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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
awesome update...⭐️...Geet and Maan went close day by day...☺️...Geet's parents came and she messaged Maan that from now on they can't chat the whole day and made him wake up from his sleep...🥱...Maan was sad to read this but felt happy 4 her......Maan couldn't tolerate this restrictions and all...😔...Maan called Geet and said that he wants to meet her mom...Geet had a plan...😉...Geet told Maan that her mom is very friendly...Geet talked to her mom about Maan...😳...Her mom understood that she likes him very much...❤️...Maan called Geet and she made Maan talked to her mom......They talked to each other and Maan told that really Geet has got a very cool mom...😎...Geet had tears in her eyes...😭...Maan asks her what's the reason...❓...Geet says nothing...After asking repeatedly, Geet finally says that they are not her real parents...😭...she is an adopted child...😔...Maan tells her not to cry...Geet says she wants to live alone for sometime...🤔...Maan says in one condition that she won't cry...👏...Geet promises and hangs up the call...😛...its lovely...👍🏼...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
wow...
it was Just fav...

hope MaaneetKa relation All accept...
but somewhere i will Regarding maan face sone prob would come...

let swe aage kya hota...
she is Adopted b still Maan disnt leave her side .:b)

i liked the way u describe in ur Babyish Language ;b)

hope All goes good inthe Lovestory...

finally Ab jaldi Next Part de

waitibg...

luv
ur lil Devil
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
I felt sad 4 Geet wen she said she is an adopted daughter.But d way Maan cheered her up was sweet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
PART 5

here ew go..!!
she was wheeping...
he was sensing sumthing wrng... was feeling damn uncmfrtable.. nd restles.. he knew sumthing wrng is gng onn.. she sounded damn sad...!! so what if she is adopted she still have parents with her.. he knew its hurting her... but no one cn change the truth..!! she have got lovely parents..!! he have to xplain her all this at anycost...
she have to realize tht thre r many children who are without parents.. she have actually got sumone to love her..she is lucky for that... the gurl who thinks positive all the time...is taking evrything wrng... he need to tshow her the positive sight of all this... he decided to talk to her..!! explain her...but she was not ready to tlk so he decided first let evrything gt bck to nrml thn he will tlk to her...
they didnt had a convo aftr tht...!! donno but she was not getting the courage to talk to him...nd thre he was dieing each sec fr listening her voice...

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AT NIGHT :

Geet was lying down on her bed... turning her sides (taking karvats) getting restles...she knew that he was worreid fr her...she knew he was waiting fr her text...she was feeling alone...but she didnt wanted anyone to interfere in all ths... she wanted to be alone.. she just remembered the days wen thy used to tlk to eachothr...the whole day..about thre future...marrriage nd all...all the dreams thy saw..
but now she was doubting her decision to be with him...she thought he is pure but she is not.. she hd so many bf's... she dnt dsrv him..he has his own parents...but she dont.. she is dfrnt frm him... she felt low...as if she didnt dsrved him...but she did..thre was a furly battle gng on btween her heart and mind.. she thought she is not prfct fr him...but she still wanted him..needed him..her heart knew that she loves him...but her mind was not ready to accept the truth... finally she got to an conclusion and her LOVE won the battle...she thought... wtefva the matter is.. she know he loves her..nd she cnt lvie wdout him..but still sumwhere in her mind...tht doubt was hidden...and she never knew tht this may also lead to a bad time period..!! that doubt may increase.. but at prsnt wat she wanted nd chhhoosed was him..!! her MAAN... she had tears which didnt roled down her cheek and slept ...


on the other hand MAAN...
he wanted to talk to her ..but was restless... he didnt wanted to cry...he didnt know the reason..y a tear rolled down his cheek...he just hugged her pic...nd slept..!!he didnt know the reason of tht tear...That tear rolled down frm his eyes ..!! becuz...she had tears in her eyes...which didnt came out but it came out frm his eyes... the real LOVE the real bonding..!!
if ew love someone... miracles like this truly happens ...

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MORNING...
The first thing she did... was to call him..and say sorrie for ystrdy..
As soon as she woke up.. she received a call frm him.. as if he had tht intuition or sumthing...

