MG FF: Burning Desire #2 Epilogue Pg 27 8th jan - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Great update. Feel horrible for geet!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
lovely update
that naina deserve more than slap and i knw maan will take care of that
pls yaar arjun ko jaldi thik kar do
hope everything goes gud between maan and geet
thanks for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Awesome updates
A big sorry for being late dii :(
My exam is hoping on so less avtive
Last week I didn't came in if too
Sorry :(

Updates were awesome
Geet got to know the whole truth
She is feeling guilty
She wants to be with maan but her guilt not permitting her to go close :|
Finally Arjun found by maaneet :D
Geet saw him :)
Loved the encounter of geet n naina
Or vhi 5-6 thappr kiu nehi Mara!!??
Precap :) Arjun ko hosh to aya :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
hi congrats on the new thread! Amazing intense update! Maan shocked seeing Arjun! Arohi tells him everything n Maan thanks her! Geet confronts Naina! interestin precap! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
part 18
awesome...
poor Geet...
she now knows everything...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Me update karing... koi waiting?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
eagerly waiting for the update di jaldi dena plzzz waiting desperately for the update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Awesome and mind blowing update... i'm loving very much it
Finally geet came to know full truth about naina and maaneet knew arjun is alive... so naina jealous with her own sister's beauty and dared to sell her... she is such a disgusting sister... i glad that geet slapped her but she deserved more slaps... loved the way geet said my maan... hope arjun become fine soon... hope geet forgive maan and maaneet forget their bitter past soon... waiting for next part... continue soon... take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 19


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A week passed maan decided to bring arjun to home, there will be change in the atmosphere and also he will be at his home so that there are chances for quick recovery. In this one week maan and geet didn't talk with each other, whenever they come face to face either of them mumble a sorry and leave from there but in their hearts there is a small wish that they want to be like before. But their guilt is eating them from inside that they are not able to look into each other's eyes and share their feelings and pour out their heart. Their guilt will not allow them to talk. The day before arjun's dis-charge maan talked with geet and told his opinion about bringing arjun to home. Geet too agreed to it and told that's a good idea. What ever happened between them maan is taking a perfect care of geet be it with medicines, food or anything. Before he goes to hospital to meet arjun he made sure that geet's juice, breakfast and fruits are on the dining table. He even appointed a cook so that geet will take healthy food and geet along with babies will be fine and healthy. Geet who is seeing everything is overwhelmed; she took every medicine in time. He is so close yet so far to her.

In the hospital, arohi too agreed to maan and dis-charged arjun the same day with all the precautions and medication. Soon arjun is in his home and in his room; he is free from all the wires and machines. Maan is taking care of arjun like a mother; from childhood arjun did everything to maan. Now maan is doing to arjun. Every second he is praying to god to make arjun alright.

A month passed, arjun's health is improving. He opens his eyes sometimes and look at his surroundings, but soon will drift into unconscious. That day when maan gave medicines to arjun and went out as he got some important call from office. Here arjun who again gained conscious looked here and there to find someone when he found none; he tried to get up though his body gave up. He saw someone standing near the door arjun lifted his hand to call the person but all went in vein, he again collapsed on the bed and his hand hit the side table resulting the glass fell down and broke into pieces. Maan, who heard the sound cut the call and came inside to see what happened. "Arjun" called maan and rushed to him. He saw the glass pieces and then looked at arjun to see his eyes. "Arjun" maan called him again and kneeled down. "Are you awake bhai" asked maan. Arjun again opened his eyes to see maan, he smiled a little and told "I am awake" he told with great difficulty. Words are not coming out of his mouth due to the accident.

Maan held his hand tight and is in tears to see his arjun back. "Arjun" called maan again. "Dare you sleep again bhai, I will call doctor now" told maan and took his mobile. He immediately called arohi and told about arjun, arohi felt very happy. "Finally arjun is awake. Thank you so much god, thank you so much" she immediately rushed to KM to see arjun. Her heart is jumping in joy, she want to see him as soon as possible but damn this traffic. It took her almost an hour to reach KM. When she went to arjun's room she saw him awake and is smiling at maan who is talking with him non-stop. She felt happy seeing maan too happy after a long time. She don't know what happened between maan and geet but observed their cold behavior towards each other. But she don't want to interfere as its their personal. Coming out of her thoughts she wished maan. "Hello Mr. Khurana" wished arohi. Maan looked at her and smiled. "Dr. Arohi, see he is awake" told maan walking towards her. arohi smiled and checked arjun. "Mr. Arjun, are you feeling any pain in your knees" asked arohi. Arjun tried to move a little, though he didn't find any pain but due to his comatose stage he is not able to walk, but he has to try. "Ok don't stress yourself Mr. Arjun" told arohi and changed his medication. "Mr. Arjun, don't stress yourself but you have to try to move and walk. But don't take any type of strain. I will come tomorrow and do check up" told arohi. "Thank you doctor" told arjun and maan. She smiled and left from there.

