MG FF: Burning Desire #2 Epilogue Pg 27 8th jan - Page 12

Created

Last reply

Replies

196

Views

53.7k

Users

78

Likes

871

Frequent Posters

_GoldenStarz_ thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago



Wish you all a very Happy New Year

Part 20 (Last Part)







Add "JyothiK" for pms.


"Will you ever forgive maan for what he did?" geet looked into his eyes and she came to know he knows everything. She closed her eyes and allowed the tears to flow down. "Bolo geet" asked arjun. "When I think of maan and his deeds it pains here bhai" told geet pointing towards her heart. "Par kya karu bhai uske bina mei jee nahi sakti, bohot pyaar karti hu mai maan se" told geet. "Kyat um usko maf kar payegi" asked arjun. "Bhai, you should feel happy for your brother. He loves you so much that he was ready to sacrifice his love. But I am scared bhai, though I want to go to maan but I am not because I am scared. If I love him then he will also leave me. I love my sister a lot but what she did. Mujhe darr hai ki jisse mai pyaar karti hu wo sab mujhe chod ke chale jayenge" cried geet, for the first time she is letting out her feelings. "I CANT LIVE WITHOUT MAAN" confessed geet.

"SIRF EK MAUKA GEET, EK MAUKA I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOUR HAND" asked maan. Geet didn't even looked at maan and ran to her room leaving a shattered maan behind. Arjun is totally shaken by geet's words. "You have to win her back maan, she is broken beyond limits" told arjun. Maan too is broken to see geet in such state, it all happened because of him. He have to make everything back to normal. With the determination he took steps towards geet's room, the door is ajar and he peeped in slowly to see what geet is doing. She sat near the window and looking outside blankly. He slowly went inside her room and closed the door. Geet came out of her thoughts when she heard the click of the door. Maan came near geet, she looked the other way. "geet" called out maan. "Please maan there is nothing to talk now. Go from here I am tired" told geet. "Geet, once listen to me jaan. Please give me a chance to talk" begged maan. Geet didn't speak anything; she is tired of fighting with her loved ones. She doesn't have any energy left in her body. She want her babies to lead a happy life with their mother and father, she don't want her babies to become like her.

Maan bent down on his knees and hugged her waist. "I am sorry babies, I am so sorry. I am your father maan. I am very bad, your mom is crying just because of me but I can't see her like that. Please tell your mom to give me a chance. I want to see her happy and smile always. Will you both forgive me for what I did? Please don't hate me" cried maan hugging her waist tight. Geet's dress is getting wet because of his tears. He loves her so much; she knew it in these 2 months. These 2 months he has taken care of like a mother, like a friend and like a true partner. They never verbally interacted with each other in these 2 months but she can feel his love for her. Her heart cried seeing him crying lonely along with her he was also alone. Maan got up and looked at geet, there is no expression on her face, and it's blank. He felt defeated, he is trying to gain her trust back from 2 months but she is broken beyond limits. "Whatever I did is a sin geet, one chance geet I will never let you down, never ever. I won't force you on anything geet, my doors are always open for you jaan. And I am sorry if I have disturbed you" told maan and left from her room but his heart want her to stop him. And that never happened; with heavy heart he left the room. Geet stared at his re-treating figure, she too want to stop her but something is stopping her. She touched her stomach; her dress is wet because of his tears.

When sensed something wet on the floor, she turned on the lights to see what it is and there are some blood stains on the floor. Geet is horrified; "Maan" is the only name which came out of her mouth. She hurriedly came down and ran towards outhouse. She entered into the hall and didn't find maan. She searched for maan everywhere but she didn't found him anywhere. "Gym" thought geet and ran upstairs. As expected maan is in the gym punching the punching bag fiercely. Already his bleeding hand is now all red with his blood, but he is not stopping his punches. Geet is horrified and shouted "Maan" but maan didn't stop and he didn't even listen her shout. Geet ran to him and caught his hand from punching further. His hands are red with blood and his whole body is full of marks, he tortured himself these 2 months. "Yeh aap kya kar rahe ho maan" asked geet and her eyes are filled with tears seeing his condition. Geet ran to his room to get the first aid box, here maan stood still not able to believe geet is there. In these 2 months he waited for her every single day but today it came true. His geet came for him; he is not able to believe.

Geet came to gym and cleaned his wounded hands blowing air in the middle to sooth his pain and applied medicine to them. Maan is silent and is just staring at her. Geet completed and looked at maan who is staring at her without blink, geet then realized what she did. Geet turned around to go but maan caught her hand. "Mat jao geet please" told maan, his voice has so much pain. Geet didn't turn back, seeing no response from her maan left her hand. "I am sorry" apologized maan. Geet turned back to look at him, their eyes filled with tears and pain. Within a blink geet hugged maan crying bitterly. "Aapke bina mere zindagi adoora hai maan. Hamare bache aur uske mama ko aapki zaroorat hai. Don't punish you for what happened" cried geet in his arms. Maan didn't dare to hug her back but is happy with geet's words. "Mujhe aapke saath jeena hai maan. You are my family and my everything. Aapko takleef mein dekke mujhe takleef hoti hai maan, aap aisa mat kijiye maan please" cried geet and she broke the hug looking at him. "Whatever happened is enough maan, I don't have more energy to fight with you and myself. I want to start everything afresh" told geet. Maan couldn't stop his tears, he is so happy. He can't express how happy he is, his geet came to him. And she want to start their life all over again that means she is giving a chance to him.

