DLS THREAD#3 Teaser page 143 || 14th June 2016||

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

part 22
nice part...
whats wrong with Maan?
idiot kahin ka...
and Geet well shes proving shes not that delicate in these matters...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...

edit
PS - hey Mohi dear can u add ur main thread link too in the signature along with ur updates thread link...

Edited by spvd - 11 years ago

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

nice part
geet not well and maan gave punishment to her in this state

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tammana

@tammana.m

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Aww <3 :-* feeling bad 4 Geet n Maanvir to regret his decision

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

maanveer is such a determined king he mucished her like that

but he is also suffering now

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

pls update next part too😭😭

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missfox

@missfox

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

Loved the story so far. The characterisation of geetanjali is very strong and interesting. I loved the theme and the background of the story aswell. Can't wait for the next update.

Thank You for writing such an beautiful story.

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ashmaaneet

@ashmaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Awsum part

Omg the punishment given to geet is really unbelievable n her cold behaviour is really scary 😲😭

Oh nooo she even refused to hv food n also to be treated for her fever 😭

Maan feeling restless after the punishment he given to geet

Wl be waiting eagerly for nxt

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Superb update !!!!

During this journey jo bhi thoda bahot kareeb aye the ,aanveer & geetanjali all that again went back to square one ...

Maanveer's this decision & punishment again generated hatred in geet's heart for him ..

he is also nt satisfied with justice & feeling sort of a guilty ...

waiting to see what will happen next ...

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AmElOdI

@AmElOdI

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#369

ohh no maan punishes 2 geet
maan is ruthless bt he do ri8
geet was wrong
nd she accept it bravely
geet refused 2 eat
ab looking 4wrd
amazing update
update soon

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#370

Uff.. if maanveer is so stubborn then Geetanjali is 100 times stubborn than him... God knows what will happen now.. becoz now Geetanjali's attitude is definitely gonna change for Maanveer.. amazing part..