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Lakshu,priya,mona ,lily and Sona...🤗


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waiting for the next part
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hello ... kaisa chal raha hain weekend???
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babie change the heading from "updated" to "updating"
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hello ... kaisa chal raha hain weekend???



😆😆 Hi .. kuch khas nahi .. aaj rest kiya ..😛
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have to show u something... load ho raha hain
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busy ho kya??? kahaa ho??? res bhi nahi kiya...
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.














Part - 32



He got up from d bed and came infront of her * Geet was shocked with his sudden action and looked at him * there was a genuine guilt on his face and his eyes were looking at her pleadingly. He took d tray from her hand and placed that on d table * he made her to sit on d edge of bed holding her sholders and sat on d floor near her * he held her hands in his and pleaded.

Maan: please Geet trust me , i didn't do that knowingly ... gusse aur tension mei meine pee li aur yahan aane ke baad mujhe kuch pata nahi.I don't know maine kaise behave kiya? I'm sorry Geet .

Geet was looking at him continuously and thinking that is this d same person who behaved and talked to me so rudly? A person who always threw draggers of his anger at me now ranting sorry ,like a small child for his mistake. It's OK .


Geet: It's OK, MK .. I'm not angry and u did nothing wrong * but i felt bad when i saw u drunk , u were not in sense * then she looke at him with fake anger .. Mr Khurana iss baar to chod deti hu but next time essa khuch kiya na to mujhse koi hope matt rakhna ...


Maan: no , it wont happen again .. Sorry. Wo gusse mei ho gaya essa .


Geet: gussa kya sirf aapko hi aata hei.. kisi aur ko nahi , takleef sirf aapko hoti hei .. kisi aur ko nahi ? aap sense mei nahi thy aur kuch galat ho jata to kaise cover up kerty ?


Maan stayed there with a hanging head * Geet felt bad for him and tried to ease d situation .. OK, be careful next time, ab coffee pee lo warna thandi ho jayegi , aur nahi banaungi .. bahot advantage le rahe ho.


Maan looked at her with puppy face and said: Kuch khane ko milega ? bhook bhi lagi hei.


Geet looked at him awe ... khane ko iss time ???


Maan: meine dinner nahi kiya .


Geet: per ku nahi kiya ? aur ab itna late neeche jaker kya banau aapke liye?


Maan: tumhare paas hei to .. kuch de do .. neeche matt jao .. it won't look nice.


Geet: kya khaoge? Pasta bana du .. chalega?


Maan: haan .. kuch bhi .. sorry i'm troubling u this time.


Geet shook her head helplessly saying .. pata nahi kya-kya kerna padega and got up to make something for him * after some time he was having dinner giving her a sheepish smile.


Maan: tum roz essa khana kaise khati ho? bore nahi hoti?


Geet: aadat hei hostel se .


Maan: hostel se ? kahan?


Geet: hmmm , Delhi I** hostel.


Maan was amazed with that she was an Enge. : which stream ?


Geet: ECE.


Maan: hmmm .. aur usse pahale? He was eating and enquiring about her, he was becoming very curious to know about her.


Geet: Shimla, Dalhousie .


Maan: hmmm. He finished his meal and looked at her obliged . Thanks Geet ,for all .


Geet didn't reply and lay down to sleep adjesting herself on d settee * Maan looked at her and many thoughts crossed his mind * he recollected her words which she said to him and thought ... kya ye bhi meri tarah pareshaan thi kal ? isse bhi to bura laga hoga , lekin issne situation ko handle kiya mere liye , meri family ke liye * she is helping and adjusting in every tough situation but why she is living this isolated life even khana bhi nahi khati iss ghar ka .. Ku ? jab yahan rahana accept ker sakti hei to atleast khana to sabke sath kha le properly .


Maan was feeling very bad for Geet *he remembered his behaviour towards her and his thoughts and conceptions for her after their marriage * he thought that she was also form that family and that B****'s cousin so she would be like her * everything which were related to her only reminded her betrayal and in his fit of rage he accused her that she was also like her sis , but now watching her from close , her adjustment , care and respect for his family were forcing him to think about her again and again * he didn't know anything about her, but he was curious to know about her and wanted to talk to her * her indifference was pinching him * he lay down to sleep immersed in her thoughts.


Days started pasing on a normal pace * Dadima ,GD and Pam went to Agra , Mathura and Vrindavan for 4-5 days tour and back at home, but Maan didn't change his routine in their absence and came to sleep in Geet's room as usual . Now they become comfortable in each other company and sometime have a lil talk while having their coffee together.


Mahinder was compleatly shifted to FH after Brij's marriage* his responsibilities towards that family has completed and he declaired that now onward he won't come there * they have their own family and free to live as they want even he gave his house(Haweli) to them * his duties and commitments r over now.


Mahinder was in Army **** hospital for his annual check up and waited for his turn in d waiting arena when he got a call from Rajji * he moved to a distanced corner to talk to her .


Mahinder: hello , haan bolo rajji.


Rajji: Mahi , coming week me karwachouth festival hei , aur Geet ka pahale hei to puri family ke liye shagun dena hoga.. aur Diwali per hi * tum manage ker loge ya mei aau wahan?


Mahinder: Shagun ??? Guddu mujhse legi? Mai kaise usse baat karu iss bare mei? Usne to khud ko sabse alag ker liya .. bilkul akele.


Rajji: ab to wo yahan bhi nahi aati , maine kaha to jawab diya ki ... Aap sab ki responsibility ab katam .. aap sab ne apna ferz pura ker diya , maine apna.


Mahinder understood d meaning of those words, but he was helpless at his place.


Rajji: Mahi , bolo kya tum manage ker loge ?


Mahinder: Rajji mei tumhe eve mei phone kerta hu , mujhe thoda time do , OK. He cut d call, stayed there for few min thinking about d matter and moved to go but felt a tug on his shoulder * he turned his face to see d source and got a shock of his life .. few word slipped from his lips ... R a n o.



Precap - some past ...


Part - 33

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3812181/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-4-updated-pt38-pg136-24-nov?pn=40





Sorry for mistakes.

r

Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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aakhir angry bird ne sorry bol hi diya geet se... but i really wish he remembers his slap and asks forgiveness for that...

GD and pam nahi hain ... then too he is staying with her... geet also have no prob in that,... wow...

looking forward for more opening up between the duo...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago

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