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Geet saw him talking on the phone; she got up and hugged him from back resting her hands on his chest. Maan smiled and held her hands with his and continued talking on the phone. After completing talking on phone maan held her both hands in his and they stood for some time. "Geet andar chalte hai bohot tandh hai" told maan. Geet nodded, maan took her in his arms and placed her on the bed like a feather. Maan was about to go from there when geet stopped him. "Maan" called geet. Maan turned back and asked "What geet?" Geet nodded for a no and told "Aap mere saath baitiye na" Maan smiled and told "Sure, let me bring juice and medicines for you" he left from there. Geet waited for him and within minutes he was there in the room with medicines and juice. Geet got up had medicines and completed half glass. "Bas maan I am full" told geet and kept the glass aside. "Ok, now you rest its already late" told maan and made her lie down on the bed and he sat besides her caressing her hair, looking at her lovingly. Geet closed her eyes but she is not feeling sleepy, she opened her eyes and looked at maan. "Kya hua geet? Why you are not sleeping?" asked maan. Geet rested her head on his lap and told "I am not feeling sleepy" maan kissed her forehead and took her in his embrace. "Maan" called geet. "Hmmm" "Maan whatever happened in our life after that I never thought that I will be happy again. But babaji gave me so much happiness that I can't thank him enough. You complete me maan, mai aapse itna pyaar karti hu ki mann karta hai ki zindagi bar aapko aise dekhti rahu aur aapke bahon mein aisi rahu and I want to die in your arms" told geet. Maan placed his hand on her lips and nodded in a no.

"Geet, don't you dare to talk rubbish again" chided maan. Geet smiled and told "I am sorry maan, mai tho bas aise hi keh rahi thi" "Kabhi bhi aisa mat kehna, tumare bina mere zindagi hi kya hai geet. Maan ki jaan geet mei basti hai. Mai kabhi nahi socha geet tum mujhe doosri mauka dogi. What I did is a sin but you are so kind hearted that you gave second chance to a sinner like me" told maan and a lone tear escaped from his eyes. Geet wiped off his tears and told "Maan, I gave you second chance because I understood why you did all those things. Aap apne bhai se itna pyaar karte hai ki unki koone ne dukh mei aap apne pyaar ko bhool gayi. Maan, you almost attempted suicide. Uss din mujhe ehsaas hua ki mai aapke bina jee nahi sakti. Uss din aapko hospital mei dekhne ke baad mujhse ehsaas hua ki geet ki jaan maan mei basti hai. Aur maan ke bina geet ki zindagi adoori hi nahi bekaar hai. When I came to know the truth about di, I don't know what to do. I started thinking about you and me being in your place. But I couldn't forget those black days of our life. Those 3 months you have taken care of me like a princess, bas mai phir maan ki hogayi hu" by the time geet ended she became emotional and started crying clinging on to maan.

"Geet, jaan please don't cry. Look at me geet" told maan and cupped her cheek. He kissed her tears and wiped them off, "Don't let these precious pearls come out, I want my jaan to be happy and smiling always. And from now on we will not think about our past which will only give pain, ok?" Geet nodded like a small baby and wiped her tears. "I love you, Jaan" whispered maan; geet smiled and hugged him tight. Maan felt so good seeing her smiling face, he want to see her smile he can do anything for that. He patted her to sleep and geet slept hugging him.

Geet is sleeping in maan's arms peacefully, but during mid-night geet felt uncomfortable and is tossing on the bed. Now-a-days maan is very much careful and slight movement from geet, maan would wake up. And now maan got up seeing her uncomfortably tossing on the bed. "Geet" called maan. Geet opened her eyes, "Kya hua jaan?" asked maan. Geet is trying to get up but she is not able to do so. "Geet, are you ok?" asked maan worried seeing her face in pain. "Maan, I am not able to get up. Its paining a lot" told geet holding her stomach. "Jaan, please try to get up. I will bring some water" told maan and got up, before he leave the room geet shouted. "Maan, don't go. Don't leave me, I am not able to bear the pain don't go anywhere" shouted geet. Maan is so much worried seeing geet's condition. Maan took geet in his arms and told "Jaan, we will go to hospital I will call arohi" not wasting any time maan first called arjun who came to their room. Maan called to arohi and she told to bring geet to hospital. "ok" told maan and cut the call.

