VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19 - Page 59

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Posted: 10 years ago
god wat a shocking update sasha wanted to kill the baby and geet


thanks to naina she saved her but how will they protect geet and her baby now


getting quite interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional update😭



veer and naina lost baby😭



sasha is disguisting😡



veer save geet😊



update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
prt 75 ka comment fb par kr diya
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Posted: 10 years ago
poor naina
wo chahti thi ki baby ko abort krna bt aise nhi
geet bach gyi bt naina 😭 😭
iss shatru ki to mai
maan aur veer itni buri tarah se torture kare us shatru ke bache ko ki apne har janam mai wo chakka (sixer) hi bane
bloody s** maniac
itni gndi gndi galiyan nikal rhi h muh se
bt kya h yahn likh nhi skti
wating for nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
feeling bad fro veer n naina
thank god veer came on time
sasha ki toh mein
but y she want to harm geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 76
nice part...
poor Naina...
that was Sasha's doings?
damn her to hell...
Geet is safe though...
Veer better Maan at least now...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Both Updates were Fabuous and Heartwrenching
Naina and Veer had to lose their baby in such a terrible way and now
too Naina will not get pregnant again
I'm glad that Veer caught on quickly about Sasha and he even prevented
Geet from taking in the poison

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Posted: 10 years ago



RECAP

Geet blushed furiously but walked slowly holding her baby bump.When Geet turned on that time Veer turned towards Sasha and gave a look which said back off u snake.Sahana saw all these incidents as she had got news of Naina's abortion from Maan and the way he kept his suspicions in front of her and Veer's reaction abt Geet's cup of Tea and the tug off far from Veer to Sasha and Sasha returning it back from her eye made her suspicious.

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PART 77

Sasha walked outside the room taking the signature of Maan and immediately stopped seeing someone standing in front of the gate.

Sasha said folding her hands,"Madam Namaste!"(Hello Madam!)

It was Sahana who stood folding her hands across her chest.

Sahana said sarcastically,"Is tarah namaste karke aapne humein humaare umar ka ehsaas karaa diya!Behtar hota ki aap humein hello kehti,aapke dress ko bhi suit karta!"(U made me realise my age doing this namaste.It would be good if u said hello to me,that would matched ur dress too!)

Sasha gave a forced smile and lowered her hands.

Sasha was abt to walk when Sahana asked,"How's ur father Sasha?"

Sasha widened her eyes and looked around and stared at Sahana suspiciously.

Sahana asked,"Is he fine?"

Sasha dint answer but Sahana continued,"Well he will be fine after destroying my life!"

Sasha caught the last word and asked sternly,"What do u mean?"

Sahana said,"Nothing so important,dismiss!"

Sasha glared at her and walked faster.But Sahana's remark started to ring the bell.

Sasha thought,"What about madam was talking?That remark was dangerous as if dad had done the mistake.But what dad had done the mistake.One mistake made me the slave of that Major Shatru,now how much mistake i need to rectify which is committed by my father!"

Meanwhile Veer came there and asked,"Captain,where's Sasha?"

Sahana said,"She went Captain!Why?Do u wanted to talk to her?"

Veer said,"Yes!"

When Sahana asked,"What abt Captain?"

Veer said,"About Naina's abortion!"

Sahana was puzzled and asked,"What?But what is the connection between Sasha and Naina's abortion?"

Veer said,"Captain,i have doubt that Sasha is the accomplice of Major Shatru.That poison Milk was not for Naina but for Geet.Unfortunately i lost my baby becoz of that but i dont think Geet will be safer now further.She'll be in danger and the baby too!"

Sahana was shocked,"What?Sasha has become like his father!"

Veer was shocked and asked,"What do u mean Sasha has become like father?"

Sahana said,"Her father was the munshiji who was working under my family from 20 yrs.When i was young i always played with munshiji whenever my father and mother werent with me.But that as 20 yrs ago and Major Shatru made him towards him and munshiji destroyed my life."

Veer spoke to himself,"That means Karan was right!Sasha really wants Maan's life to be destroyed!"

Sahana asked,"But why?"Veer said,"Captain,she loves Maan and she can go any lengths to get him!Knowing this truth may be Major Shatru had made her as his accomplice!"

Sahana was shocked hearing the truth.Here Maan shifted Naina to her room while Geet came along to speak to her.She had got to know Naina's abortion and had come there to console her.She had spitted the news from Maan and he was cursing himself as he cant hide a single thing from his queen.Geet consoled Naina while Maan admired his jaan looking adorable and preaching Naina.Maan was totally crazy abt her and he was proud to accept it.Geet consoled Naina and walked towards courtyard in search of her Veerji.But her Veerji wasnt even thinking abt Naina and was discussing something with her MIL.When Sahana saw Geet then she became silent and Veer too.

Geet walked towards Veer and said,"Veerji,u are becoming heartless these days!"

Veer knew what she was talking about and spoke softly,"Geet,am unhappy that i lost my child but i cant sit like an drunkard old jerk.I need to think abt our life,that's why am here!"

Geet said sternly,"Good that u dint slip to remorse but in this situation u need to think abt Naina bhabhi too!She needs ur love and co-operation!Now go and meet Naina first and plan out with mom whatever u r abt to do!"

Veer gave a soft small smile and said saluting her,"Ur wish is my command my best friend's queen!"

