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Posted: 11 years ago

#1131

Originally posted by: Koolsmile
Sharmeen ka birthday chapter 😃 Now wonee he was so happy reading it 😃
Saans Me Tere Saans mili 😳 A.R.Rehman 👍🏼 coming to th chapter, --Lush Pash 👏 😃 Picture as so beautiful-a memory 😳 I wrote in last comment of mine,k Geet's confession was so beautiful, nothing could match the feelings she said those words with ! 👏
Haaye Maan ka attitude "MSK k saamne SRK kahn tik sakta hai" 😳 Aashu 😆
Maan's teasing was so cute 😆 Geet's pout , all held a calmness inside that all's well now 😃 n not to forget, I have alwayz loved him in white too 😉 😆 Dev's a devil 😆 teasing the already frustrated Maan 😆 But Dev helped him too, to get to her 😉 waise bhi itni teasing to chalti hai, after all what r siblings for 😆 The ever innocent Maan's seductress sang the apt song to trigger the lion in him 😆 Then ☺️ ☺️ n phir se chhed chaad wid Geet 😆 phir Good Night ☺️ Aise good night k baad neend kise aayegi ☺️
Lastly, that picture in the end ☺️ I love it would b an understatement ☺️ I still have the vdo of the scene in my phone 😳 That scene is one of my favourites, the whole -from their going to coming back home to talking to dadima n the whole nautanki n then n the almosttt kiss .☺️

Yes especially when he comes back to the window to say goodnight, that was cuteness personified

Dev ur Maan ki kitkit mein bada bhai humesha jhelta hai sab😆

jaldi padho.. mujhe shaadi likhni hai😃

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ppriyanka83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1132

Hello dear.
I wz bzy bcoz of xams..y xams garmeeo m Q hote h?chodo..
Bck 2 d story..finly Giit n Maan ki msundrstanding dur hu..in a vry vry thoughtfl way...ab sb thik h.
Inn dono ka silnt luv..aakho aakho wala..iz suuuprb..I read it 3 tyms..luvly..
Ek aur baat mujhe apni jaasus n match makr Daadi baahut baahut pyaari lgti h nd Daarji b..he izn't khaadus..lyk d shw..
Hr ek luv story apne m diffrnt n unique h n beg d same attntion..
Mene part 66-1 pura padh liya.
Luuuv U..

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ppriyanka83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1133

Jst read prt 68-70..beautifl..
At last thy confss of thr luv 2 ech othr..n d way Maan try 2 seduce Giit n she try 2 resist him..too gud..🤗
Y Dev b na.trappd Maan..can i b wid my CHOTU.. LOL😛
Kya kya krna padta h pyaar m Mr Maan Singh Khurana...

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sessy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1134

part 65(1)-geet is enjoying the tadap of maan.even after maan saying ilu something is holding her back.looking forward to see what maan is going to say about the diary.excellent song choice.

dadi is a true magician,it looks like dev got his charming personality gene from dadi.she just makes the person forget their pain.dadi and adi relation was too good.adi suffered a lot in his life.hope he gets all the happiness from now on.

part 65(2)-sumeet is a 🤬.he has the audacity to talk to maan about dowry.it seems like he is keeping on eye on kabir and maithili.

how dare he bad mouth about megha 😡

hats off to maithili she kneed him in his private.that monster deserves it 👏

it's pity that maithili stopped kabir,but in a way it's good why stain u r hands for that monster.my fav line-

"Aaj se ek aurat ko kamzor samajhne ki galti kabhi mat karna. Itne saalo tak samaj aur sanskar ki wajah se main chup thi. Ab aap mere koi nahi hai. Koi nahi. Samajh gaye? Na samaj aap ko bachayega na mere sanskar mujhe rokenge" 👏

loved the girls bonding scene 😊

maneet part left me speechless.it's true that when u r on the verge of loosing someone forever it doesn't matter who says first and how and where they say it.u just want the person to know how much u love them.

part 66(1)-the update was awesome.loved maneet moments.lol our devious dev is back.loved the way he teased maan.our jhalli bambi is soo innocent yaar.

with out thinking geet gave a promise to maan,lets see what he is going to do.excellent song choice for the update.my fav line in the update-

Aadmi beemar kyun padta hai, after all; not that he was beemar, but still? It is only to get some pampering, some cuddling, some love. Par nahi! Samajthi nahi hai kuch! 🤣

part 67-haiyeee dadi and her nautanki 😆.sach me she is too good.she is my fav charecter of this story. i cannot wait ,omg maan is going to propose to geet at Taj.my fav lines in this update-

Savitri, I tell myself, you are a born actress. Go for it.

