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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima_FM


sorry 4 using the hate word😳
base and criticize u have taken the words seriously that was just an dialogue 😆 nothing else
if i explain his behavior it will become a FF
still will try to explain to u in few word, u r right he just few years older than her only few years don't make him so big😉,
in this OS he is bit reserve and shy type of character not like 21st century guy who often talk with the girls see girl frequently.
and now u ask me if he shy and reserve than what about the physical relationship with geet. In that time physically thing was rarely unknown, not like today go to net and u will come to 4rm friends or even today 5th standard children know dating and all which in our age also we don't know😆
At that time elderly ppl use to say that thing that also after marriage means before sughaag raat
hope i make it clear
becoz when maan have physical, he was clueless what he had done to her
and geet asked him, becoz she thought she having pain during interc*** when he say tear in his she thought he was also having pain that was an innocent question.
and 1 more thing i wanted to clear Maan wanted to make geet comfortable
he was staying away from but not fully separation they was sharing same room, same bed
he wanted to give some time to Geet so she can accept him fully
he wasn't aware of the what his family had said to her 'she couldn't make happy to her husband'

don't compare girl maturity with the boy maturity
even in today 15 years old girl married and having kid
where as 24 year old boy they have still mood playing they don't have that much sense of handling a family , not everyone is alike,
in this OS still i tried to make Maan more mature

hope i have answered ur quires properly 😳
anything else feel free to ask
truly speaking you are the only 1 person whose comment i eagerly waits
i never feel bad with any of your queries 😊


thanx for explaining...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Waiting for the next update!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3
nice part...
he misunderstood her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
very emotional part...
beautiuflly written...
thnx for maan pov
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice part...
so maan is not at fault... but hw come he doesnot know anything abt wat happened to his wife... is there any reason for tat too... r he know everything hw his family was torturing her...???


hope there is no bad news in the letter... n wish Maan reunites with Geet soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh man this was awesome... thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

Intense part !!!

Gap in communication, cost their relation.
Nicely written.



Thanks dear😊
Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry. actually i forget that this one is based on 1967 time....
so maan try to do something for his wife but this society rules & his family greediness bound him
but still he try to take care of her
brilliant dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
so nice
wating for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update!!! Beautifully written!!!
U are a great writer...Felt the emotions of Maan...
Continue soon!!!

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