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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Me thik thak... The week was part good, part busy and part complicated...😆


Then I'm sure you're glad to be parted with the part-things week. 😆

Just noticed. 100 pages of the first thread of Wired Hearts. 😃 And this is the greater numbers of chapters I have ever managed to put in one thread. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


Then I'm sure you're glad to be parted with the part-things week. 😆

Just noticed. 100 pages of the first thread of Wired Hearts. 😃 And this is the greater numbers of chapters I have ever managed to put in one thread. 😆

Yes glad that the week has passed ... And also tomorrow starts a new week,...
Yes 100 pages congrats 🤗

And having 9 parts in one thread is cause we the updates are shorter and also Bhoot mafia has been irregular 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Life is a Cycle: 👏
A very short update ... much shorter than IOYSM... yet they have their own essence and depth.

Tell you something Twinnie ... your writing has undergone a subtle and mature transformation. You've grown in your expressions as well as words. The ability to bring out emotions as well as situations in just few words is too good. The short chapters have been quite interesting and intriguing. 👏

This chapter 8 was a emotional one. The revelation of her parents being no longer alive was something that I had guessed and had a mild inkling about... yet while reading it felt sad for Geet.

Glad she could pour out her emotions and pain she's been carrying within for a year being just a daughter mourning for the loss of her beloved parents. Sometimes an outlet is needed and friends can be shoulder you can lean on knowing that there won't be any judgement or wanting to hold back with a complete support throughout.

Loved Anaya's words to her. Indeed Life is a cycle... and hoping Geet's cycle gets her complete circle 😉

Love you ❤️ and 🤗




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Doc tumhari zindagi main zaroor koi aayega and then, asie ho jayega😳😆



Oh my Nisha ji 😆 Kya graphic representation hai 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


😆 Le lo mazey! Tumhein toh dono taraf fayda hi hoga! 😆

Mujhe fayda bahut pasand hai... aur yahan toh double fayda hai 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved ayush n her bonding 😊 missing maan 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo



Of course. Dearest Didis to me. 😆

Waah kya comeback hai 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Yes glad that the week has passed ... And also tomorrow starts a new week,...

Yes 100 pages congrats 🤗

And having 9 parts in one thread is cause we the updates are shorter and also Bhoot mafia has been irregular😉



Thanks twinnie! 🤗

Actually yes, isi waja se itne chapters manage kar liye yahan pe. And I'm hoping to get two or three more here. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Mujhe fayda bahut pasand hai... aur yahan toh double fayda hai😉


Haanji. Lekin abhi toh hamari deal bhi beech mein ruk gayi hai so... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 9: Binding tie 😉 hayee mast title...
What a cutie chotu sweet family. 😳 Flirty, easy going, ever smiling Ayush now is a Dad... and what a proud and caring father he is. 👏 I loved the way he came to examine his Kid for injuries ... and that scene where both Anaya and Ayush hand's were on Shay comforting him ... both enclosed in a cocoon of their own love bubble... Loved that whole scene. Geet being a witness to it was bound to make her feel pride and longing within. I loved that longing in her... sort of you know a squeeze to self.

Something I noticed was you were trying to make the moderate surroundings to be there for AA... but even after mentioning it you showed happy and satisfied they are in their family life now. How they as a couple have the basic essence of love and friendship in them but still have matured 👏

Ayush 😃 He's a sweetheart. The way he handled Geet while talking about the death of her parents and also comforting her. I remember in of the updates of IOYSM how he mentioned about a sibling relation with Geet... and this update he just confirmed it. Loved it.

So none of them are mentioning about the person who actually bound all their ties... 😉 Interesting Nobody wants to deal with it as of now I guess...

Waiting for chapter 10

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