At the same time geet came from hospital, she went to her checkup with jia. Though maan never went with her but he knows each and everything about their babies through prem or jia. She went to arjun's room to spend some time with him. seeing him awake and trying to talk to maan made her shock and happy. Both shock and happy to see her arjun jij/bhai awake. "Bhai" called geet and rushed to him, she couldn't control her tears. Arjun smiled widely at her and called "Gudiya" very slowly. "Aap thik hogaye bhai" told geet and hugged him. "I am so happy bhai" told geet and cried in her brother's arms. "Tum.. r.. ro ky.. kyun rahi ho" asked arjun. Geet broke the hug and smiled through tears. "You don't know bhai how happy I am" told geet. "Me.. too" told arjun. "Kaha gayi thi tum mai kab se tumari intsaar kar raha tha" asked arjun. "Hospital" told geet out of blue. "What happened to you?" asked arjun worried. Geet looked at maan worriedly, maan too looked at geet he sensed her worry and told "Bhai.. wo actually you are going to become badepapa (uncle)" it took time for arjun what exactly maan and looked at geet in confirmation. She looked down and nodded for a yes. Arjun's smile widened and he hugged geet. "I am so happy for you both" told arjun and blessed them. They talked for some more time and geet asked arjun to rest. He nodded as he too feeling tired and slept immediately. Geet left the room and maan too followed her. "Geet have your food and take medicines. You didn't rest today, sleep for sometime" told maan without looking at her and left to his room. Geet looked at his retreating figure and left to her room with tears in her eyes.

Days passed its been a month that arjun gained his conscious and now he is able to walk by his own and able to speak clearly. Maan and geet are very happy with his improvement and arohi too told the same its very quick improvement. But one thing is killing arjun and that is nothing but maan and geet. They looked so dull and he never saw them interacting with each other. Geet went to her routine checkup and maan was there at home. Arjun went to maan's room. "Bhai, do you want something?" asked maan. "I need to talk to you" told arjun seriously. "Is everything ok?" asked maan worriedly. "No nothing is ok. Where is geet?" asked arjun. "Geet, she went to hospital for checkup" told maan. "and you have sent her alone. Don't you think its your responsibility to go with her?" asked arjun. "Wo.. bhai I am busy with office work" told maan. "Don't lie maan, I am observing you from many days. Whats wrong with you two. You never talk to geet and she will be always lost in her own thoughts. What happened maan?" asked arjun. "Bhai, you are thinking too much nothing like that... " maan tried to coverup but stopped by arjun. "Don't lie maan, I know about both of you. Tell me the truth and where is naina?" asked arjun. Maan don't know what to say, if he tells the truth he is scared of arjun's reaction and he cant hide the truth too. One or the other day arjun will come to know the truth.

"Maan, I am asking you something" asked arjun seriously. "I am sorry bhai, I am very sorry. Maine aapke behen geet ko dhoka diya" told maan looking into arjun;s eyes. He told whatever he did when he came to know about the accident and then how all thought arjun was dead and about naina. And naina's intension towards geet and how geet is shattered and the sleeping pills thing, he told everything whatever happened till they saw him in the hospital.

By the time maan finished, arjun was fuming with anger. The whole room echoed with the slap, maan held his cheek and looked down not able to bear the pain and hatred on him that too from arjun, whom he loves the most. "Chi maan I never thought you will stoop so low to take revenge. And whatever happened was happened. What that innocent geet did that you gave her only pain. Tumko pata hai na wo tumse kitna pyaar karti hai, then why you did this maan?" asked arjun. And everything happened because of him. "Dammit" arjun banged his hand on the wall. "Bhai" called maan. "Don't call me like that maan, till geet accepts you I don't want to see your face. Get lost from here maan just get lost" roared arjun, maan without a word left from there. At the same time he can't leave arjun too so he went to outhouse. Arjun's heart pained to see maan in that state at the same time the truth of naina shattered him. And geet, what she did that she suffered the most for others deed. Now how can he face her even? But he is waiting for geet to come, he want to talk to her apologize her.

After sometime geet came home after checkup, arjun is waiting for her in the hall. She smiled at him but it didn't reach her eyes. "Bhai, what are you doing here. Did you have your medicines?" asked geet. Arjun made geet to sit on the couch. "What happened bhai?" asked geet. He cupped her face and asked "Will you ever forgive maan for what he did?" geet looked into his eyes and she came to know he knows everything. She closed her eyes and allowed the tears to flow down. "Bolo geet" asked arjun. "When I think of maan and his deeds it pains here bhai" told geet pointing towards her heart. "Par kya karu bhai uske bina mei jee nahi sakti, bohot pyaar karti hu mai maan se" told geet. "Kyat um usko maf kar payegi" asked arjun. "Bhai, you should feel happy for your brother. He loves you so much that he was ready to sacrifice his love. But I am scared bhai, though I want to go to maan but I am not because I am scared. If I love him then he will also leave me. I love my sister a lot but what she did. Mujhe darr hai ki jisse mai pyaar karti hu wo sab mujhe chod ke chale jayenge" cried geet, for the first time she is letting out her feelings. "I CANT LIVE WITHOUT MAAN" confessed geet.

"SIRF EK MAUKA GEET, EK MAUKA I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOUR HAND" asked maan.

Precap: Geet's answer.

Here is the next part of BD. Waiting for your likes and comments. 😊


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Edited by _GoldenStarz_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow superb part
Arjun recovering...maan told him about how he treated geet...arjun angry on maan...he in outhouse 😔
Geet confessed about her feelings towards maan to arjun
Precap...interesting
Edited by -Mithuna- - 11 years ago

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