aid kit and asks her as where she got hurt...

Geet : ahhh let it be.. I got hurt on my shoulder.. I ll go home..

Maan : no.. wait.. u apply medicine by urself, I ll turn around..

Maan turns and Geet slides her top a bit from her shoulder and slides the strip of her bra... she tries to put ointment but couldn't reach her hand..

Precap : Maan and Geet very close...

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..
maan geet both said sorry...
wah geet kya style hai next time se pehle naam puchogi phir pani dalogi ek ho sample bhagwan ne banaya hai 😆😆
maan is not able to stay away from geet...
he said geet is perfect for MSK hayeee😳😳
poor geet babaji bachi se kitna kaam karwate hai😆😆 par ek kaam babaji ne kam kar diya geet ka maan ka usski GF ke sath break up karwane ka😆😆
maan ne yash ko geet se dur rehne ke liye bol diya...
pari n yash r talking abt maaneet n trying to find more...
again geet in her spy mood ye tree geet ko kuch zyada hi pyara hai 😉😆
geet n her self talk loved her self talk...
🤣 geet pakdi gayi maan ke hatho dandAa bhi kha liya 😆😆😆
oh no geet now thinks if she deserve maan or not seeing his room...
maan taking care of her...
loved it di kahi isse aap phirse dream naho bana doge na???

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! both apologise. Maan cannot stay away frm her! Maan warns Yash to stay away frm Geet! Pari n Yash discuss Manaeet! detective Geet gng to spy on her love! She is memserised by him! Maan sees her! she gets hurt n he takes care of her! update soon! well written, interesting precap
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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 part..
cont,soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally geet pakri hi gayi lovely update

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