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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Its awesome dear
Its written superb
Do continue and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
it's amazing and very very interesting concept. i loved it so much. two best friends are again interacting after a long time. both likes each other from childhood but didn't tell each other. fb become their helper to make them together. very exited for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
can u plz add the index in the first page, first post?
part 1 - page 1
part 2 - page 2
part 3 - page 3

and edit ur title too part 3 page 3?

and also can u post the link in this thread when u update?
FF Daily Updates 8
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was amazing. very very beautiful and unique love story. their bonding is increasing day by day. destiny meet them together again for make them together for ever
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
part 1&2&3 super
very interesting love story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
i read all 3 parts.. loved it... please provide an index and add me in ur pm listtt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
ALL PARTS ARE AWESOME
I LIKE IT VERY MUCH
ITS VERY INTERESTING STORY

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
read all 3 parts
awesome updates..
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
PArt 4

Am So SO So Sorry for a LATE UPDATE... but seriously was busy these dayss...am so sorry.. and thnkss to alll for appreciating muh wrk.. i will try to update u all as soon as possible .. may b alternate days..

Here You GO

there Love knew no bonds... their bonding their love was getting stronger day by day... each and evry day brought them more close to each othr...
then finally the day arrived wen Geet's parents were coming back to thre home aftr 1 month..!!

GEet's Parents arrived...
they all had a nice normal chat.. geet texted Maan "dont worry mom dad re here i will nt b able to call u now... the way we used to chat the whole day we cnt.. we hv got some restrictions...hope ew understand i love ew baby.. tc of urself.. btw Good Morning Jaan...Get up now.. ummmwwuuuaahh... nd lisen to my voice in ur mobile..dont miss me much..uthhhkeetext krdena.."

MAan Got Up Aftr some time... wen he saw her text he was quite sad... actullly he was happpie finally her parents are back... but thn somewhere he was thinking tht if thy shud nt have been here she wud have woke him up...!!
but then also...he had that big smile reading that " Ilove ew...baby.."

he knew that she wud be busy with her parents... and he didnt want to create prblms fr her.. so he didnt called her...just texted her " i miss EW,.."
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the day was paassing.. both were restles... in this 1 month... they were damn close.. thy were togethr the whole day.. full day conversations and all.. bought them closer nd closer.. this was the 1st day where thy were helpless...thy have to stay away.. frm morning thy didnt had a proper convo..!!


Finally.. it was AFTERNOOn... when all were asleep. she got a chance..!! and called him...
That Name " heartbeat" was flashing on his mobile with a cute ringtone.. he undrstud its geet... ( Maan saved geet's name as "heartbeat")

Geet- Maan... eehh.. i missed u so much
Maan- shh.. ab shant u sonud so restlesss yr.. calm down.. dont be so hyper...relax...
Geet- vo u knw wat.. mom dad are here i seriously didnt got a chance to talk to u.. u knw those stiches scared me..
Maaan- stitchess??
Geet- yeah.. vo dad k hand me heart me nd leg me... stiches hain... those stiches scared me...u knw meko kabhi aisa kuch hua naa.. i will die but me operation nii krvaungi.. neva eva..!!marr jaungi but.. ( before she can cont.. he interuupted)
Maan- sshh..chup ew idiot... 1st of alll... i wont let anything happen to ew...tumhe kunnai hoga.. nd 2nd agar ho b gya naa toh i promise ew...me b OT me chalunga..ew dont worry
Geet- haaw.. haaye ni... u serious?? o.O no no... no operation got tht...
Maan- vo toh tum krvaogi... but tumhe kuch hoga tab naa
Geet- hogya toh?
Maan- thappad khaogi.. got that.. just shut up...
Geet- MAaan tum bhi naa :/
MAan- shut up..!! samajh aya?? btw Geet vo...
Geet interuupted...
Geeet- am sorrrie Maan mum is here... talk to u latr bye..
Maan- suno toh Geet

BUT SHE HANGED UP>...
Maan- Sasumaaa... wrng time pe aaye aap bhi :/ huh koi nahi... aapko pata lenge hum.. then
aapki permission k sath aapki beti se baat krvaungi...
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This started happening daily... they didnt get much time to talk to eachothr... earlier... they use to have a whole day convo nd now.. hardly thy get much time to tlk to eachothr.. wich was making maan lose all his temper..!! he was just hating all this... it wwas all frustrtating fr him.. daily bahane's nd all... daily prblms... he decided to talk to her mom..!!nd develpoe a healthy frndship..cuz he didnt want to lose her... he knew tht becuz of all this... may b some misundrstndings cn occur nd thy may lose thre relationship... he loved her alot... he didnt wanted to lose her..

