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daredevilisback

@daredevilisback

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

yr I m loving this more n more...
awesome update
maan's feeling👍🏼

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Purpleparadise

@Purpleparadise

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Emotional part...waiting for next update

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

My eyes filled wid tears while reading this ..

Poor geet had beared alot..
Bcoz of dowry..

How cheap this society is...

Emotiomal part..
Plz update soon

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mandeep

@mandy15

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

fabulous update dear :)

superb :)

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

so emotional...
geet bared all this alone...poor her..
this dowry system n so called society!!!

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

now i understand better...after reading your given note...

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

nice one...waiting for the next part

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: fatima_FM

😆😆😆 i was literally laughing after reading ur comment
i was thinking who is this mannu😆
Thanks dear😊

so u got now na who is my maanu🤣
donnt worry
u will b soon habitual to it🤣🤣🤣

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

hayee rabba
geet poor baby has beard so much n maanu being a shy boy
iski shyness ki toh mai, kya yaar he cant even stand for her wife
he tried once bt he has to try more
uff ya i know its about not 21 century
i felt horrible thinking abt the condition of a girl at that time n yeh toh i never imagine, a girl can bear so much bt its true many girls had gone through this at those time n may b still going through
mujhe nhi pta kya bolu me speech less
oye dont make me cry n all
bt still lvd it😆😆
ab how they will reunite
hope he do something
gadhe bhookhe geets' in law grrr😡😡😡
these kind of people should b friend in hot hot oil
n n throw their fried pieces in front of dogs
oh teri even dog wont eat those sada hua pieces cholo u can do wtever u want with those pieces😉

Edited by Tia-AFreeBird - 11 years ago

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Fatima we readers read what u writers write...

when this story started it has negativity towards Maan...but when story started progressing then it is diverted towards Maan being innocent not evil...

other incidents about Maan trying to support Geet and trying to make reason with his parents, Maan feeling Geet is in pain and then he tried to make her confortable...these all I agree...he must have registered his annoyance to his parents but I understand they shut him off...he must have tried to make Geet comfortable but he never wanted to make her obliged to himself so he just make excuse of work but when Geet didn't sleep then he shouted...

these all make me really happy that he may be soft towards Geet...but two things are bugging me...one is that he left her in pain and didn't ask her...this gesture is not connected with age or any era...this is connected with humanity...this is very normal and instant gesture that if somebody cry in front of us we immediately ask the reason like Geet asked him why he is crying...is he having pain...he knows about physical relation but he don't know that girl will feel pain...and if he don't know then also seeing tears he should ask...

second in this update he asked his father-in-law for fulfilling his parents demands...how can he...if he can't do any good then why he has to do bad...if he is so concerned being sold into dowry then how can he support this system...if he protest then is it that his parents will kill him...no...person needs courage to protest wrong...instead he start supporting...

then from that dowry money his parents spending on enjoying...and he is taking part in that celebrations...that time may be boys can't go against their parents but here we are talking about Maan...if he can't protest against wrongs then he is absolutely wrong...the person who can't protect his wife he is wrong whatever the reason...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...