Wired Hearts (1) - Page 100

Originally posted by: dqno1

😲

Itna chotu sa update?

Oh I guess because it was about Chotti😆

So that means the chapters should be according to the ranks of characters. Maan bhi chhota bhai hai toh uske chapters bhi chhotay honay chahiye. haina? 😆

The excitement to see your sister and fighting with Jiju over time with her was perfect.

I have no experience over it but I figured it should be something like that.

This Vyan is crowding her and irritating me.😡 Mere jaanu ki hai woh..

I'm foreseeing people willing to kill Vyan in the future. 😆

Glad she gave him a fitting reply

She's going to do that quite often with "everyone" now! 😆

At this rate updates should be daily..😛

I can't afford daily or else I will run out of chapters within a month and then you'll have to wait a month for each chapter.

Jaldi jaldi jaldi

Thanks for updating Mari

Thanks Avi!

Originally posted by: honeygrape

part 10:

extreeemely painful part...let no one have such a fate.. let such things remain just in stories...parents , that word is a sensitive one for me...so this update made me cry

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

already 11 parts are finished and Maan is nowhere in sight...😔

Vyan is great flirt but I think he is attracted more towards Geet...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: honeygrape

Part 11:

glad that raya is comin...i love it when elder sis's call younger one's chotii...i just lovv that name😊

forgot to mention your chapter names are lovvvlyyy😊

and is she goin to meet maan now😳 last line gave me a hope...phew !!!! glad that i got to read this update as soon as i finished reading the previous part...

and does vyaan has something for geet😳 i sense somthing there...or may be iam just assuming too much...its too early to make such assumptions...and its of no importance even of he feels somthin coz geet toh maan ki hai😳😃

Originally posted by: paponecon

mera maan firse kaab millega..

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_

Lovely update !!

so finally R & R is coming & geet is determine to make them stay with her for sometime ..

Originally posted by: Susegad

Me likes Raunaq very much.😃

I loved how he was flirting with his saali. Very cute.

He is such a charmer.

When my sister read one of the future chapters, she said, I want a Raunaq! 😆

On the other hand,

Me hates Vyan.

I hate how he was flirting with Geet. Damned uncute.

He is such a snake charmer.

Whoops! Vyan needs some security measures in the future! 😆

I know, I know. It's double standards, but I can only write what my heart, truly says

Yes! Double standards! Ek karey toh "such a charmer" aur doosra karey toh "snake charmer"?! 😆

"an exaggeratedly sultry smile"

Yeh kya hota hain Mayyo?Need a demonstration.😆

No idea ye kya hota hai! Mat poochhein! 😆

And will Geet be sending some of these Maan's way too?😉

I mean the real ones. Let's leave the 'exaggeratedly' part out of it, shall we?

A lot of them, I must say. 😳

Next: Mulaqat in airport?

With whom though?😉

With a past and a present.

Awesome update Mayyo.

Ab agla wala jaldi de do.😛

Thanks Apa! Next update right up!

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome update

her younger sister is coming to her place

this vyan never leave a chance to flirt with geet, i guess he likes her

Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice but small

Originally posted by: Susegad

Kab aayega woh, jo dard baatega Geet ka?

Kya pata wo aa chuka hai...

I understand the feeling completely. I mean romance makes us giggle and sigh, but pain makes us relate, coz each and everyone of us has had our share of it.

Correct. Humans connect far better through pain and suffering...

All I'll say is, I have read the comment at least 4 times so far. Rest, I will tell you on my thread.

Have read it. 🤗

I said that coz, Geet's heart is screaming but, so far koi jawaab nahi aaya.

So she probably feels like she's been abandoned by the almighty.

That's why I felt the song was perfect for Geet's sad situation.

It should be natural for her to feel abandoned at this point in life. That was exactly what the song really suggested.

Jo bheji thi dua, wo jaa ke aasmaan

Se yu'n takra gayi ke aa gayi hai laut ke sada...