I am so excited I want to do a somersault, but not yet Savitri, I tell myself. At least find some juicy details out, before starting to dream of those beautiful grandchildren.

Oooh! I want to stomp my foot at his secretiveness. Hadd hai! Daadima sab set up karti hai and no juicy details for Daadi.(that's so true,she is the one who brought geet to kc and km)

part 67(2)-i am speechless, totally speechless after reading this update.the way u potrayed maneet's feelings are absolutly brilliant.Taj is like a lovers temple and maan expressed all his love and a future to geet in here.loved the pictures.excellent song choice for the update.

part 68-comment on the blog

thx for the updates,loved it.

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sneha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1135

gosh.. sumeet is back this man had the dares to ask dowry frm msk...
maithili taught good lesson to him . fab..
maaneet part is very emotional.. its true in deed.. no angoti no roses no anything r greater than love
n the proposal.. i loved it.. a very romantic one infrnt of taj in full moon.. hayee mein marjawaaa

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deep_eye

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1136

Amazing FF...
So romantic Proposal...
Beautifully Written...

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DimaagKaKeeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1137

I can never have enough of Maaneet moments. But wonder why Geet needed to know when exactly he fall for her? Pyaar karta hai this feeling n fact should be enough for her. But yeah Maan should tell her about the dairy, it would be better to say it himself than creating any MU. And loved Tara teasing Geet moment. Seems like Tara is getting too desparate to meet her sister. I cant wait for Megha's reaction over this. Khuranas are really compassionate n generous n open hearted people. They welcome n make everyone theirs once they feel a connection n if saamne wala is not accepting or acknowledging it then they also know how to get them being accepted. They are truly gem of a family. Loved seeing the bond Adi share with Dadima n the love she showers on him. This small period of separation is gonna be tough for Maaneet specially after confessing just 3 days before. And i really liked the moment when Geet said Maan.. Mera Maahi even in her sleep just with Maan's one touch. Mishty n Maahi's love story is getting too interesting.

Though i hated the guts of Sameer i loved Maithili's courage at the end and also how Kabir stood for his mother this time unlike past. I loved his decision of not taking a single money from Khurans else he wont marry Megha n i really admired him today. And the end of this part was applauding n proud of Maithili for finally voicing n growing up a spine n standing for what is right. And more important i loved the fact that is was done without Maan's help. But being the brother he is Megha's i loved his warning to *beep* of a man Sumeet. Though i do want Summet to suffer real bad now.

That silent lovemaking was ummm hawt. But i think Maan should definitely thank SRK for his awesome physique he has made to impress his Geet. If not for SRK he would have never gone back to his tai chi sessions. Anyways it was great progress to see the fire setting up at both side as first it was only Maan but now even Geet is burning with desire n passion for her Maahi which is good to see. Maan's promise to himself of having Geet equally drawned in passion n desire for him is getting true too early now after all her mind is clear now, thanks to Tara.

Its actually true that with friends u tend to forget your problems, tensions, stress, fears everything. And it glad to see Megha having two friends in Geet n Tara. Loved seeing them both pampering Megha and with time Megha joining them forgetting about Sumeet n his ill language n meanie side. Though m wondering does Geet knows about what relation Megha shares with Tara n about her past? And that theif who snatched Megha's chain, did u added it for some reason, like for some connection to Thakurs? And in all the happy moments that flight being missing news was a shocker n Dadima collapsing was another but thankfully you spared Dadima. Seeing Geet not been able to reach Maan in hospital room n all victims, strecher n blood was heart wrenching n scary simultaneously. I have this weird fear of seeing too much blood but i loved how she stood strong, brave and just paryed to her Babaji keeping faith in him n face the situation alone with no one assuring her. And its true situations like this where you feel you might lose your love ones only makes u realize that people means a lot more important than any materialistic things. Geet who was kinda stubborn in not letting her heart open up to Maan felt like saying everything she has stored up in this one moment n dint even waste a second cos of the fear of losing him n losing a chance to tell him about her feelings was much bigger than anything. Seeing Maan consoling Geet n assuring her he is fine was heart warming n m sure even he might have got scared seeing death so close to him n yet he was here supporting her. You really scared me with the end. I can never say what might come up in next part of the update. One moment all were happy shappy n enjoying the evening n next moment you made it all scary, fearful n heart in mouth update.