"Bro, we should go to hospital" told maan, arjun rushed outside and is ready with car. Maan took geet in his arms and settled on the back seat. "Jaan, breathe in and breathe out dear. See we are going to hospital, everything will be fine" maan tried to soothe her pain but nothing is working out. Geet is screaming in pain while maan is worried about her. "Maan bohot dard horaha hai" cried geet. "Some more time geet, we are going to hospital" told maan and kissed her forehead. They reached hospital; arohi is waiting for them outside with a stretcher. They took geet to labor room, while maan and arjun are pacing outside. Maan is tensed and worried with each passing second, geet's screams and painful face are making him weak. "Bro geet" maan almost cried. Arjun hugged him and told "Be strong maan, nothing gonna happen to geet. Your babies are on the way" maan continued pacing and waiting for some news.

After like 2 hours arohi came outside. "Arohi, how is geet?" asked maan. "Congrats maan, its boys" chirped arohi. Maan broke into a wide smile. Arjun hugged maan and congratulated him. "Can we go?" asked maan. "No maan babies will be under observation for 24 hrs" told arohi. "Why? Is there any problem?" asked maan worried. "No maan, actually geet is still in 8th month. So its better for the babies to be under observation. You can see geet once she is shifted to ward" told arohi. Maan is still worried, "Can I see babies from far atleast" asked maan curiously. Seeing his curious face arohi agreed and took him towards the babies ward. There are 2 babies in the incubator, one is awake and moving his hands and legs while other is sleeping. Maan smiled looking at them and caressed the door as if caressing babies.

After some time geet is shifted to ward, maan and arjun saw her pale face. Maan kissed her forehead, she is still unconscious. "Geet, I can't tell you how happy I am" tears rolled down his cheeks. He looked at arjun, "Bro, I became father. I became father" he hugged his brother feeling so happy. "I am also very happy for you maan" they are waiting for geet to woke up and convey this happy news. It's like god listened to them and after some time geet got her conscious back and opened her eyes slowly. She smiled faintly at maan and arjun. "Babies" asked geet. "By tomorrow they will be with us geet. Its baby boy's jaan" told maan. Geet smiled widely and thanked her babaji for everything. Due to tiredness she fell asleep. Maan and arjun were there in the hospital, they didn't leave geet for a second.

Next day afternoon two nurses came with babies. They placed babies beside geet, everyone started at their bundle of joy. "They are so small" told an excited arjun. Geet half sat on the bed and took one baby in her arms, she kissed his tiny hands and legs. Arohi came took the other baby. Maan and arjun kept admiring babies, "Maan, lijiye apne bte ko" told geet and extended her hands giving baby to maan. "No geet, he is too small. What if I hurt him" told maan scared. Geet smiled and told "Nothing will happen maan; mere bte ko uska papa aur bade papa bhi chahiye. Kyun bhai?" asked geet. "Geet, sach kahe tho mujhe bhi darr lag raha hai" told arjun. Arohi smiled at him and asked him to take baby from her. "Arjun lijiye kuch nahi hoga, hum hai na" told arohi. Arjun extended his hands to take baby from her. Finally one boy is in his bade papa's arms. Baby smiled at his bade papa and its maan's turn to take the baby. He took the baby from geet carefully. Once the baby is in maan's arms, he is just staring at his son without blink. Maan smiled when baby is kicking him with his legs. Every one smiled at father-son duo. After a week geet got discharged and everyone left home. Even arohi too accompanied them as it will be difficult for geet to take care of 2 babies.