Geet's cheeks turned red hearing Veer's soft taunt and cutely glared at him.Sahana chuckled hearing Veer's remark and Geet pouted looking at her smirk.Veer walked towards his room while Geet slowly walked towards her room holding her cute baby bump.Next morning Veer went to his headquarters holding that poison glass and gave it to the forensic lab for testing.Meanwhile Maan transferred Naina,Geet and Sahana to the KM back once again and called the staff of KC to the out house.Here in forensic lab after testing the glass submitted his reports to Veer.

Veer looked towards the doctor who said,"This glass residue contains the very same abortion chemicals which Naina swallowed!"

After getting to know abt the reports Veer came back and showed it to Sahana who was equally shocked like Veer.

Veer spoke,"Captain, i spoke to the servant who served Milk to Naina.He said that he had left the Milk like that for few minutes and criminal got the good oppurtunity!May be he can get another oppurtunity too!"

Sahana said sternly,"We dont allow him to take the oppurtunity.Fix the cameras in KM in strategic point,i'll monitor it!"

Veer asked,"Are u sure Captain?"

Sahana said sternly,"Ofcourse Captain.U try to trace Major Shatru and i will look after KM.Dont worry abt Naina and children.They'll be safe here!"

Veer nodded and went outside to find some clue about Major Shatru.Here in Maaneet's room Geet was sleeping inside Maan's embrace after having an passionate love making.She was always exhausted due to pregnancy but she was never hurt as Maan was tender always.Maan was stroking his finger on her soft bare back and cooing her softly.

After sometime Geet got her wits and softly spoke,"Jaan!"

Maan asked,"Hmm?"

Geet answered,"Will u take me to Chachaji's house?I want to meet them!"

Maan who had closed his eyes and was stroking her back stopped it and snapped open his eyes and looked at Geet who was eagerly waiting for his answer.Maan dint wanted Pammi to be around her as she always despised Geet.

Maan asked,"Are u sure Geet?"

Geet nodded when Maan asked,"No,i wanted to know becoz she hates u and u r wishing me to take u to her house!"

Geet spoke,"Maan,i miss my mother and after mother Chachiji was the one who grew me up and if i dont say that am pregnant then that would be rude!"

Maan immediately caught her words and asked,"U miss ur mother jaan?"

Geet dint answer and snuggled to him.He dint respond to her snuggle but stared her with wide eyes.

His eyes moistened immediately and spoke hoarsely,"I cant give u ur mother who gave me everything!"

Geet immediately understood and said stroking her swollen belly,"Maan,u have given me the most precious gift!"

Tears poured down from his chocolate eyes and Geet warned,"Maan!"

She wiped the tears and kissed his eyes.

He groaned and immediately kissed her passionately leaving her breathless and spoke,"Get ready,will take u to Singhanias!"

Geet's lips widened with broad smile and eyes danced in its sockets.

Geet was abt to move but he stopped her and spoke,"But before that lets have another go!"

Before Geet would protest Maan captured her swollen lips into passionate never ending lovable kiss.

Geet moaned his name complaining but he dint leave her and spoke,"U made me cry so here is the punishment!"

He mouthed her softness licking it vigorously and she screamed in ecstacy.Maan licked it vigorously and she came after few seconds.

He asked,"Always ready!I love u for that too!"

Geet softly giggled but her cheeks turned more red.

Maan spoke licking her nipples,"I love this giggle!"

Geet was always ticklish these days due to pregnancy so he tickled her whenever he want.His hands surrounded her behind and squeezed it.She screamed in ecstacy while her nails dug his back marking him.Before he proceed further he felt a swift sharp kick which came from her baby bump and she winced holding it.

Maan kissed the swollen belly and said,"Calm down angel and dont disturb dada!"

Immediately it got silent and she pouted,"She only responds to ur words!"

Maan pecked her forehead calming her down and said,"That's becoz she's dada's angel!"

Then he stroked his tongue on her soft lips.Meanwhile his hardness entered inside her softness slowly.He dint give any weight on the baby bump and stroked her softness softly.

Geet screamed in ecstacy,"Oh ya baby!"

Maan stuffed his rigid hardness more deeper and deeper stretching her softness to his rigid one.Geet moaned his name and he stroked her softness more vigorously.He was soft and tender in his first attempt but her naughtiness had made him hard so much that he was easing his hardness.

He stroked his inside her more faster but she screamed,"Maan,hold on!"

Maan stopped and asked,"What happened?"

Geet said,"May be i have cramps in my back muscle!Aah..its aching!"

Maan came outside and pecked her head and stroke her back and asked,"U dint say about this when we had our first go!"

Geet sighed feeling his supple strong fingers stroke her soft bare back,"On that time u were soothing my pain but now when we started our second go,am feeling the cramp!"

Maan pecked her forehead and said,"Am sorry jaan!Wait,i'll give u an massage!"

Geet nodded and Maan ran to the bathroom to bring massaging oil.He started to massage the oil on her back softly but effectively so that the cramp cures.

Maan asked in concern kissing her soft back,"U ok baby?"

Geet nodded and sighed feeling his supple strong fingers.Maan pecked her forehead and spoke,"U sleep on jaan!Will take u to Singhanias this evening!"

Geet nodded and he stuffed more pillows around her making her wear his shirt.Maan was abt to move when she held his hand and asked,"Am sorry Maan!"

Maan knew what about she was talking and spoke shamelessly,"Jaan,i can take u whenever i want so stop feeling sad!"

Geet bushed furiously seeing his intense eyes.No matter in what state she will be or in any age he always make her shy with his words.

Precap-Someone attacking Geet.


Edited by geetsrir.maan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsemm update geet ordering veer oops this shasha scary precap
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! amazing update...loved it dear...
Don't u pm now???...I have to stalk ur updates...

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