izhaar....pyaar ka. Part 18 - Page 34

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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 updating! lovely update! well written! Maan depressed! Vicky wants 2 take revenge frm Geet as she slapped him! he tells dadi he is in love! Dadi shocked! She says he must prove himself b4 he can wrk at KC! he will manage the company! Geet is working at tht company! Oh no! Hope Maan gets 2 knw! update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Anu will read it during the weekend! Thanks for the pm :)
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I NOT READ THI S BEFORE
SURELY READ NOW FROM STARTING
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Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow what a come back update...
awesome one...
here manju n geet are trying to settle in their new life...n there maan is going into depression not finding his geet...
vicky 😡 after doing this much troubles in hostel with girls n other things now he wants geet!!!
and grrr he is lying too...the way maan fulfill his every wishes its scaring...if he comes to know vicky's so called love then what will happen!!...
dadima is too strong...she put nice conditions...but the company she is buying for vicky is it the same one where geet works!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan has lost his interest in life
N living only fir dadi n vicky
Vicky spoil brat falls on geet
Her slap hurt his ego
Dadi n her conditions
Vicky has made his own web
Lets c how he chanes himself
But...geet is going to work under vicky as anjali
Wil vicky giveup if he knows geet is maans love
Nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the dasherah surprise!!
Thanks for summary too!!
Dhamakewala update tha!!
Yeh vicky kaha se aa gaya?? Itna bigda hua??🤢
Maan kyun uss par nazar nahi rakhta? Dadi ne toh achha idea lagaya...
Babuji aur manju ke support se geet toh achha kaam kar rahi hai aur settle bhi ho rahi hai...
Maan depressed hai aur geet ko miss kar raha hai...
Waiting for unfold the story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Geet and Manju are struggling to settle in new life where babuji is helping them. Maan is trying his best to search for Geet but failed and frustrated.
Vicky is Maan little brother and a spoiled brat. He has evil eyes on Geet but she slapped him. Matter goes to Dadima and she assured babuji to take action. Vicky doesn't want to loose and cunningly shown his desire to marry Geet but Dadima denied an ask him to prove himself by taking care of the company that she is buying. I think this is the company where geet works.
Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Kaha ho???

Update kab milega?


Ab aap ne mujhe yaad ki tho mujhe dena hi padega ,. ye lo update,...
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Posted: 9 years ago

izhaar...pyaar ka.part-18/pg.66/18/11/2015

Geet went to Chandini chouk to buy some casual wear to Manju and Chotu and for herself,.. cloths may get in reasonable rates there.. While doing her shopping Geet saw a small baby may be of 2 or 21/2years is crying and roaming in the crowd aimlessly ,..probably she may lost in the crowd and crying in terror and fear for her parents. Nobody are paying any interest on her and the baby is wailing like anything in fear . Geet goes near her taking her in her arms asked the baby ," kya hua bata? mama ,papa nahi mil rahe hai?

The baby nodded her head to no still crying,..Geet :- Aavo main tumhe mama papa ke pass le kar jaathi hoo,.. she took her in to her arms and she started to enquire every one and the wenders, shopkeepers whether her parents came and asked about the baby,..but nobody answered her ,.. here the baby get fatigue by crying and with hunger .Geet fed her with some samosa and ice-cream consoling her .She started to doze off due to tiredness. Geet carrying her on her shoulder and patted her to sleep. She stood there in hope whether her parents may come searching for her . It is getting so late and nobody came to her . She don't know what to do now? She asked many people to help in finding her parents .But who bothers? Without any choice she told them that she is going to Police station to book a complaint of missing and if any one came back please inform them. And she went to police station.

Savitri Devi also came to that police station.As she is the organizer of so many orphanages and old age homes and rehabilitation centers of Prostitutes . Whenever police arrest the prostitutes before booking case they inform Savitri Devi and she will see that they will not file a case on them and giving counseling to them send them to rehabilitation center, train them in some works, provides jobs to them and ensure them with respectful life. Now also she came on that purpose and talking to C.I.