Geet along with babies settled on the bed, maan and arjun in this week made whole arrangements for babies and geet so that they won't feel uncomfortable when they are back. Geet took one baby and arohi took other one, they placed them on the crib (Cradle). "Geet, you too rest, otherwise these won't allow to you sleep when they get up" told arohi. "Thank you arohi, you helped me a lot" thanked geet. Arohi smiled and told "You are like my sister geet and never thank me I have right to take care of my sister" Geet hugged arohi by her stomach, "Thank you very much, I always wanted a sister like you and god gave me in you" told geet. Geet broke the hug; arohi wiped her tears and caressed her hair. "Geet, did you think about names" asked arohi. "No arohi. Maan and bhai are busy in thinking names" told geet. "Oh that's why they both are surfing on net from last week" "Oh god how much time they take" chided geet. "Arohi, I want to ask you something?" "Ha geet bolo" "Arohi, you love bhai right?" asked geet. Arohi stared at her for some time and told "Geet, ab mujhe jaana hai. I have some work" "Arohi, don't try to avoid the topic. Everytime you come here for checkup I can see in your eyes. You love bhai" asked geet. Arohi didn't talk anything for some time lastly she nodded for a yes. Geet is so happy.

"Arohi, you don't know how happy I am. Whenever I see bhai alone I use to get angry on my di for cheating on bhai. But I felt so happy seeing you and bhai" exclaimed geet happily. "Geet please don't talk to arjun about this. I don't him to be uncomfortable with our relation and I know its not easy for him to forget your sister" told arohi. "Let me talk to him arohi, we will not pester on him. final decision will be bhai's" told geet. Arohi smiled and told "Ok geet take care, I will come in the evening" "Bye arohi"

"Maan, bhai will you tell me the names for god sake" asked a frustrated geet. "Geet just wait we are confused with few names" told maan still thinking. "But I am done with names" told arjun. "Are you sure bro" asked maan. "Yes I am damn sure" told arjun. "If you are sure then please tell me" asked geet. "Rehan (blessing from god) and Rithul (truth seeking)" told both maan and arjun. "Rehan and Rithul" whispered geet and smiled. "I loved the names" told geet smiling at them. They sighed and hugged geet sideways from either side. One of the baby started crying for his feed. Geet took him from the crib; arjun went outside to give privacy. Geet lifted her top and placed baby carefully near her b**. Maan smiled at her and took another one. By the time geet completed feeding other one started crying. Maan gave him and geet started feeding him. One slept immediately and other one is in playful mood. Maan is playing with him, he is pulling his papa's hair with his tiny tiny fists. Geet laughed at them, maan is making funny faces while he is giggling at him. After playing with his papa, he slept in his arms.

"Maan, I need to talk to you something important" told geet, sitting beside. Maan side hugged her and asked "Bolo geet" "Baat yeh hai ki, arohi loves arjun bhai" told geet. Maan is shocked and stared at geet for a second but soon broke into big smile and asked "Really geet, that's great news" "But maan what will be bhai's reaction. It's high time for him to move on" told geet sadly. "Yes geet, I understand but we should not lose hope" told maan. "Hmmm"

"Maan, geet when you are planning for naming ceremony. I will call panditji" asked arjun. "Babies and their mother is angry on their bade papa. So we won't talk to him, haina?" asked geet looking at babies. Babies smiled at their mom as if they understood why she is doing this. "Baap re why they are angry on me. What their bade papa did" asked arjun looking at babies and geet. "Babies want their bade mom also" told geet and looked at arjun. The smile wiped off from him face. Arjun got up but geet caught his hand. "Bhai, please listen to me" asked geet. "Geet please" requested arjun. "No bhai, just think about yourself, you are alone" "I am not alone geet, I have you maan and now babies. I am happy in my life" told arjun. "I can see how happy you are. Once you asked me to give chance to maan, now give chance to yourself bhai. Move on in your life, you deserve to be happy. Why you are wasting your life for that person who don't deserve. Think of your loved once bhai and the girl you love you a lot" tried geet to convince arjun. "Yes bro, we want to see you settled in your life. Like you want to see me happy, I too want to see you happy" told maan. "I need some time" told arjun and left from there. "Thank god at least bhai asked for time" told geet in excitement. Maan smiled at her child like excitement.

