VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19 - Page 57

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Posted: 10 years ago
updating pt 76 tonight
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 10 years ago
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nice part dear...feeling bad for veer...but maan being a friend showed him the right path...veer discussing the matter with sahana aunty...now who is this masked man in maaneet house...hope maaneet would be safe from that milk...u stop at wrong point dear...now am curious to know who drank that milk...continuee soonnn dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
now sahana helping veer
she is revealing her past
who is that masked man

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update, feeling bad for for veer
hope maaneet will not drink the milk continue soon
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nahi hota intezaar yaar


jaldi update do na
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veer and maan's convo was very emotional. maan's advice to veer is correct. now sahana is going to help veer as maaneet's life is in danger. oh no yeh kaun aagaya ghar ke andhar. and now who is going to drink that milk. sach mein devil ho aise stage par koi rokhtha hai kya😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
kisiko kuch nehi hona chahiye plz...hws d secuirity...anybody can enter...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 75
nice...
Maan gave his opinion to Veer...
cont soon...
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RECAP

Here in maaneet's bedroom, Maan dialled to the kitchen to bring lunch to their room.On that time a man in an mask entered the kitchen. The servant who was setting lunch tray went back to pour some Milk to a glass. The servant kept the Milk glass in the tray and went up to keep Rotis in the tray when the masked man put some powder inside the Milk and stirred it and hid himself immediately. The servant came and took the tray setting it completely and walked towards Maaneet's bedroom!

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PART 76

Sahana collapsed to the bench clutching her chest with wide eyes.Shock had been etched in her face.Veer came forward and held her elbow and asked with concern,"Are u ok aunty?"

Sahana gulped her saliva and asked,"U dint spoke abt this to Maan!"

Veer said,"No i dint speak abt this with Maan.In fact he dont even know that am still in Army.I have to lie him that i retired.It was one of my plans to camouflage Major Shatru and his accomplice.

Sahana grabbed his collar and turned him towards her face and spoke,"U r not gonna mention abt this to Maan crystal?"

Veer was shocked to see the bossiness in her which he never saw this till now.But replied,"Clear!"

Sahana tightened her grip in his collar but started mumbling,"We gonna handle him!nothing will happen to my family when am present!I dont want to see Maan in tension and Geet...she's pregnant..slight tension can lead complications to her.I will take care of my family.He cant and wont touch my family when am present there!"

Veer nodded to her words when she asked him,"How did he get hold of my family Veer?"

Veer spoke,"He's Major Shatru aunty,u know most abt him rather than me!"

Sahana said sternly,"Yeah,i know him and i wont let him harm my son's family!"Immediately she counted something in her fingers and said,"10 girls were involved in this case Veer.One is murdered...!"

Veer said immediately to correct her count,"Three Captain!"

Sahana asked distractedly,"Three!"Veer answered,"Yes Captain,three!Captain Sarah Khan,Captain Ananya Agnihotri,Captain Lalitha Joshi!"

Sahana was shocked and spoke,"What?Captain Lalitha Joshi wasnt the victim of Major Shatru!"

But Veer answered immediately,"But she helped u collect witnesses against him!"

Sahana said sadly,"Right!U know my case history!Now left are Captain Pammi Singhal urf Singhania(Geet's chachiji),Captain Nainakshi Nair,Captain Kamiya Kaur,Captain Savitri Poovaiah,Captain Shweta Chengappa,Captain Deepika Choudhary,Captain Sherlee D'Souza!"

Veer nodded at her.On that time servant reached the tray of glass of Milk with lunch and gave it to Maan.Maan who dint know anything made Geet to drink the Milk first.He fed the lunch lovingly while Geet threw all the tantrums.But Maan was stubborn but patient he made her sit on his lap and fed her just like a small baby.Well the baby cocooned inside her kicked several times for her dada's remarks and Geet's usual cute pout made the lunch having program more enlightened.Maan enjoyed every bit of it as her tantrums made him hard in every bit.His cell craved for her love and she showered it and filled his every cell with her love.After their lunch their passion started once again.But in Naina's room she was clutching her stomach and was writhing in pain.At once she cant able to resist it so she reached the empty glass of Milk which she drank now and threw it on the ground.Both Maaneet's passion seized and they looked towards the sound.Meanwhile Sahana and veer who were planning how to protect Maaneet from Major Shatru too heard the noise.Maan wore his clothes in record time and ran towards Naina's room.When he entered her room the sight was a shock.Naina was bleeding and had clutched her stomach.

