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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Alpha01

Didn't realise I had missed a part in between. What a horrible thing to live with - the feeling that you were responsible for your parents demise. It's easy to say that it wasn't your fault, that it was God's will but it must and obviously is very difficult to come to terms with something like this.

It's good to see Raya not holding her sister responsible and both sisters are still close to each other.
Ohh Geet is at the airport - I wonder if fate will be cruel and she sees Maan there in a reflection of how Maan watched her leave she watches him arrive.😃


I am sorry you were unaware of the story being updated. Would you like to receive PMs as and when I update?

@Bold: Exactly the point. It's easier said than done.

@Bold 2: Maybe yes. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

The last lines make me anticipating something.


Bang on! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Superb update. Glad to see Geet do excited for her d sister and brother in law's arrival. Looking forward to what is in store next.


Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

So sweet update
Can't wait to read their meeting


Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

I can sense Maan's entry at the airport...am I right?

Perhaps you are! 😃
Well, the story has been moving ahead really well, with suspense being cleared in every chapter. And your way of words is definitely refreshing. The story of Geet's parents was tragic as well as emotional. Its natural for her to feel guilty and the grief of losing them will never end. There can be no loss when compared to the loss of family and loved ones - specially for a person for whom her family was everything in the world. Life stops, but I am glad she has moved on for Raya as well as her sake. I totally like Raya and Raunaq. Even after being married, with their own personal commitments, they are making all the necessary efforts and sacrifices to be close to Geet. Not everyone does that in real life.
Thank you! I am pleased to know you think the story is moving well but I really doubt the other readers agree. 😆
Overall, the story has been very satisfactory till this point. U give unique names to all your characters and that continues with Anaya's children and Vyan.
Thank you! I'm all for unique names and their lovely meanings. 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz


exactly... you just cannnot express how much you love,..how much you are touched with the gesture,...and words... it can just be filled be with warmth...and a breathe of relief!!! *sigh* and slight smile adorning ur lips... and the eyes which are just filled with admiration ... and respect!! I knew you are not DQ..(*comparing with avi .nisha ..and noodles... "doc and u "are my sweet sane ppl) 😆

@Underlined: I doubt Avi agrees with this. 😆

Hmm indifference... you just dint taste this emotion mayyo... if u taste it.. then u will know..how its related..and how this quote is drifting us in different direction...
dont think soo much cutiee mayyo... 😆 ignore my rambles!

Thinking a lot is in my genes. Can't help it! 😆

yea... i was weeping like a kid 😆
Aww! 🤗

hmm... for me those are scars... cause it keeps on reminding me..what i had done.. throbbing wounds do have a healer maayo..but not scars,,
You're right. Scars are always a reminder of what you have done and what the outcomes were...
well... some can really explain well...
hahha😆 that bolded line of mine.. i dint know it holded such deep meaning..i was just overshadowed by emotions..
Many a times, we say the deepest words when we are overshadowed with emotions, don't you think?


😆😆 it is darling... i wonder..how in world i wrote such a bada wala crap... highlight whole comment??
😲😆 oh no plzz...thanks for small mercies mayyo...
😆Yes, thanks for small mercies!
Pleasure is all mine mayyo... 😳 and i really got emotional.. the way u just described... its like "u going thru same hell or punishment as mine..." " a traveller all along the way " but i really hope..u r not one among them...
i wish u never taste this emotion..called guilt and indifference!!! 😳 some people are ought to loved and cherished!! 😳
Thanks, Kittu! But we can't really help guilt for things we do and don't do, right?


🤗 🤗 ohh mayyo Thanks for being sweetheart!!! 😳
hmm as i said... pleasure..pain..guilt .. everything is all mine... i have to thank you.. coz u voiced out my thoughts.. and depicted soo wonderfully!!

Oh mayyo I love YOU!!! 🤗 ❤️
Love you too! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Vyan.. i really like his name 😆 and his chivalrous attitude... 😃

but we do encounter such guys in office ambience...dont we?? even though i do get irked like geet..but i do enjoy their affection occasionally!!😛
You're the first to say you like his chivalrous attitude! The rest are getting ready to kill him. 😆
Its soo close to reality...R&R

Raunaq.. *smirk* sometimes i wish my beloved is just a replica of raunaq!! 😉😆
silly me😆
Raunaq hasn't really made an entry yet! I hope you like the way he is going to be. 😃
next chapter... 😕 anything can happen.. im just pondering over the meeting of R&R with geet..but a part of me is just going bonkers.. 😆.. coz something is
Anything can happen? You're right! 😉
thanks for the small and happyyy chapter!! 😳
Happy is what counts the most here. Trust me, I can't keep two back to back sad chapters myself. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

hii/.. i like yr updates but can u plz add date of updating so we can keep a track which 1 is nw n which1 is not plz..


Hello! I am glad you like the story and thank you for pointing out what may be causing inconvenience to the readers. Will make sure to add the date from the next time onwards. 😊
Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

i just saw i havn't read last part. i think u updated yesterday. i was busy with harry potter fictions.


i liked raunaq. some person are neccessary in life to put a smile on our face on any damn occasion. Raunaq seems to be one of them...

ab entry hone wali h HERO ki right???

i m waiting. this may be first FF where hero has not entered till 11th part..


I think I have read somewhere you're a fan of HP. 😆

Glad you liked Raunaq.

Yes, probably. It's because of the very short chapters. If I had combined the chapters. Maan would have entered some time close to chapter three or four.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KhanAtiyah

maybeee ... she will see maan on the airport !!


Maybe! 😉

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