2 months passed, naming ceremony is like a grand affair. They officially named kids "Rehan Singh Khurana and Rithul Singh Khurana" One is all silent types and is like a good boy types and other one is all naughty naughty, always ready to trouble his papa and mama when are busy and not giving attention to him. "Rehan tho tujh par gaya maan, hamesha koi na koi gadbad karta rehta hai. Aur mera ritu mujh jaisa hai so good and understanding" complained geet. "Oh madam, its reverse. Ritu mera jaisa aur ueh badmaash rehan tum jaisa" retorted maan. "Hawww maan, aap bohot bure ho" pouted geet. "Aisa mat karo jaan, mujhe kuch kuch hota hai" whispered maan looking at her with bed room eyes. Geet blushed and hugged him.

Months passed maan, geet and arjun got busy taking care of babies but geet and maan is trying to convince arjun for marriage. One fine day arjun said ok for marriage. Geet and maan are over the moon, that time they revealed about arohi's love to arjun. Arjun is shocked and felt happy that arohi loves him. Some where his soft corner for arohi made him love her too. Maan and geet talked with arohi's father and he is very happy finally his daughters dream is coming true. Arjun and arohi spent time with each other to understand each other. Arjun told everything about his past, naina and everything. "Arohi, I don't want any trouble or problem in future that's the reason I am saying everything. I hope you understand me" told arjun. "Arjun, I know everything about you but my respect and love for you grew when you yourselves told me the truth" confessed arohi. Arjun felt very happy and they became good friends and lovers. After 5 months their marriage got fixed and it was a grand affair. Arjun and arohi are happy in their lives so as maan geet and their boys.

3 years passed, arohi is expecting and geet is taking care of her. Ritu sat silently beside his mom while rehan is playing outside. "Rehan, come and have breakfast" shouted geet. "I don't want geet" shouted rehan. "I am warning you rehan, by the time I count 10 you should be here" shouted back geet. Rehan came running to the hall, "Come and have breakfast" ordered geet. "No no no I want chocolate" told rehan. "Only when you eat BF" told geet. Rehan made a puppy face and thrown the ball with anger. "Wait geet, I will call bade papa" told rehan and ran upstairs. "Bade papa, bade papa" shouted rehan. Arjun took him in his arms and came downstairs. "Who is scolding my son here" asked arjun. "Bade papa, rehan is troubling mom" complained ritu. "Hayeee mera beta, iss ghar mein ek tum hi ho mujhe samajta hai" told geet and kissed ritu's cheek looking at rehan. Rehan pouted and got down from arjun's arms, he went to his mom and asked "Won't you give me kissy?" he pouted. Geet along with ritu kissed rehan. Children saw their papa near the door. "Papa" shouted both and ran to his. Maan bent down and took both of them in his arms. They kissed him on his cheeks and maan gave him super cool smile and entered into the house. Geet felt so happy seeing him after a week, while maan and arjun discussed about the meeting. Arohi got ready to go to hospital.

Maan went to his room to catch some sleep as he is tired of flight journey. "Maan, aap fresh hokar aayiye mai breakfast lagati hu" told geet coming inside the room. Maan hugged her from behind. Geet gasped and sighed "Maan you scared me" Maan pinned her to the wall and whispered "I missed you so much baby, be ready for long night" Geet blushed and pushed him away. Maan rested for some time and the whole day he played with kids. Geet too joined him after lunch, afternoon kids are sleeping and geet is doing something on the laptop. "Geet, what are you doing?" asked maan. "Nothing maan, msging to vipul. I called him yesterday but he was busy" told geet. "You are done with story?" asked maan. "Yes maan, when vipul called me and told about the cast I completed the story" told geet. "Geet, tum hamesha se ek actor banna chati ho that's why you participated in a competition and won that. But because of children and me you didn't go for acting career. Geet I always think you couldn't fulfill your dreams because of me" told maan sadly. "Maan, I warn you why do you think all rubbish. How many times I told you I was interested but not now. Now I am a successful director and what more I want. Whenever I am busy in shootings you will take care of both children and office. In fact I should thank you for helping me" told geet. "Geet, why you are thanking me as a husband and father it's my responsibility to take care of my family. I am doing this because I love you and I don't want you to compromise on anything" told maan. "Yeh hui na baat, ab sorry sorry bolne se kya hoga. Maan this movie will release on your birthday, I am damn excited" told geet chirpily. "Story kya hai" asked maan. "Our love story" told geet and smiled widely. "Iss baar hero bann gaya villain" teased maan and got a slap from geet. They both smiled at each other.