Maan did that Darji se baat ki hai talks just to get her attention diverted from being sad n gloomy or did he really meant it? Cos she immediately forgot her stress n i loved to see Maan teasing her n her fake anger in return with pouting n all. Dev too forgot the tensions once Dr discharged Maan n was back to his self n if Maan loves teasing Geet he thought of teasing Maan, not bad. But when Dev thought that he had to belofy papad to get his Tara where was Maan got Geet easily i felt it someone please tell him the silent love story of Maaneet n what all problems they had n m sure he would say he got Tara quite easily compared to Maan. If some human being were villains in Dev-Tara's LS then destiny was in Maaneet's LS. Loved Maan's sulking, desparation to see Geet, annoyed n frustrated over the fact all came to him but Geet once they came home. How innocently hopeful he was that she would come n shower all her love, care, concern n pamper him but she had other plans of playing antakshri with Dev. Though after coming down Maan was showing indifference but Dev ki nigahon se bach nahi paaya Maan babu n loved how he tricked Maaneet n put them in tight situation n fled away. He is super cute when in his mischievious best. Geet fled before giving in in her desires toh Maan couldnt control n aaya piche piche to get his share of kisses n tricked Geet with his stubborness for making her do anything he wishes. And all of sudden m reminded of Shasha. Wonder what would be her reaction when she comes to know about Maaneet being together? Anyways jaate jaate his teaching Geet about the good night kiss was cute. It was light hearted update with all the teasing n ahem moments after the scary one.

Can i please have this Dadima for me? She is super cool. I loved her nautankis n drama she does n tricks her grandsons. Everytime i read about her my respect for her grow ten folds. Loved the way she yet again got something out from Maan about his proposal plans without even showing on her face her real motives. And Taj mei propose? Haayeee i remember when he had taken her to Humayun's tomb she had expressed her wish to visit Taj as she hasnt been there n then n there he had promised to himself that he would take her to Taj once. I remember his small small promises he made to himself, like that one too taking her to Mumbai beach n walking on it hand n hand. This man is actually romantic n like dadima even i cant keep up with the excitement. She is such a kid at heart, too adorable. Her wishes to have great grand children already is so damn cute n funny. And it seems Maan doesnt like to spend a single moment in his own bedroom, early morning aa gaye to his Geet. But that 'zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi aur har raat tumpe khatam' send me back to that official date of Maaneet's in GHSP. Again one of the most beautiful episodes n the dialogues Maan had n with so much passion, admiration n intensity he had spoken it in this particular episode, he had won over me forever in that instant. It was simply magical.

I m SPEECHLESS Avi, sometimes words really seems short n m sorry no words nothing could described this update n how beautifully you have written it. Every Taj pics along with Maaneet letter scene pics, it made the update just Magical for me. Just too perfect to be true. Every lines n emotions were depicted with so much intensity that it could be feel n reached right to my heart. Out of this world update, i dont wanna write any scene in particular to tell u what i liked or which scene i enjoyed the most cos i absolutely loved everything you have penned down here, Applause.

Haayeee the whole night spending in each others arms without any disturbance was so mesmerizing n peaceful away from all hustle bustle. Loved how he carried her to swing n both spend their time silently with peace. The morning had quite shocking surprises for both though, Maan in his dreams did some deeds n she too was equally involved. So that was wrong of Geet for accusing Maan like that when she herself had equally participated in doing the deed. And her goody goody behavior was related but its also true that she too have gone to that forbidden part of wild thoughts they why this nautanki? Anyways m all game for this silent challenge Maan has given to Geet but the words u have used were making me laugh - Mission Doe Seduction n Maan-Ness, hilarious. Oh god poor Maan planned so much n what he got, Nakul ka face in morning instead of his usual Mishty. Seeing his oh so stratergy failing n being ignored by her completely was too funny. It was just not Maan's day i guess, no breakfast then no lunch too, uppar se Nakul ka face again.