Naina spoke pointing towards the empty glass,"Mmm-aaa-nnn-Vvv-eee-rrr-jjj-iii!"

Maan screamed,"Naina!"And ran towards her.

Meanwhile Veer and Sahana entered the farm house and ran towards Naina's room.On that time Geet walked towards Naina's room and saw the sight with shock.Maan cant able to handle the situation seeing bleeding Naina and she came to his aid.

Geet immediately took a big cotton pack and inserted inside Naina's panty and said,"Maan,call the doctor immediately!"

Naina held her hand tightly and whimpered with pain while Geet spoke stroking her hairs,"Nothing will happen to baby Naina,hold on!"

Naina nodded with the look It-Is-Too-Late.Meanwhile Sahana and Veer entered the room and was shocked.Naina was still writhing in pain.

Veer immediately cocooned her inside his embrace and asked,"What happened Naina?"

Veer saw Naina pointing towards the glass.He took it and looked at it suspiciously.

He saw some residue and asked,"What did u drank from this?"

Geet answered,"I think Milk!"Doctor came on that time and started examining Naina and declared to take her to the hospital.Immediately Naina was transported to the hospital by Maan and Veer and she was dragged inside the OT next second.

After sometime doctor came outside and said to Veer,"Captain,poison has been spread over the baby and uterus.Now u decide immediately or else u may loss baby and Naina too!"

Veer was shocked hearing this and collapsed on the chair.

Maan was immediately beside him and said,"Veer,nothing will happen to Naina!"

But doctor said firmly,"Decide very soon Captain,or else u may loss both!"

Doctor once again entered the OT and Veer sat in numb state.In the moment he felt he's losing his half body.Yes Naina was his half body,his half soul his partner.Maan shook his shoulder and made him to come to the present world.

Immediately the same doctor came to them and asked,"What u have decided Captain?Naina or baby?"

Before Maan would speak Veer's lips said,"Naina!"

Doctor nodded and ran inside the OT.Veer's eyes filled with tears and it poured down.

Maan felt it and wiped it and hugged him tight and said,"U have took the right decision Veer.Dont feel guilty!"

Veer cried,"But it was my flesh Maan!"

Maan said wiping his tears,"Sshhh!"

After sometime Veer came out of Maan's embrace and the OT light flashed Green.

Both looked up and saw doctor coming around and said to Veer,"Naina is out of danger Captain!I have taken the Uterus!Now she cant have babies further.She's been shifted to the ward,u meet her and come to my office.I want to speak with u Captain!"

Both Maan and veer nodded to the doctor and went to meet Naina who was in sedatives.Naina was sleeping peacefully while Veer looked at her guiltily.Tears poured down from his black eyes and it fell on her hand.Her fingers moved and she slowly opened her eyes.Veer came to the focus and he hugged her tightly.

Veer mumbled,"Am sorry jaan,i was irresponsible once again!"

Naina nodded no to him and pecked his lips to soothe him.Here Maan called home & said that everything is fine to Geet as he dont want to mention what happened to Geet as she was pregnant.But Geet was Geet she understood in Maan's tone only that something's wrong.Geet dint insist him to speak but decided to wait.Here Veer was broken from inside but one thing was messing his brains.

Ringing the conscious bell and he asked,"Naina,u had decided to abort the baby then why was this hurry?"

Naina nodded no and spoke,"No Veer,u remember that i had given u this weekend time then how can i abort the baby?Something was there in that Milk which i drank and our baby!...our baby!"

She cried immediately.Veer nodded no to her and wiped her tears and cocooned her inside his warm arms.But his mind was the mess once again.He was confused now.Who want to kill his baby.No one knew that Naina was pregnant except him and Maan's family.Then who want to kill his baby...or else it was targetted to someone for Naina became the victim.So many questions were swooping inside his mind.After sometime nurse came and injected a pain killer which made Naina to go to sleep.Veer left her and walked towards doctor's cabin with Maan.

Doctor said seeing them,"Come in guys, i need to talk to u urgently!"

