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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely cs! superb prolgue! update soon! Poor Geet! n do pm!
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Part 1



Life always shows us different aspects, this is what the girl of 22 thinks, she was sitting in her college working on her designs for last time, as day after tomorrow is her fashion show, she is excited soo much, she has already got placement in one of the big fashion group. N today, she is sitting with a sad smile on her but while working on her designs there are spark in her eyes. Her thoughts were broke by a sound "Geet" she looked back to a girl cladded in beautiful suit, geet smiled at her n said "yeh bhabhi" the girl is geet's bhabhi tanya, who is also studying with her in same college n dng textiles.

"Geet, lets come we are getting late for home, u know na maa will then take tension" geet smiled at her bhabhi who is not less than her frnd. "hmm bhabhi, just few mins" geet started packing up her things when tanya asked "what happened geet, u r looking lost" geet without looking at tanya said "u know better than me bhabhi, y i m lost then y r u asking" turned n smiled at tanya. Tanya smiled, becoz she understands her situation because once she was also at the place of geet, bt she is lucky to have in-laws like her parents. They both headed toward the gate where their car was waiting for them both settled down. Geet was looking outside the window when tanya said "geet, u always know this will happen one day, then y u r disturbed dear, u know na maa, papa will decide best for u" geet smiled n said "i know bhabhi but i want to enjoy my life more, i don't want to be bounded in new relations, u know na i got best placement from college but still i m not able to work becoz of this marriage stuff" geet at last cried her heart, while keeping her head in tanya's shoulder, tanya know how it feels, she too had some dreams when got married but tej n hands were enough understanding that after marriage too they allowed her to study, n now after her studies is gng to,complete tej offered tanya to work in their firm, n she accepted happily. But she know what a girls feels, geet is too talented in her field bt nobody knows what will happen in her life after marriage. Tanya consoled her n said "talk with him, tell him about ur dreams when he will come"geet nodded while wiping her tears from the back of her palms. Tanya smiled seeing the childish geet, who is enough innocent for world.




They both reached big handa mansion, n stepped inside, rano was waiting for them with a smile on her face. Both went in their respective rooms to get freshed then after some time came out, rano was waiting for them. Both came n settled beside her. N rano asked "how was ur day" both smiled n said "good" then rano served them tea n snacks. Rano is a elegant lady, who never differentiate between geet n tanya, for her both are her daughters. Tanya asked from rano "maa, what to make for dinner" rano smiles n said "if I m not forgetting then somebody is having her last exam tommorow" Tanya smiled n said "maa, I have already prepared, so I can cook today" on which she heard a commanding voice of mohinder who was coming back from offfice with tej "no, exams comes 1st beta n after ur exam u can cook for us n that's a order understand" Tanya smilied n happily accepted while taking bag n files from tej, both exchanged a lovely smile. Rani took Mohindar things n both couple left to their rooms. Geet was siting all lost n watching tv, when mohinder came n sat beside his daughter his pari n looked at her lost face. "what happened pari, y u r all silent today, no demands no complains todays" geet smiled n kept her head on her fathers shoulder, mohinder knows y she is silent but he too wanted to ease her mood so asked "so sweetheart, hows preparation for ur fashion show" geet smiled n said "awesome, u know dad I m gng to present my collection at last, I hate that proffessor,I told him I want to be 1st but he said no u r last" she told in same tone like her proff. Told mohinder smiled at her daughter, he knows she is somewhere angry from him, but he knows this is ri8 for her. He too knows how to make her mood gud, he passed a big dairy milk silk to her, she looked at chocolate with shining eyes, n grabbed it. N started munching her fav.chocolate when mohinder told her "pari, u know na we love u beta, bt still this is ri8 time for u to get married beta, font think we are marrying u becoz u r burden, beta u r my jaan my heartbeat pari. But beta u Know na ur papa will never think bad for u" geet nodded her head with teary eyes, there are some tears in mohinder eyes too he live geet more than his life, he can't see his princess in tears n pain. Rano came near them n settled beside geet n said "mera pyara bacha, u know they are too nice peoples, they will allow u beta to persue yr dream, so dont worry, aapke papa ne pahle hi bol dia h yeh unse" geet hugged iher papa n cried while rano caressed her hair. Tej n Tanya, who were coming, looked at trio n tej came near his gudia n said "wase v gudia, if u dont like the boy, then we will reject him, like we used to do in food" geet smiled in tears. When Tanya said "geet u r such a cry baby, let's eat ur fav. Pastry" geet looked at her fav. Dark chockate pastry n asked "bhaiya u brought" he nodded while looked at geet n she looked at what he is staring n after that hide her hand.

Tej tried to snatch it but geet hide herself n chocolate in her papa, n showed tounge to tej n said "papa dekha na bhaiya ko" all smiled to see her complain n back to herself. Mohinder smiled n cocooned her more n said yo tej " meri pari ko pareshan mat kije aap" tej smilied n patted her head n all had geet's fav. Pastry, then after that Tanya went to study n rano went in kitchen while mohinder n tej disscussed about some project, n geet was sitting in her fathers embrance n watching her fav tv programme n munching her chocolate. After that alll had their dinner n went in their room in the wait of new day.

