THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 113

Originally posted by: kjn12

Awesome avi.. proposal in taj came as a total suprise to geet... 😊
Finally Geet read the letter.. 😳
Waiting for chapter 68... 😊

Waiting for part 68...
Send soon.. 😊

i didn't even come out from his good night and he came to say me good morning. hahaha. so hilarious. and one thing i noticed is that sometimes u will write things like u have experienced things in life so much that u r looking through the person's mind. good going.

chapter 68 omg proposal at taj n then geet blowed it of in the room wat a reaction n then silent tretment n the sher all set to get his way with his sherni awesome update

Maan Geet moments were wow 😃 loved thhe whole chapter waise to 😃
with Geet on swing was a dream come tru to him but Geet demanded to read his diary n a moment of anger cost him his only diary I wonder how would he explain it to her later
Mera Maahi 😳
Tar wants to spend time wid Megha-sweet 😃
Machar ne kata 😆 checking him out 😉 😳
aww Adi in need of his friend
Tere Naam 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Maan Geet moments were wow 😃 loved thhe whole chapter waise to 😃
with Geet on swing was a dream come tru to him but Geet demanded to read his diary n a moment of anger cost him his only diary I wonder how would he explain it to her later
Mera Maahi 😳
Tara wants to spend time wid Megha-sweet 😃
Machar ne kata 😆 checking him out 😉 😳
aww Adi in need of his friend
Tere Naam 👍🏼

reat job Avi 👏 The chapter was a roller coaster-in a way!
I loved the sync n connection u made in both chapters 👏 It was amzing the way u described the swimming pool's scen n Kabir-Sumeet's encounter 👏 Fab usage of words 👏 Thumbs Up 👍🏼
I really felt vry good n proud of Kabir when he refued to Marry Megha for Dowry 👏 He took his stand for good against bad, n that proves him to b a better person from before n a gentleman 👏 I also grinned when Maithili finally stood up for her ownself n answered that good-for-nothing husband of hers 😃
The swimming pool scen was-needless to say- beautifully written n I loved it 😳 The picture was killer ☺️ The silence that was alwayz between them is still present n more meaningful now 😳
Maan's thoughts-agreed 😳 😉
Last scene was such a scare Avi 😲 Thankful to u that u didn't leave it to continue for next chapter as most of the writers do the same 😳 The fear, anxiety, chaos happening was so perfectly written that I could literally feel it 👏 👏 It made me Very emotional 😭 When Maan assured Dadima of being fine, when Geet was praying for his well-being n when she finally could meet him n hugged n confessed her unimaginable love for him 👏 Nothing could match the feeling she experienced at that moment, the need to tell him what n how much he matters to her 👏 It was a roller coaster but I loved every single word of the chapter 👏 😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

So glad you liked it.🤗 I knew you would like Tere Naam😳

How would I not, its a Salman+Maan combo 😳
🤗

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

great job Avi 👏 The chapter was a roller coaster-in a way!
I loved the sync n connection u made in both chapters 👏 It was amzing the way u described the swimming pool's scene n Kabir-Sumeet's encounter 👏 Fab usage of words 👏 Thumbs Up 👍🏼
I really felt vry good n proud of Kabir when he refused to Marry Megha for Dowry 👏 He took his stand for good against bad, n that proves him to b a better person from before n a gentleman 👏 I also grinned when Maithili finally stood up for her ownself n answered that good-for-nothing husband of hers 😃
The swimming pool scen was-needless to say- beautifully written n I loved it 😳 The picture was killer ☺️ The silence that was alwayz between them is still present n more meaningful now 😳
Maan's thoughts-agreed 😳 😉
Last scene was such a scare Avi 😲 Thankful to u that u didn't leave it to continue for next chapter as most of the writers do the same 😳 The fear, anxiety, chaos happening was so perfectly written that I could literally feel it 👏 👏 It made me Very emotional 😭 When Maan assured Dadima of being fine, when Geet was praying for his well-being n when she finally could meet him n hugged n confessed her unimaginable love for him 👏 Nothing could match the feeling she experienced at that moment, the need to tell him what n how much he matters to her 👏 It was a roller coaster but I loved every single word of the chapter 👏 😃

Sharmeen ka birthday chapter 😃 Now wonee he was so happy reading it 😃
Saans Me Tere Saans mili 😳 A.R.Rehman 👍🏼 coming to th chapter, --Lush Pash 👏 😃 Picture as so beautiful-a memory 😳 I wrote in last comment of mine,k Geet's confession was so beautiful, nothing could match the feelings she said those words with ! 👏
Haaye Maan ka attitude "MSK k saamne SRK kahn tik sakta hai" 😳 Aashu 😆
Maan's teasing was so cute 😆 Geet's pout , all held a calmness inside that all's well now 😃 n not to forget, I have alwayz loved him in white too 😉 😆 Dev's a devil 😆 teasing the already frustrated Maan 😆 But Dev helped him too, to get to her 😉 waise bhi itni teasing to chalti hai, after all what r siblings for 😆 The ever innocent Maan's seductress sang the apt song to trigger the lion in him 😆 Then ☺️ ☺️ n phir se chhed chaad wid Geet 😆 phir Good Night ☺️ Aise good night k baad neend kise aayegi ☺️
Lastly, that picture in the end ☺️ I love it would b an understatement ☺️ I still have the vdo of the scene in my phone 😳 That scene is one of my favourites, the whole -from their going to coming back home to talking to dadima n the whole nautanki n then n the almosttt kiss .☺️