Both Veer and Maan sat while doctor spoke,"Captain,were u aware of ur baby's condition?"

Veer said,"Yes and i had decided to abort the baby for Naina's health!"

Doctor asked,"Then why u decided to abort the baby today only?U should have waited for the right time may be tomorrow or day after tomorrow!Why dint u wait?"

Veer was shocked hearing it and asked,"No doctor,even Naina had given me ultimatum till this weekend to think abt baby and i was abt to give approval to this abortion!"

Doctor was shocked,"What?But Captain the medicine which she took is a strong one that's why i was forced to remove Uterus!"

Both Veer and Maan were shocked while doctor continued,"Look captain when that medicine went inside it instantly killed the baby and it started to affect uterus too.If u dint bring her on time then her life would be danger!Ok,now whatever happened lets leave it.Just u be attentive to her Captain.She's fragile now.Am writing some Vitamin tablets,u give her in time and u can take her to home and mind u dont make her walk for atleast one week.She needs lost of rest and strength.Most importantly mental strength to overcome the pain!"

Veer nodded and take the prescription and went away.Maan was speaking abt the matter only but Veer dint give any attention and abruptly said,"I have some work maan,i'll finish it and join Naina and afterwards u!"

Before Maan reply Veer he got a phone.It was from Adi.

Adi stuttered,"Sir,is Sasha reached there?"

Maan answered,"No but why she was coming here?"

Adi said,"Sir,my accounts file was needed ur urgent signature.I said that i will go but she dint listen and said that she needs to talk with u.Is she reached sir?"

Maan said no but Veer heard their conversation and his eyes widened and before Maan would ask more he dragged Maan saying they need to reach home urgently.Maan was suspicious seeing Veer react oddly and asked what is the matter but he dint answer him and they reached KM.Here Geet who had seen Sasha enter the farm house ordered two cups of Tea and Black Coffee.Sasha who had seen the servant keeping the cups said to Geet to bring some files which Maan had brought as a homework.Geet went to her room to bring and seeing the coast is clear Sasha poured some powder in that too.When Veer entered then he saw Geet abt to sip the Tea and immediately ran in nano second and pushed the Tea from her hand.The cup fell on the ground and Tea spilled.Sasha who saw this tightened her fist glaring at Veer.

Veer glared back while Geet asked worriedly,"Everything is alright Veerji?"

Veer nodded and said lovingly,"Geet,baby will be troubling u by kicking so go and have rest!"

Geet pouted,"Yes Veerji,these days this little one has become so naughty!She only responds to her papa and kicks me!But why u pushed my Tea mug?I was having the mood of having cup of Tea now!"

Veer chuckled hearing her words but answered sweetly,"Am sorry dear,my hands were clumsy!"

Geet nodded meanwhile Maan entered and asked,"What happened buddy,u r acting so weirdly...?"

He abruptly stopped and looked towards Geet with alarm.Geet asked,"Is Naina bhabhi alright?"

Before Maan stutter Veer answered firmly,"She's ok Geet,dont worry!Now go and have rest!"

Geet nodded and turned to Maan,"Maan,Sasha has come here to get sign for xyz project.Have a look into that and return back to our holiday!"

Maan saw her displeasure abt the work and chuckled but cutely said with broad smile,"Your wish is my command my queen!"

Geet blushed furiously but walked slowly holding her baby bump.When Geet turned on that time Veer turned towards Sasha and gave a look which said back off u snake.Sahana saw all these incidents as she had got news of Naina's abortion from Maan and the way he kept his suspicions in front of her and Veer's reaction abt Geet's cup of Tea and the tug off far from Veer to Sasha and Sasha returning it back from her eye made her suspicious.

Precap-Veer looked towards the doctor who said,"This glass residue contains the very same abortion chemicals which Naina swallowed!


Edited by geetsrir.maan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

wow lovely emotional heart winching update..te way my sahana ki determination to protect her family was lovely emotional..omg naina drank te coffee which was to be for geet and she lost her baby and uterus , omg, if my maan cums to know he will burn him alive ..te way veer and naina ki pain was lovely heart winching..te way veer came to know abt shasha and saved geet at right time was lovely emotional.. veer for hsi friend's family he lost his, was heart winching..i love te update so much

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