Maan took geet in his arms and twirled her around. "Thank you geet, thank you so much" exclaimed maan happily. After sometime he made her stand on the ground. He took her hands in his and told "I can't thank you enough jaan, I promise geet from now everything will be fine and everything will be back to normal" Geet smiled through tears, maan took geet in his arms hugging her tight. Geet is so happy and overwhelmed. She always wanted a happy and simple family but she was always alone. When she got maan, she thought her every dream came true but so many things happened which broke everyone's heart. Now maan has realized his mistakes and is repenting, seeing maan changed geet again dreamt of her own happy family and she thought to give maan a chance. "By trusting maan again I am doing a wrong thing, I can see the love and care in his eyes for me. He was also in pain when he is giving me pain, enough of all the sufferings" thought geet and tightened the hug. "I love you jaan" maan kept on chanting.

After sometime maan took geet to her room in Mansion and made her sleep. "So jao geet, you are tired" told maan, geet closed her eyes feeling relaxed. After sometime maan got up and came out closing the door. He wiped tears which were threatening to come out. "Thank you babaji for giving my geet back to me, I can't thank you enough" maan thanked holding his hands. "Maan" he heard arjun calling him. Maan turned back to see arjun holding his hands over his chest. "Bhai, wo geet" maan is interrupted by arjun. "I am happy now, but remember one thing maan I should not see tears in her eyes anymore. She had suffered enough for no mistake of hers. You should take care of her and babies" warned arjun lovingly. Maan hugged arjun and told "I will bhai, I will"

Everything was back to normal in KM, maan and arjun stood like a pillars to geet. They both were there in her every step and in her every need. Geet, who was emotionally drained is slowly coming out of her past and living a happy life with maan and arjun. Arjun too joined office. For the sake of geet, maan is doing his work from home. Many a times geet insisted him to go to office as she is perfectly fine. But maan is adamant and stayed with her. Though geet felt frustrated with his extra care but loved and enjoyed troubling him.

5 months passed, now geet is in 8th month. Maan is taking care of geet and arjun is happy seeing both of them. geet's mood swings would make maan and arjun run from here and there. But they loved pampering her. Geet trusted and loved maan "Babaji, I think I am the most luckiest person in this world to have loving husband like maan and caring brother like arjun" geet thanked babaji.

Epilogue


Here is the next and last part of BD. Waiting for your likes and comments. 😊


Love

Chinni


Edited by _GoldenStarz_ - 11 years ago
shalinimaaneet thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Geet ne maan ko maaf kr diya
aur maaneet ne apne ek family bn gyi hai jisme arjun maan geet aur unke aane wale babies hai
nw its time for babies to come out nd complete maaneet family

aur arjun ka kya?
Wating for epilouge
vrinda22 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..
arjun geet talks is needed one
maan asked geet a chance n she finally gave
maan n arjun pampering her n taking care of her..
all is well
n happy
sdlife19 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update

wat maan did was wrong but even geet was unknown to wat her sister did and both had suffered coz of her

but now everything is back and got their small family back
-Gemini- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
geet forgave maan & maaneet are happy together...arjun too fine😊
HAPPY NEW YEAR CHINNI😊
KINGKHANFAN thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome.geet forgave maan & maaneet are happy together...loved it HAPPY NEW YEAR CHINNI😊
ns.1 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...finally maaneet are together but i will miss this story so much😭 thanks a lot for a lovely story 😊eagerly waiting for the epilouge...continue soon and wish you a very happy new year😊😛
shri12 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part di and di going to miss this ff lot all the differences has been cleared waiting for next part
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 11 years ago
hi Happy New Year! Omg last part - unexpected! Emotional update! Beautifully written! Arjun talks to Geet! Maan goes n apologises bt she will nt relent! She is afraid of being hurt! Geet sees blood n goes to the outhouse! she is horrified n wt she sees! She takes care of him! Maan again apologises n she forgives him! Finally all ends well! Geet being pampered! Thanks 4 a fab SS! Wonderfully written! Waiting 4 epilogue!
kashtilover thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
awsme part
Maan did wrong and geet forgive him
Maaneet are now hpy family
Arjun and arohi ka kya?
Waiting fr nxt

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-Beyond the Gavel-Ch-7 to Epilogue-Pg-9&10-(29/6/25).

Title:- Beyond the Gavel Chapter 1: The Verdict of First Impressions ⸻ Delhi High Court, Courtroom No. 7 9:32 AM, Monday Morning The courtroom...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-Soundless-Chap-4 to Epilogue-Pg-4 to 6-(29/6/25).

Chapter One: The Studio of Shadows ⸻ The city outside never truly slept. It sighed, it buzzed, it rattled—but within the walls of the Khurana...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-When Rain Tastes like Fire-Ch-5 to Epilogue-Pg-6&7-(29/6/25)

Title:- “When Rain Tastes like Fire” Chapter 1: Shadows in Stone The rain had begun its descent long before she arrived. It wasn’t the romantic...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-The Name That Wasn’t Mine-Ch-4 to Epilogue-Pg-6 &7-(29/6/25)

Title:- The Name That Wasn’t Mine Chapter 1: A Life That Smiles Back ⸻ The first thing she noticed was the stillness. Not the antiseptic hum of...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-The Obsidian Rose-(A Borrowed Bride)-Ch-10 & Epilogue-Pg-16-9/6/25.

Borrowed bride-1 Title:- "The Obsidian Rose: A Borrowed Bride” Chapter 1: The Porcelain Cage The world outside Geet Handa's window was a...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".