New day


A lady is sitting with her coffee, n giggling hearing her son n daughter-in-law nok jhok. Both came n sat beside n start their complain on which dadi said "bas v kije ram Priya aap dono, bache sunege toh kya sochege, or aap log ab kuch din me saas sasur banane wale hai" on which both smiled n said "maa". Then Priya asked "kab aaega mera beta its already 9" ram smiled n said "bas aate his hoge". Aniee came running downstairs n asked from dadi "bhai aae dadi" dadi smile n said "aate hi hoge". While Priya was arranging breakfast on table on which aniee said "see dad mumma, have made only bhai's fav." ram smiled at her daughter n said "aapka kya humara v nahi h, ab toh sirf unke laadle ka fav. Banega" Priya came near them n said "y not he come onces in a year, but kaha reh gaya mera beta its late" on which ram said "humara beta" priya smiled n said "haan haan humara" when they heard a voice from back "aap sab ka" all looked back n their face brighten with wide smile"

Priya ran towards him n said "mera bacha" the boy touched her feet n then hugged his mumma, which ram came n said "so barkudar, kaese hai aap" he touched ram feet n said "dad m super fine" n then hugged him too then went near dadi n touched her feet n said "soo partner kasi h aap" dadi smilied n said "super fine partner" aniie came from back n hugged n said "bhai missed u sooo much" on which he said "me too missed u" then ram came near him n said "soo Mr. Maan singh Khurana, welcome back" maan smiled at his dad n said "thanku Mr. Ram singh Khurana".

Ram smilied at his son, his proud. Who is the chairman of his own company; he started his company on his own n now he has recently won business man of the year award. Priya came near him n said "maan, jaeye fresh ho jaeye, then we will do bfast together" he nodded n went in his room.

They all had bfast together, with soo much talk after bfast, all settled in couch and at last ram asked in serious tone "soo maan, what u have thought" maan looed at dad n said "plzz dad not now" on which priya said "nahi beta, this time we are not leaving u, u enjoyed soo much of ur independence now its time" "but mom" maan tried to say something when ram said "you know mohinder handa" maan thinks for sec "yeh mohinder uncle ur best frnd, chairman of hands textile" ram nodded n said "yeh same, n he have a daughter n we have selected her for u" maan was stunnded to hear this n said "dad, no way m not marrying now" on which dadi asked "y maan, do u love anyone" maan was about to answer when ram said "maan, we have given u permission to lead ur life the way u wanted, u wanted to go outside india, we permitted n u wanted to work outside we permitted but not now maan, this time its final u r getting married to mohinder's daughter, she is beautiful, educated n more over belongs from gud family, knows how to behave in front of others" maan went in a deep thought n said "but dad" ram stand up from his place n said "tomorrow we are gng to see the girl, so be ready till 7 pm, n this tym m not gng to hear anythings n its final".

Ram left from there n priya went behind him when maan looked at dadi n said "but dadi I like someone else" dadi loked at him n said ""what, n whom on which maan said "she is from my college n now days working in my office"then dadi asked "did u both love each other on which maan said "dadi, I didn't said her anything yet, I thought after returning I will propose her, but dad is adamant about that girl" dadi looked at maan n asked "maan, if she didn't love u then" maan didn't said anything when dadi continued "have she ever gave u signal like she likes u or love u" maan was all silent then said "dadi, she is serious girl like me, I really don't think she have anyone else in her life" dadi patted his face n said "maan, ram n we all like mohinder's daughter at least see her beta, talk with her" on which dadi said "beta this tym ur dad is admant, n u know sometime he really didn't hear anyone on his decision n most imp. U still don't know if that gal loves u or not".

Maan was too upset with the happenings, he really like ria, but he didn't know that she loves him or not, but he loves her n he cant marry another girl, but seeing his dad adamant fro the 1st time, he is unable to say them anything. He really dnt know what to do this time, he really respect n love his family, they have given him all the space he needed in his life, but why they are not giving him this space too. He was in deep thinking what to do, how to say no to that girl, he knows mohinder n ram are too close, he is in soo confusion to say something.

Precap- maan's decision about marriage n geet's fashion show.


soo at ;ast wrote 1st part n now next part depends on ur likes n comments if u all want to read next then give at least 100 likes then only next part...n still waiting will update soon.

Edited by geetsmile - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum start...wow both not interested in marriage but fr different reasons...maan bcoz he loves ria and geet fr hr career...continue sooon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update so both not interested marriage but due to diff reasons .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really sweet story 😛😛
a story of every girl 😊😊who have dream n wanna live it 😛😛
geet family loves her a lot they also want 4 her besttt ❤️❤️❤️
all girl want her in laws like her parents 😃😃
who got it they r most luckeist girl in the world 😃😃
geet n tany got it 👏👏👏
hmmm maan loves anyone else
but he dont knw about the girl if she love or not 😕😕
dekhte hay what will maan decision 😊😊
will maan fall in love with geet or not ? 😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maan will tell yes fr marriage...i think so...

interesting starting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan aur geet dono shaadi karna nahi chahate.!
Ab shaadi kaise hogi?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start dear!

this is going 2 b a wonderful journey! its great that geet will stand up 4 herself! is ria really in love with him? hopefully she's not a negative character!

Wonder how will maan return geet's feelings!

waiting 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it yaar nice start

wanna see whatt maan is going to do

and he is woriing in a fashion comapny

wanna see how they meet each other

waiting for next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsem start parents arranging marriage

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