Their burning desire has turned into a pure love. A love which changed everything in their life, a man who always thinks of his lust is head over heels in love with an angel. And the angel who is broken beyond repair once again gave him a chance and now she is really an angel for his family. Their family completed with the children and arjun's.

A million stars up in the sky
one shines brighter I can't deny
A love so precious a love so true
a love that comes from me to you
The angels sing when you are near
within your arms I have nothing to fear
You always know just what to say
just talking to you makes my day
I love you honey with all of my heart
together forever and never to part.


(Poem Courtesy : Google)


"I love you maan" "I love you geet" the story ended and there is a huge round of applause in the hall. Geet smiled and thanked everyone.

"Maan did you like it?" asked geet. "What geet, I loved it jaan. You are truly an angel. I am so lucky to have you in my life" whispered maan. Geet is so happy and hugged him tight. "This is my best birthday gift ever jaan" whispered maan. Everyone reached home from the premium show, once maan and geet are in their room. Maan sealed his lips with hers in a soul searing kiss, thanking her in every way possible. The night ended with their passion and welcomed new morning with lots of love and hope.


THE END


Here is the epilogue of BD... I thank each and every one for supporting me through out this FF. Without you guys i couldnt complete this FF..

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Edited by _GoldenStarz_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful end to a story

truly they had suffered so much tat at one point it was impossible for them to come together but they had their love and more of arjun who was their bond to come together

finally the whole family is together with love and happiness
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome epilogue
Boys as twins
uperb ending
Finally arohi and arjun marries
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wow lovely emotional heart touching epil..te way my maan taking care of his geet and both talking abt they love and past was lovely emotional..te way geet in pain and my maan ki worry and te way he is happy seeing his angels and te way he holding him was lovely emotional heart touching..te way arjun and my maan, arohi looking after geet and angels was lovely..te way geet talking with arohi and arjun and te way my maaneet making them together was lovely.. i was worry for them..te way my maaneet ki angels name was lovely ...te way naughty rehan and cute ritu was lovely combination like my maaneet...te way geet became director and my maaneet ki love day by day growing was lovely, emotional..te way geet making they journey as film and gifting to my maan on his b'day and te way my maan ki happiness and kissing him was lovely emotional..i love te epi so so much
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thanku for giving a such lovely heart touching emotional ff.. tis will stay in my heart forever...te way my maaneet journey started a strangers and fall in first sight and both were craving to be each other and te way destinty made them to burn in pain and te way again they angels made them together.. and arjun and arohi i love them.. i love tis ff so so so much. i will miss my maaneet in tis ff so much
Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum epilogue
happy ending
luvd it
rehan is soo cute n ritu is lyk mom geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Dear..😃😃😃
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I'm Ur New Reader, but story ended 😕😕...
Just got link last night, & read all in one go...
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Amzingly written...
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So muCh painful,
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yet superbb story...
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Maan used geet to take revenge of his bro's death...



Both loved each other a lot... Superbbb 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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LOve Nelu 😊😊😊😳😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
maneet blessed with boys
both are opposite in characters..
arjun n arohi too got married n geet became a successful director..
he filled her life with his love..
n their family is completed..
nice ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update maneet happy with twins rehan rithul good names maneet convincing arjun arohi to marry finally they are happy geet writing story wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful end
loved story very much

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