MG FF: Burning Desire #2 Epilogue Pg 27 8th jan

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BURNING DESIRE # 2



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She opened her eyes missing my warmth on her body, she slowly rubbed her eyes revealing her bare shoulders. When she fully opened her eyes there she saw me drinking brandy and I am looking outside. She got up covering her nude body with the sheet over her chest. She walked to me hugging me from back resting her head on my back. I, throwed the glass aside breaking it into pieces. When I turned to face her saw her face is glowing and her lips curved into a sweet pout. "You didn't wake me up?" she pouted. "I don't want to disturb you baby" I told smiling at her.

"You are looking damn hot baby, I cant resist myself from loving you" I told making her blush. "You completely changed my life with your love maan, I am feeling so lucky" she told hugging me tight. But he hug just aroused me to no extent, I want to feel her now. Her one innocent and simple touch is enough to wake up my desires, my LUSTFUL desires. I opened the knot of the sheet making it fall on the floor. I tightened the hug so that there will be no air gap between us. Her poking buds are driving me crazy, I am getting hard, I raised her head holding her hair, her cheeks became red.

"Maan please let me go" she told. "Where you will go jaan when I am with you" I said sealing her lips with mine kissing her rudely, harshly. She is responding me hesitantly, I pinched her buds, I entered her when she screamed. I smirked when she started responding me.

Strangely she believed me when I told I love her and submitted herself to me. I am studying my MBA second year and she is my Junior. She don't know there is no place for LOVE in my life. what will happen to her when she comes to know he doesn't love her? why he don't believe in LOVE? Does her LOVE make him believe that still there is LOVE in this WORLD??


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When geet took maan to arjun's ward and pointed to arjun, maan too followed her gaze and looked at the person lying on the bed. Maan looked at arjun without blink and then looked at geet. Geet nodded for a yes with tears in her eyes. Maan is rooted in the spot not able to believe what he is seeing. He took slow steps and reached the bed. He touched arjun and confirmed that he is not dreaming. He once again looked at geet. Maan fell on his knees crying bitterly. He doesn't know how to react and is crying. Geet too is very emotional and very happy too, her arjun bhai is alive. He is not dead, he is safe and what else they need.

Maan slowly got up and looked at arjun with tearful eyes; "Bhai" called maan, there is no response from arjun. He called again still same reaction. Maan looked at geet not able to understand what happened to arjun. Arohi, who understood their confusion told "Mr. Maan, you please come to my cabin I will explain you everything" maan nodded but he don't want to leave even for a second, if he go with arohi and come back again to see him, he might vanish. He is scared and tensed, he once again don't want to lose arjun. Whatever happened is enough he can't tolerate or take any more pain. He doesn't want to live in the past at the same time he can't forget the past too.

"Maan" called geet as he didn't budge from his place. "I am coming" told maan though he doesn't want to leave arjun but he want to know about his condition. At least he is happy that arjun is alive and what else he wants. Maan along with geet and prem went to arohi dad's cabin. "Dad" called arohi and introduced maan and others to him. Arohi's dad is happy to see them, finally they got to know about arjun's family. "Please take your seat" told arohi's dad. They all settled, all are in confused state not understanding around them but what ever happened is for good. "Ok I know there are so many questions running in your mind. Before you ask me I will tell you everything" told arohi. And what she said is true.

"You all thought arjun is no more but the truth is that arjun was saved in that accident but there were serious injuries on his body that it's still taking time for him to cope up. That's the reason from that day onwards he was in coma and luckily from few days back onwards he is responding to the treatment. Today morning he opened his eyes and then became unconscious. We don't know how arjun met with an accident and other things but the fact is that his car brakes were failed, I just think that he noticed it before hand and jumped off from the car and fell off the hill. That day when myself and my dad were going that way got to see the accident and immediately with the help of people around we saved arjun" told arohi. Maan stood up and folded his hands. "Thank you very much for saving my brother doctor. That day when we searched for arjun we didn't even get his body. So police thought that due to heavy pour down and the hill area he might have... " maan couldn't complete the sentence. It's very difficult for him to again go back to the past. He don't want to think about those days.

"I understand Mr. Khurana and we are also sorry for not informing you about your brother. We don't know anything about his family. Mr. Arjun always kept it as private" told arohi. "No Doctor please don't say sorry we are lucky enough that you were there at the time of accident and saved him" told geet. Arohi just nodded sadly and told "He is responding to the treatment now and we are lucky enough that we found his family. I need a little help in his treatment" "yes doctor I am ready to do anything for arjun" told maan. "We are ready to do doctor" told geet looking at maan. Maan looked at her painfully, geet averted her gaze and asked "Arjun bhai will be fine na doctor?" asked geet. "He will" told arohi. Arohi told them to tell arjun about their happy moments and tell anything which makes him happy so that he will give effective response to the treatment. Maan and geet nodded as they are very much confident that arjun will be fine soon. They once again thanked arohi and her dad for saving arjun.

