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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: lehr
its emotional dear

your 1 word wala comment turned into 3 words😆

THanks dear😊

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: dolly10
Awesome part

Thanks dear😊

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

I don't really know what to say...

a lone tear escaped from his eyes and fall on Geet 's cheek. She looked at him concerned 'apko kai dard ho raha hai'...

this is how Geet asked him when she felt he is crying...why can't he ask her when she cried...didn't he know that girls feel pain during first interc****e...he just left her instead of making her comfortable... after that day he never asked her her reason to cry...if a 16 years old girl has so much understanding then why can't he have...and then he is complaining that she never share her problem with him...

now it is already more than 2 years she went why he didn't come to take her back...why he never supported her when she was tortured by her in-laws who are happened to be his family...

nice update...

thanx for pm...

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

I don't really know what to say...

a lone tear escaped from his eyes and fall on Geet 's cheek. She looked at him concerned 'apko kai dard ho raha hai'...

this is how Geet asked him when she felt he is crying...why can't he ask her when she cried...didn't he know that girls feel pain during first interc****e...he just left her instead of making her comfortable... after that day he never asked her her reason to cry...if a 16 years old girl has so much understanding then why can't he have...and then he is complaining that she never share her problem with him...

now it is already more than 2 years she went why he didn't come to take her back...why he never supported her when she was tortured by her in-laws who are happened to be his family...

nice update...

thanx for pm...

in this update what did u find in Maan behavior

do u still hate Maan in his update?

ur question are all reasonable

every1 asking same question

if i don't give answer till the end than bash me or criticize me i won't have any problem😊

becoz i have written such way that u r going to hooked until the end of the story

may other writer write in easy way not like me gura pirake

so will u read till the end 😳

i know u r becoming impatient

even me also when a writer is doing like i also become impatient

only this one i am giving answer for ur convenience

she married at 16 now she is 18

few months passed on the relationship and dowry things hope u understand, few months passed with the like an normal relation for heir

minimum 1 year 1/2 months she was in the laws house

and they separated not more than six months

hope i had made it clear

next u r all quires answer will be given in the update

Thanks dear😊

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: aparna3011
sad

Thanks dear😊

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: fatima_FM

in this update what did u find in Maan behavior
do u still hate Maan in his update?
ur question are all reasonable
every1 asking same question
if i don't give answer till the end than bash me or criticize me i won't have any problem😊
becoz i have written such way that u r going to hooked until the end of the story
may other writer write in easy way not like me gura pirake
so will u read till the end 😳
i know u r becoming impatient
even me also when a writer is doing like i also become impatient
only this one i am giving answer for ur convenience
she married at 16 now she is 18
few months passed on the relationship and dowry things hope u understand, few months passed with the like an normal relation for heir
minimum 1 year 1/2 months she was in the laws house
and they separated not more than six months
hope i had made it clear
next u r all quires answer will be given in the update
Thanks dear😊

hate is very strong word dear...I can't hate Maan if he even kill Geet...🤢

but yes as human and I love him so I want him to act reasonable...

I never bash or criticize writers...never...u can open any post written by me...I never do such low class act...

but yes I ask questions regarding characters of the story when I am not convinced with their behavior and who is better to answer other than the writer of that particular story😆...so I ask my queries and I don't even expect them to answer everytime...I am very obliged that u r answering my queries...😊

ok I get it that they are separated for just 6 months...

what I am confused with Maan's behavior is that if he really loved her then when she cried during first int******se then why he didn't try to make her comfortable...he just left silently without asking her the reason of her crying😡...I don't remember whether u told about his age in story or not😕 but I assume that he must be some years older to her...if 16 yrs old girl can ask him ---why he is crying if he also feel pain then why can't he...he should have more common sense than her...whole update from Maan's POV is not really able to convince me about Maan being good human-being...😒

yes I will read it until end.😊...I can't leave Maaneet stories.😳...if sometimes I can't respond early it may be because of net problem or me being busy...

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: punam2712
maan's feelings were awesome

Thanks dear😊

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

hate is very strong word dear...I can't hate Maan if he even kill Geet...🤢
but yes as human and I love him so I want him to act reasonable...
I never bash or criticize writers...never...u can open any post written by me...I never do such low class act...
but yes I ask questions regarding characters of the story when I am not convinced with their behavior and who is better to answer other than the writer of that particular story😆...so I ask my queries and I don't even expect them to answer everytime...I am very obliged that u r answering my queries...😊

ok I get it that they are separated for just 6 months...
what I am confused with Maan's behavior is that if he really loved her then when she cried during first int******se then why he didn't try to make her comfortable...he just left silently without asking her the reason of her crying😡...I don't remember whether u told about his age in story or not😕 but I assume that he must be some years older to her...if 16 yrs old girl can ask him ---why he is crying if he also feel pain then why can't he...he should have more common sense than her...whole update from Maan's POV is not really able to convince me about Maan being good human-being...😒

yes I will read it until end.😊...I can't leave Maaneet stories.😳...if sometimes I can't respond early it may be because of net problem or me being busy...

sorry 4 using the hate word😳

base and criticize u have taken the words seriously that was just an dialogue 😆 nothing else

if i explain his behavior it will become a FF

still will try to explain to u in few word, u r right he just few years older than her only few years don't make him so big😉,

in this OS he is bit reserve and shy type of character not like 21st century guy who often talk with the girls see girl frequently.

and now u ask me if he shy and reserve than what about the physical relationship with geet. In that time physically thing was rarely unknown, not like today go to net and u will come to 4rm friends or even today 5th standard children know dating and all which in our age also we don't know😆

At that time elderly ppl use to say that thing that also after marriage means before sughaag raat

hope i make it clear

becoz when maan have physical, he was clueless what he had done to her
and geet asked him, becoz she thought she having pain during interc*** when he say tear in his she thought he was also having pain that was an innocent question.

and 1 more thing i wanted to clear Maan wanted to make geet comfortable

he was staying away from but not fully separation they was sharing same room, same bed

he wanted to give some time to Geet so she can accept him fully

he wasn't aware of the what his family had said to her 'she couldn't make happy to her husband'

don't compare girl maturity with the boy maturity

even in today 15 years old girl married and having kid

where as 24 year old boy they have still mood playing they don't have that much sense of handling a family , not everyone is alike,

in this OS still i tried to make Maan more mature

hope i have answered ur quires properly 😳

anything else feel free to ask

truly speaking you are the only 1 person whose comment i eagerly waits

i never feel bad with any of your queries 😊