Dil Chahta Hai # 2 updated part 14 on pg: 40 ON HOLD note pg 46 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Ok! I will read and see about the role but the reason I am asking is if they are not important in getting MG together or playing a role in separating them, then you can stop writing so much about them, coz if they are not important, you wasted a whole chapter establishing their friendship with Geet!


I removed the whole Handa family from My Fair Geet because they were not needed. The same way you added new family to Geet and Maan because they were needed. So if you need those three, let them be. But if they dont have any strong roles dont give them so much screen time! You are wasting your energy on unnecessary characters when you can focus that energy on our Maaneet!😉 Hope I did not confuse you!

Kappa
P.S. Will read another chapy soon!

hi kappa
Now I m devoting my tym only maaneet dnt wry ... ya trying on writing part but this punctuation thing is bit tough whike typing ... but I m trying ... n once agn thanks 4 ur review sweety... sry 4 answring late
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunima.

hi kappa

Now I m devoting my tym only maaneet dnt wry ... ya trying on writing part but this punctuation thing is bit tough whike typing ... but I m trying ... n once agn thanks 4 ur review sweety... sry 4 answring late

No probs!
About punctuation, do one thing! Leave it and type the whole chapter and then reread it and add the punctuation marks! This will also help in spotting spelling and grammar mistakes!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yup wl def try dis kappa...n tell me hwz u? N ki karing 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunima.

Yup wl def try dis kappa...n tell me hwz u? N ki karing 😊

I am fantastic! And right now, I am chatting with you and my other friend, reading a House M.D. FF on another site, reading reviews to two of my fics and listening to songs!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

I am fantastic! And right now, I am chatting with you and my other friend, reading a House M.D. FF on another site, reading reviews to two of my fics and listening to songs!😳

fantastic u bzy beee ...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey...any idea wen we can expect an update?? Thanks! sorry 4 troubling u! Hope ur exams r gng well!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh dear! I just realised that I have yet to finish reviewing your stories! Sorry people but once Dona went out of sight, this story went out of mind too. Sorry! I am very forgetful and my recent launching of five new stories has left me no time to think about anything else. Kal se I will start reading again! Pakka Promise! Maaf kardo please!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hey...any idea wen we can expect an update?? Thanks! sorry 4 troubling u! Hope ur exams r gng well!

hi dear ... u cn expect a ud teal soon as we hv alrdy written it ... n sry 4 being so late ... but this we prms we wl be regular ...thanks 4 ur support dear ...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Oh dear! I just realised that I have yet to finish reviewing your stories! Sorry people but once Dona went out of sight, this story went out of mind too. Sorry! I am very forgetful and my recent launching of five new stories has left me no time to think about anything else. Kal se I will start reading again! Pakka Promise! Maaf kardo please!

hi kappa ... b r u dear? Aree chill nt a prb yaar ... aise bhi hume bht saare pts alrdy tumse pta chal gaya n we r really wrkng on it ... n kappa dnt be frml yaar... ao nxt tym no sry 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunima.

hi dear ... u cn expect a ud teal soon as we hv alrdy written it ... n sry 4 being so late ... but this we prms we wl be regular ...thanks 4 ur support dear ...

hi thanks 4 da reply! Will b eagerly waiting! U r welcome! Love this story! 😊

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