DLS THREAD#3 Teaser page 143 || 14th June 2016||

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

too gud lovely update geet closing the doors of her heart fr maan once again n feeling insulted bcoz of his behavior n punishment,maan feeling restless n geet no well.loved the update continue soon

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Romanaxx

@Romanaxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

SuperB :) update dear :)
maan falling in luv wid geetanjli

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Fabulous update👏👏Maan punishes Geet not obeying his orders😭...its cruel but as the king he is right...Geet's cold behavior.. so scary😲Maan is restless😕Loved all parts😳Waiting eagerly for the next update

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Hi dear.

M back and finally got to read all parts.

I am very sorry for not being regular all these days. So many stories are pending to be read.

I never knew this concept of your is going to get so interesting.

Keep up the good work dear.

You are terrific.

Awesome concept.

Loved all maaneet scenes.

Continue soon.

Sorry again for not being regular but I really love your stories.

Please never quit

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

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this story will be in blog half of the time and I had no time to pm all silent readers my blog link and password. And being true I am not comfortable to share my blog with every sinhle person of this forum. I believed on few readers only... sorry but nowadays I am hell busy with my own life and not able to write so need time for myself.

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"Dekha Maa saa !!!! Didn't I told you? Maharaj Maanveer can never be in love.. now Geetangli just saw her place" Sammmya (main queen) said with hatred. Maanveer was showing to much interest in Geetangli according to his other queens and it's not acceptable after knowing Maanveer's thought process for his queens.

"But still.. he gave a whole state for a mere princess" Savitri Devi fumed everytime with slight conversation about Geetangli.

"But still Rajbhumi is with us only.. how can they betray their Daughter in laws family.. Maa saa Maharaj never did loss transactions.. Geetangli is only his desire.. jo ki abb puri hu chuki hai... vo kabhi humare liye khatra nahi bann paye gii.. bechari issi dand mai gadi rahe gii saari zindgi.. or bhuli tu hum tu hai hii naa yaad dilane ko" Sammya laughed evily all unaware about Destiny. She is using her pea size brain like always.

Update after 220 likes in chapter 22 and after page no ... 85 thanks

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Edited by -Mitu- - 11 years ago

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

maanveer's ego is making him to punish her and he wants to se he broken ask for mercy but she is strong women so he has misjudge her and am sure he will truly fall for her.