Here out side the room Geet came to book the complaint of missing the baby from her parents. But the S.I is rejecting to file the case accusing her that she theft that girl from her parents and now giving wrong complaint , the baby belongs to her and she wants to get rid off her by giving false complaint and , what is her interest to bring the baby to police station when all remain quite ? why she took that pain ? etc,.. etc,.. speaking nonsense to her ,.. [probably it is the reason why people forget humanity sometimes ] Geet felt offended . As responsible citizen here she showed her responsibility towards the society and she get this in return. She began to argue with him reminding his responsibility and duties to him. The argument heard by the C.I. and Svithri Devi who sat inside the room and they came out.

C.I.:- what is happening here?

Geet turned and looked at him wished him and explained everything to him and the s.i. s rejection,. she didn't saw Savitri Devi ,.. as she stood behind C.I . But Savitri Devi Can see her. she felt awed ,.. A small girl of barely 18 years took such a brave step to help the pure child and here the man who is assigned to the duty and being paid for it is refusing putting lame accusations,.. shame on him

S.I:- Sir how can we believe this girl ,what if she is lying

C.i:-[ he scolded the S.I.] That's what we have to enquire ,.. that is our duty . we are here to serve people . its our duty to take complaint and enquire in to it and do justice . she showed some responsibility and you are showing your back towards your responsibility,. is this the way you do your duty? Take her complaint and her address and take the baby from her .he told to him and went inside with S.D. who stood there still thinking about Geet

Then S.i without any option he said ,.. come madam give a written complaint. she asked her some questions about her name and address etc,.. etc,.. and lastly he said to leave the baby there and go.

Geet:- Baby ko main yaha kaise chode sakthi hoo,..itni choti bacchi hai agar uss ko kuch chahiye toh ? Yaha kon karega uss ki dekhbhal?

S.I :- iss se aap ka kya lena dena ,.tumhari responsibility ab poori hogayi,..bachhi ko thumhe yaha chod ke jaana hoga.

Geet :-looking around the station not at all pleasant with the surroundings . all criminals in cells,.. "nahi,.. nahi,.. main iss bacchi ko yaha nahi chode sakthi hoo ,..

S.i:- now finding this amusing ,.. keeping his arms on his chest and smirking,.. " toh kya karoge? bchhe ko thumhare pass rakh na chahte ho? he said it in sarcasm he now finding it humor

Now C.I and S D came out after their talks ,.. seeing Geet still there he asked ,. tum abhi tak nahi gayi? Now S.D came front .

Geet stood baffled seeing S.D there. terror, shock. astound and fear all over powered her senses seeing her .what to do now ? what happens if S.D recognizes her and inform her family? they again try to harm her,.. her hands and feet turned cold and shaking with fear ,. she stood there dump found..

C.I :-Now what?

S.i:- said all this to him.

C.i:- look miss tum ne complaint de diya na ,. aur ab hum yah complaint pe action lenge ,. tumhe bachhe ko yaha chod ke jaana hoga.

Geet:- with great difficult and looking suspect towards S.D as if she recognize her,... controlling herself said nahi jab tak iss ke parents nahi mile jaate tab tak bachhi mere pass hi rahegi. she said determiningly , one side she is astonished why S.D not responding seeing her.

Geet has seen S.D Many times in H.P. But S.D. didn't recognize her. she knows about Handas and their children but didn't recognize her .

Seeing S.D. calm Geet now got that she didn't recognize her . She took a relief breath.

S.I.:- still in his mocking and in provoking manner, aur agar iss bachhi ke maa baap nahi mile toh kya zindagi bhar iss ki zimmedaari logi tum?

Geet :- Haan agar aisa ho toh.. humesha humesha ke liye main

iss ki zimmedaari lene ke liye tayaar hoo per iss bachhi ko yaha

chod kar nahi jaa sakti hoo,..main jaanti hoo aisi jagah par

bachhe ko chodna achhi baath nahi hai ,.. main iss ko kuch nahi

hone dungi,..

S.D:-Flabbergasted by her words ,.. a small girl hardly 18 years

shaayad , abhi padh rahi hai,.. ready to take a big responsibility

without even thinking the consequences and about her family ,..

whether her parents will accept this not,.. her all attention was

only for the safety of that girl,..

She came forward,.. looking to Geet,.. bete ,.. meri baat suno ,..