So Geet thinks having such bad thoughts before marriage is not right, but cant help with her own cravings, need n wants n so planned to not look at his eyes as those looks at her are enough to get her defenses down. Tara please knock some sense in her again she badly is in need of it. Thoug it would be fun to see her looking at something else while talking to him only if she does talks to him and Maan would do a bhangra by just knowing that she did notice him all decked up in black but managed controlled her feelings from going over board. He just need to work more hard to get his innocent Geet back in his arms or either start doing medication to be focused. After such a dhansu super romantic update this one was hilarious. Lion and Doe on a missions, one is getting other in his arms n other is avoiding n ignoring his advances.

-Sanjana!

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AAINAPATEL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1138

O!o!o! Yiiipppeee... Ye maan ne wo wala hi letter sunaya... I so much wanted geet 2 read that letter nd yesss u made maan read 4 her... Thnks alot 4 dis letter part...
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The updates were awesome nd made me speech less... This maaneet r makng me curl into my bed more nd more 2 cont. Reading... Maan babu kya kamal ka proposal diya h... Wah wah wah wah... I lvd dese all updates... Geet jhalli ab to thoda bol deti,, khair wo to maan h jo teri naina-di-bhasha b pad leta h aur samaj b leta h... Us ka pyar h jo tu apne aap ko itna lucky samaj ri h...
Kya song select kiya h avi... *A BIG HUG 2 U 4 THIS SONG AND 4 PROPOSAL AT TAJ MAHAL* But i actually want to say k i missed maan's shairy in dis updt... They alwayz make me smile nd i lv each of his shairies... The best line of these updates were ''AISE GUDNIT BOLENGE TO NEEND KIS KO AAYEGI'' & ''ABI MEIN GUDNIT SE BAHAR NI AAYI AUR YE GUD NIT BOL RE H'' OMG I can undrstnd bechari geet ka kya haal hoga... Maan yaar thoda to taras kha us bechari pe... And 1 thng more that i like was geet saying NA PHOOL NA IZHAAR NA ANGOTHI MUJE KUCH NI CHAHIYE BAS AAP CHAHIYE MAAN,,, oye geet aa gayi na line pe bichare ko bht tdpaya na tu ne... Kitne din se bol raha tha ''ek bar bol do'' ''plz boldo'' par ni... Nd hahahahaha ye maan ko b masti kam ni h,,, bechari tuje apne dil ki bat bol ri h nd tuje masti sujhi h... Q sata raha h us ko daarji ko ulta bol diya,,, see my poor geet got angry naa!! Nd dev what a play to tease maan,,, u usd perfct song dude... Nd finally MSK came out nd geet ki phusss... But ye kya dis geet ws nt angry ye to teko sone bol ri h... Hahahaha... Bichara maan teri Daadi sai me CID officer h... Nice daadi kya help kya h...
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Apart 4m maaneet anothr gd news ye kabir ka sadu baap out of story... Nd wah maithli kya kick di h...
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Prsnl note: all credits gvn 2 maaneet or n e odr characters are actuall 4 the writer means Avi...

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suyoha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1139

hmm i liked all updates in this thread

but my favourite is taj wala propose

every girl has some fantasies,small or big but they do have it

and when someone special fulfill it that is like flying in heaven

and now this is same for geet

their confession ,kiss everything is magical

maan doin all this in his dreams and geet out of control yet she blasts on maan for doing all this to her.she is carried away and not that she is not dreaming it at that time

but our miss goody is ready to fight so that she can avoid him

but realy that part was awesome and after that maans seduction plan which failed terribly and by whom his nakul hahahah i enjoyed it

after seeing maan like this in hospital she confessed that she only wants him and he is more important then any materialistic thing for her

the way kabir stands for her mother and megha against his father is commendable

he is a matured man now and not a college goier who hangs around his rich friends

and these changes makes him stand out

but how shamelees is his father returning back and claimining again and insulting megha and hurting maithili

but i like maithilis little stunt on him,he got what he deserved

maan and geet silent lovers and their silent lovemaking ,i wonder whether they do it after marriege in real or in dreams silently

bond between tara ,geet and megha is something which can not be described in words

tara is spending time with her little sister who dont know anything about her family

but what happens when she came to know about it

geets buddha mil gaya song makes maan offended but she even doesnt realise it

such is our little innocent geet,who ones asks maan that katoge to nahi,tara di ne kaha tha

but what follows after that song and geets realisation that maan must be offended makes her thud,i mean maan thud

Edited by suyoha - 11 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1140

Thanks for the lovely comments ladies

will catch up on replies once I am back home

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