"Geet, you go home I will be with arjun" told maan not looking at her. Maan is happy that geet is fine and double happy for arjun but he can't forget what he did to geet. If it was a mistake he would have asked for apology but what he did is a sin and he has no right to ask for apology because he deserves only punishment. On the other hand geet is also very much guilty for the deeds of her sister. At the same time she can't forget how much pain maan gave her. She now truly want some love and care but not anymore betrayal. She is tired of fighting with her life and not anymore. She has no energy left to fight with her life and don't have energy to deny anyone. She just left from there with prem. Geet and prem are in car, both are silent. Prem thought to break the silence as its not good for geet to suffer. She has to be happy at this time and is there any happiness left in her life? Thought prem but he knows once everything comes back to normal maan will get back his geet and this time geet has to trust maan. Prem thought geet only knows the half truth but not the full truth. Geet knows everything as she head from maan. That truth is killing her, how can a sister be so brutal that she want to sell her for money. Elder sister always cares for younger right? Then why and what mistake she made that her di hates her so much that she stoop so low.

"Prem, I want to meet di" told geet without looking at him. prem applied brakes and looked at geet with shock written all over his face. "But geet..." "Please prem, I don't want to argue anymore" told geet defeatedly. Prem nodded silently as naina cant harm geet anymore as he is there with her now. And if she even tries to harm geet then maan will kill her for sure. Prem drove to police station.

"Inspector, we would like to meet naina" told prem. "Sure" told the inspector and allowed them to meet her. They went in to meet her, when naina saw geet there she was burning with anger. "Come geet come, what are you doing here? Came to see your di whether she is alive or dead? I told you geet not to trust those khurana's see what they did to you and me. Because of maan I am here today for no reason and even you are also suffering" naina told sweetly yet her filled with venom. She thought geet as innocent and will surely believe her. But geet's action made her stun. Geet slapped naina hard and looked at her with disgust. "You are not to be called as sister Ms. Naina, and dare you say a word against MY MAAN I know what is maan and why he did all these. In fact he saved me from you and saved me from living a disgusting life which you wanted to give me" roared geet, she couldn't tolerate a word against her maan and that too from this disgusting person. "Mar jao naina, tab hi hum shanti se jee sakte hai. I will pray to babaji to kill you soon" told geet and left from there. Geet's words are enough to naina to know that geet came to know the truth. She was always jealous of geet, if she and geet go out everyone would drool on her that's why she want to spoil her life. If geet didn't come in the middle she would have killed arjun and maan and get all their property under her name. but her marriage with maan spoiled everything, this made naina to hate geet more and more. That she stoop so low to sell her and make her a p*******. Now she got punished for what she did and for trying to destroy a innocent girl like geet.

"Arjun, get up man enough of sleeping. You know na I don't like silence then why you are sleeping from long. Enough of your drama and you teased us enough get up arjun" cried maan holding arjun's hand. He want arjun to get up, talk to him, hug him and sooth all his pain. "Bohot akela padh gaya hu arjun tumare bina, tum itni asani se hame chodne ki koshish ki par deka godji ko yeh manjoor nahi tha. Wo nai chata ki tumare bhai akele rahe isiliye wo tumko kuch nahi hone diya" maan smiled a little and told "You might be thinking what happened to me that I am talking like geet, godji and all. Love changes everything (Revenge too) thought maan. Maan is looking at arjun thinking he might open his eyes now but alas he didn't. he still need time to recover from his accident.

Precap: Geet, will you ever forgive maan? Asked arjun with great difficulty.

Here is the next part of BD. Waiting for your likes and comments. 😊


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Edited by chinni10 - 11 years ago
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very nice n waiting for next
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nice part
nice slap from geet

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nice update

loved the way geet answered naina but somewhere i want maan to win geet all over again

she was innocent but he destroyed her so would love to seee maan doing anything to win her back along with their baby
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Congrats for the new thread 👏
Maan & geet happy to see arjun alive
Geet slapped naina...very good
Precap...interesting
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Ek tappad to km hi maara geet ne
uss jaisi sister ko to 4-5 lagane chaiye the
she is such a cheap
B***** B****

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