,.. main kayi orphanages organize karthi hoo,. Chalati hoo, toh

tum iss bachhi ko humein de do main iss ki dekhbhaal karungi

,..tum hum per bharosa karsakthi ho? itni choti umar mein tum

itna bada boj kaise uthaogi? aur thumharein maa papa

manenge? .bahut problems aa sakti hai beta.

Geet:- Nahi mam ,.. main bhi ek anath hoo ,.. mujhe maaloom hai

ki ek anath ki zindagi kaisi hoti hai ,kya guzarti hai ,.. kitna kuch

sehna padta hai ,.. aur main iss bachhi per yeh sab nahi

honedungi ,.. agar inke parents nahi mile toh main iss ki parent

banungi,.. aur yeh meri beti banegi. she said in her firm tone

determingly making all of them speechless with her selfless love

for the baby.

S.i. face turned pallid in shame , till now he is insulting her with

his mean words guffawed way and sarcasm ,.but now he

became the mockery object there. His head bend in shame.

C.i clapped at her fallowed by others ,. I appreciate your guts

miss . he stopped to know her name

Geet:- Anjali,..sir,.

" ,. Yes miss Anjali I really appreciate for your this step,. You are

really brave I hope one day all people show some

responsibility and humanity ,to their society . I humbly bow

before you hats off to you. he Praised her to no extent and S.D.

also felt very touched and proud and emotional..

She came to Geet cupping her face in her palms" Anjali beta ,..aaj

hum bahut khush hai ,. agar aap ko kabhi bhi kisi bhi chiz ki

jarurat ho ya koi bhi problem ho toh hum app ka saath denge ,.

aap kabhi bhi humare pass aa sakthi hai hum aap ki madad

karenge ,. thik .hai. .

Later S.D asked her where abouts and gave her visiting card

and phone no. to Geet to contact her if necessary. Geet took the

baby to her home .

The area is a basthi in which Manju andBabuji family and others

live,.. all r majdoor log . Manju andBabuji all are there waiting

for her ,.. and Manju is hellworrying for her as it become night

and very late. All r thinkingwhat could have happened to Geet

and what to do? They allsurprised seeing a baby with her ,..

Manju reached Geet in on jump and asked," kaha thi tum? Itni

der kyun ho?aur yeh bachhi koun hai?

Geet told everything to them,.. and why she bring that baby with her,..

Except Manju and Babuji ,.. all said that she did wrong ,.. Geet

ko yeh bachhi ko police station mein chodana chahiye,.. yeh

police ki responsibility hai ,. Police ko joh karna hai woh

kare...humein uss se kya ?... tum kaise iss bachhi ki dekhbhal

karsakti ho?,.. Yeh koi choti baat nahi hai ,..etc,,.etc,.

Geet said looking into Babuji's eyes,.. "jo pyaar mujhe aur mere

family ko yaha mila ,. Wahi pyaar main iss bachhi ko dena

chahthi hoo ,.. jaisa ki aap logo ne humein apna liya bilkul

waise hi iss bachhi ko bhi apna lijye ,.. yahi maine yaha sikha

,..haina Babuji?"kya maine thik socha?

Babuji overwhelmedseeing this ,.. aaj tak unhone bahut saarein

logonko help ki ,.per kissi ne kuch nahi sikha ,.. per ab Geet ne

unko achhi tarha sesamajha ,..aur wahi kiya joh woh chahte the ,.."

He came to her "patting on head ,.. bilkul sahi kiya bete tum

ne ,." mujhe garv hai tum per ",.. aaj se yeh bachhi hum

sab ki hai ,.. aur isski zimmedaari hum sab ki hai ,. Agar iss

ke maa baap nahi mile toh hum usski family banenge ."



Aap sab ne request ki tho maine I.P.K phirse shuru ki ,.. per ye kya? itna kam responce? dicrease in likes,.. even to my E.O.L i get more likes,. And for this I.P.K. i took every care to improve my writing in grammer and in hindi ,. with the help of my best buddy Shetal ,.. u people disoppointed me ,. u requested me to continue the story otherwise i am ready to discontinue it ,.. u boosted me to continue and in bargain i get this ,..too unsatisfied by bur responce ,.. but considering my fault ,. as i didn,t put u on track with my regular updates ,. i am giving u some more updates ,.. but even then also if ur responce is like this deffinitely i am going to stop this.

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 9 years ago

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