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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Congrats on the new thread...

That was an awesome update... and a first change in their relation from maan's side...

He just didnt know or realize the change she brought in his life till the moment he found her missing in her room...

All that started as a gesture of humanity changed into something so deep for him... she has become a necessity in his life for him to smile and not feel lonely...

i loved the part where in you had explained the transformation of maan's emotions.. first he was eager to see her.. then the panic of her missing.. the happiness on seeing her.. and then the realization.. it was just amazing re...

And so true, it was not the physical attraction, it was something more deep that connected him to her...

Loved it.. continue real soon..

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

congo for new thread
geet entered maansi room and played there
thank god maan didnt get angry

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

nice part...glad that maan wasnt angry on her for entering his childs room😊

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maahi zaidi

@zaidi98

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

yuppiiee update..

amazing update...

its g8 dat geet came out of da room.. herself... n thnk God no one was dere out...

geet n maan's daughter room.. n she loved da room...

maan came home all excitedd... bt got shocked n worried not seeing geet in her room.. or anywhere...

maan relization.. dat geet is now become an imp part of his life..

love da update..

n im eagerly 2 knw whether she gona ask maan about dose pics or not..

w8ng 4 da update..

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Manisha Govindraj

@...sharanya...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

awsum update

maan ws overwhelmed

just luvd it

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Oh dat was one emotional lov filld updt...
wen she entrred maansis room I thought geet aaj toh tu nahi bachegi maan ke gussesay...but..yaha toh ulta hua...
maan understood wat he feels for geet...
I jus lovd d way u portrayed maan s feeln..nd yes he passd d physical test..
am lovn dis turn of story...

Really Neha ..a big Muaaahhh for commin wit such a concepts. ...nd such a passionate..writing style.. 🤗

Okk enough of my blabber. ..b4u get borred...🤣

Upps!!!! I forgot..congrats for new thread. .

WAITIN for next part 🥳

Edited by Desire6 - 11 years ago

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nemra

@nemra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

loved it aloottt...
beautifully writtn...
so emotional n touchy...
loved it nehaaa...<3 <3 <3

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

wow it was amazing. i loved it so much. maan was so much worried after not seeing geet at room. finally when she founded maan was relaxed. today he get to know geet's importance in his life. i was surprised when maan was not angry on geet for entering in her daughter's room. waiting for next dear

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

awesome part

loved it

geet ventured maan's daughter room and played with toys

she slept on maan's daughter's bed holding teddy...

maan came from office and went to check geet .he didn't find her in her room and searched for her entire mansion ...lastly he found her in his daughter room sleeping peacefully...he actually scared to loose her he hugged her tightly and taken her to her room and slept with her holding her near...

waiting for the next part