MG SS- BARREN LOVE part 2 page 17

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(made by mohi dii ..love u dii)


(made by suhana dii...love u dii)

(made by cute ria diii 😊 )

Banjer Darthi per phool kaha hote hai..
Banjer Rishto mai asool kaha hote hai..
Aur aaj jana Banjer mohabbte mai mehboo kaha hote hai !!!

Janti hu mohabbien kab banjer hua karti hai..
Mager aasoo se sicho tu mohabbien bhi ruswa hoti hai..
Kaha kabhi koi umeed ki hai Maine..
Jaise bhi mili, waisi zindgi ji hai maine..
Kya meri mohabbte ka kabhi jawab nahi mile gaa..
Kya mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi mile gaa ???

Kher abb chalne ka samay aa gaya hai..
Uski harr zimedari ko apna jo mana hai..
Khud ke liye samay kaha hai mere pass..
Aur jo mila bhi vo bhi unhi ki yaad mai jana hai !!!!
(lovely poem from mohi dii 😊 love u di)


Story of two strangers bound in the most scared bond, bond of marriage. One of the most beautiful relation, but he was not there, only she was there to fulfil her duties, he was just present for namesake, he never looked in her eyes, which was full of love n pain of being in love with her husband who literally hate her or not she don't know only thing she knows is that he is not there for her. She was epitome of beauty n patience, never shared her views, her feelings with others becoz no one was there, she was princess of her parents n brother but still they were conservative people who believe that girls should be married in early age. She was free bird but now bond to live with him. She accepted it happily but her another set of dreams broked on her 1st night when her never ending wait doesn't end.

She happily did her duties without saying anyone, always followed his words, he took her out from her world to his world, where she was alone in new country... It was always her dream to come PARIS but not like this.

He was about to walk with her but left her hand in starting only...

Ok this was all prologue but still title is not coming in my mind, but one thing m sure here that geet will be not soo stupid to live in aloneness she will learn to walk alone, she will learn to stand on her feet, she will start her life from sand to star...

Waiting for ur review, reactions n all n name too plzz suggest n more over i m not gng to update it regularly as m really held up in my new sem nd cricket practises soo will try to update after i will get the title only




part 1 page 7




Maan singh khurana

Born to live on his conditions, handsome, dashing man of 28, lives in paris alone in his big mansion, chairman of khurana constructions & hotels. He started his business all alone, n now he is one of the best entrepreneurs of world. In love with his collegemate ria.

Geet handa

Beautiful princess of her family, one of the most pampered kid but still knows her values, love to enjoy her life. She belongs from a conservative family, where they thinks girls should be married at ri8 age. She know this thing that after completing her studies she will be married but have no offence. She thinks "jab tak jee saku jee lo"

Armaan & Riddhima malik

Maan's best friend, co-partner of maan is hotel business, n he to own magazine publishing world. Married to riddhima just a month ago. She is well known fashion designer own, riddzz fashion world in paris. They love eachother immensly

Sujal & Kashish garewal

Maan's friends, who are married from last 6 months and enjoying their life full too. Sujal n kashish own their company. They are close friend of maan.

Tej & Tanya handa

Geet's brother n sister-in-law married from year. Tej helps his father in textile business. N tanya is completeing her studies. As they too both got married at early age.

Aditya & pinky kashyap

Both are working in maan firm, adi is maan's ri8 hand where as pinky is his assistant

Ria singhania

Maan's love interest dng arictecture with maan,n working in his firm with him.lil. Serious gal of age 25

Dadi n annie same as serial



Nikunj Malik

Ram & priya singh khurana

Maan's parents love him soo much, n proud to be parent of such a successful son. N nw days they are searching a gal for him.

Mohinder & rano handa

Geets' parents over protective for geet, n love her soo much n wanted someone for her who can pamper her n love her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think pyar ka dard hai is good!
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Bawaari !!!

Banjer !!!!

Prem tapsaya !!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like the concept bc she is strong.go on girl...I would love to see the love and hate love story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds interesting.. n most catching point for me is Geet being strong unlike a stupid girl with never ending stupidity or patience to get back love...

Just giving an idea of title which I got from ur sand to star...

My journey from shadow to star...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Out of ur shadow "
"An agreement with destiny!!"
Stupid na... mujhe pata h !!!😆
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Interesting! will be waiting for updates
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In search of my soul,I know cheesy but can I request you something plzzz don't make Maan as geet ka husband.I want geet to fall in love with Maan later.he can fun like a star in her life who will lead her towards self fulfillment,bcoz I'm tired of reading an arrogant Maan who later redeems himself and ask forgiveness,repent etc so if u can plzz consider my thought .it was just a suggestion I hope u dnt mind.anyway all the best for new story 😊
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Nice Prologue...
After reading i could only get one thing...that is her identity...Astitva...
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hi congrats on the new story! awesum prologue! update soon n do pm!

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