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One Day they were having a convo...
Geet- Maan umm.. m tensed
Maan- i kow wat u mean baby...
Geet- hmm...
Maan- dont sound so low yea...u trust me na... i have got a plan..
Geet- kya??(charged up)
Maan- u told me naa... ur mom is very friendly... i wanna tlk to her.. u told me naa many of ur frnds are connnected with her... i also wanna talk to her
Geet- u sure?? btw a superb plan... i will make u talk to her... veise b mene bht btaya unhe aaapke baare me..
Maan- ahema hem... tum se aap pe :P sahi h sahi h
Geet- aere yaar... btw u sure naa... mum se baat kroge :P
MAan- haan haan...!! kyu :/ doubt hai...
Geet- hmm... chalo hum bahut tym se baat krhe h... kal baat krte hain please...!! homewrk bhi krna h nd thn kal test h padhna bhi...
Maan- ATB swthrt,,,!! love ew... give ur test... do the best ew can... i love ew
Geet- thnnkweeii so much...
Maan- suno toh
Geet- i love ew..
Maan- tumhe keise pta i was about to say that not fair :(
Geet- i knw u vry well Maan... about ur evry beat...!!
Maan- i love ew shona...
Geet- u make me blush always... now stop giving me butterflies pleasee...
Maan- vo toh impossible hai... butterflies raheingi jb tk me rhunga..nd me toh 24*7 hu :P
Geet- ahaan... nahii naa... bye... now
Maan- oye hoye... u r totally red
Geet- tumhe keise pta?? (she luks here nd thre... if he is thre luking at her?? )
Maan- oye mishty.. idhar udhar mat dekho... mera jassoosss u k paass h
Geet- Maan.. kaun?? u dnt trust me?? ye sab han?? jasoosss nd all?? hadd hoti h mtlb... aisa ni hota.. u dnt trust me... ( befre she cn say anything.. maan interrupted)
Maan- ssshhh...ruka superfast express...shant.. saansss toh le lo...
Geet- kaun h vo?
Maan- My heart u duffer..!!
Geet- huh/...
Maan- gussa nahi :P go and study now :P
Geet- u bhi naa Maan.. bye...love eeww..

AND SHE HANGED UP..
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The days went off..!! her exams were over now...!! she made some plan...nd she just told her mom about him.. all his good points especciaallyy.. she becomes so xcited wen she tlks about him to her mum.. whihch didnt went unnoticed by her momm...

Mom- aere re shaant.. me bhi usse baat krna chahungi..cummon meri beti ko sudhar dia ussne
Geet- sure mom..

HER CELL RANGED... IT WAS Maan

Geet- mom.. its MAAN... ( that happiness nd excitement proved that she liked him.. whihch her mom noticed but thn thought that thre's nothing like that and all... )

Geet- hii MAAN. u knw ek dum ryt tym pe call kia.. lo MOM se baat kro
MAan- but shona.. me kya baat krunga unse :/
Geet- darpok >:O lo baat kro..
MAan- okie meri maaa

MOm- hii beta
MAAn- hii aunty,,,
Mom- keise ho aap...?
Maan- me theek hu.. aap btaiye..
Mom- bas sab theek..!! or btao.. kya krrhe ho??
Maan- nothing aunty bas cc ka homewrk nd all...
Mom- ohh tht's really good.. is jhalli ko kuch sikhao... i've heard alot about ew...nd i knw she listen's to u.. so sudhar do meri beti ko if possible...
MAan- ye b koi bolne vali bat h aunty.. obviously... padhna is imp (he was mking his impression)
Mom- okiee/.. good beta... beta i will tlk to u ltr... i've got some wrk to do
Maan- yea sure aunty... bye tc
Mom- bye beta ..tk cr..

GEet-Maan- kya baat huii btao naa she is cool naa...
Maan- ew idiot.. i was tlking to her.. with my heart in my mouth... inna soch smjh ke.. poochlena unsse.. kuch bura naa bol dia ho...
Geet- u aisa nnii krskte kabhi i know...
MAan- acha.. but fir bhi.. u were ryt she is really cool..."".u've got a nice mom baby""...

( these words made her silent and sad.. which didnt went unnotied by him...)
Maan- kya hua shona??
Geet- nothing maan...
Maan- sshhh.. chupp i cn sense it.. temme kya hua...
Geet- nii .. bas butterflies tang krrhi ... nthing else
Maan- mese jhoot bologi common...
Geet- nahi vo..
Maan- temme...
Geet- actually i've hided something frm u..apni life ka ek sach ni bataya tumhe...
Maan- kya?? temme.. i promise u ko kuch ni bolunga.. just imagine feel my presence.. m by ur side.. hugging uh.. ur head on my chest.. umwwuuaahh.. fr ur frehead...dnt b sad.. cummon temme kya hua??
Geet- Maan.. amm adopted.. they are not my real parents....
MAan- stupid.. thy r nt less thn ur real parents... issme will tlk later... u just rona mat...see meko jokes niii yaad arhe... m by ur side...just see...
GEet- maan plss..give me sumtym.. will tlk aftr sumtym pls...
Maan- in one condition..
Geet- kya??
Maan- u rogi nii... nd khud ko alone nii smjhogi.. u knw m thre with u.. alwys...!! nd alone feel hoga u will tlk to me.. promise kro
Geet- i promise..!!
Maan- meri ksm
Geet- haan baba... i love ew nd thnxx
Maan- thappadd khaogi ab.. luv u more shona...
Geet-bye

SHE HANGED UP..!!

that was the biggest truth of her life... which she told him..!!

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Will Try TO UPdate Soon..!! thanksss to all... for their pm's and thre support comments like nd evrything..
LOve ew guys..thnxx a ton...
Vannshi.. baby here u go 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
thank you for pm

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