Maan- geet u fine?? ystrdy msg nii aya...i ws woried...hope u r fine...
Geet- sshh..calm down.. m absolutely fine.. but kal kuch hua thha kya??
Maan- nahi..kuch nahi hua...
Geet- h,mm...Maan aaapki timing to perfect hochuki hai.. jeise hi hum uthee aapka call agaya...
Maan-acha jii.. aisa mtlb.. hum smjh gaye thhe... ki time hogya h..mrning kiss ka...
Geet- subah subah maan..pgl hochuke ho tum..
MAan- woww..aap se direct tum pe :P not fair ...
Geet- aere yaar.. nahi naa... meko naa mum bula rhi h... okie bye...

BEfore he cud say anything she cut th call.. nd hided her face in her duvet..shying...
MAan was happy seeeing his mishty shoni back... but he still wanted to know evrything about her..her parents..and her past...her past didnt matter fr him..but he wanted to know..so that he can make her present nd future beautiful... but he knew if he tuk out this topic she will b again sad..nd he didnt want that..

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Geet is watching tv.. while talking to Maan...texting him...
its lunch time

Mom- Geet stop texting have ur Lunch first
Geet- hmm...

Geet to Maan- Maan.. mumma daant rhi :( lunch krne bolrhi...
Maan- stupid sasumaa ko boldo... me apni shoni baby ko khud khilaunga...
Geet- acha wait... lemme call ew thn u khud boldena..dekho apne hubby se baat b ni krne deti :(
Maan- aere geet vo actually meko :P maa bula rhi.. u lunch kro.. me bhi lunch krke baat krta hu
Geet- nahi naa.. u khilao
Maan- dnt act kiddish baby..shadi k baad pakka...
Geet- nahi naa...
Maan- bacchchaa...chup chap lunch kro
Geet- me nahi krungi :( u khilao or else kattiiee
Maan- mera bachcha.. see m beside uh.. cummon khao ab..
Geet- me bachi ni hu :/
Maan- u r.. my bachiii
Geet- buddhuuu... u ki bachi hu :/ u mere dad huae :P fir me u ko dad keise bnaungii
Maan- idiot... buddhuu.. kuch b bolti ho.. okie chalo.. mere hone vale bachon ki maa khush :P
Geet- haaye nii... sharam aarhi.. chalo chhodo..khana khana h
Maan- aere ruko suno toh..jaan.. vo actually..
Geet- stupid... sry i gotta go
Maaan- nahi nahii suno naaa
Geet- bye :P mumma agayi...
Maan- aere...

AFTER this she didnt replied.. the mile she had..didnt went unnoticed by her mom.. she was seeing a drastic change in her daughter... she ws changed.. she was smiling the whole day... that smile she had.. blushing one.. didnt went unnoticed by anyone.. all saw a drastic change in her... depreeeseedd kinda gurll who use to be complaining fr her life... now was...njoying each nd evry sec..smiling evry tym...!!

she just have one song in her mind all the time and that was..
"sochti hu raat bhar kyu hua hai dil dufffer... bin btaye iss kadar..kyu hua h dil duffer..!!"

The days went onn and onn like this.. they have not met eachothr yet..!!
One night she was sleeping and she got a dream..or say the bestest dream of her life..

DREAM...
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( baad me dream btaungi :P ) tht's all for today :P hahah... hope u guys observed some minute things...which i tried putting in this part... and trust me her dream ..means the next prt...will bring a damn big smile in all ur faces...especially in the face of my spcl one.. to whom this is dedicated ;) :* )
Edited by shoni... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
beautiful update...⭐️...so Maan was very sad to hear Geet crying...😭...He wanted to talk to her but thought to leave her alone now...🤔...Geet while lying in her bed thought about Maan...😛...She knew that Maan would be tensed for her now...😔...but she thought that she didn't deserve him as she wasn't perfect for him......Maan called her in the morning...😎...He wanted to have a kiss from her...☺️...Geet coudn't resist from blushing...☺️...and hanged on Maan's call by giving an excuse...Geet and Maan shared some romantic chatting...😳...At Geet's house all were shocked to see her smiling all day long...😲...Her mother saw a drastic change in her...loved it...❤️...waiting to see Geet's dream......eagerly wating 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
like how maaneet relation is moving 2wards to.waiting 2 read d dream
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

nice one dear

but u have put someones else pic at geet

continue soon

i want 2 know wht happenned next

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Such A wrongT5ime Par end kia Gadha...:l/
btw sucg A cute update byt i feel ki wen they meet it will create prob

maan has been so much understanding towards Geet...
he dont want to be Cause of Geet's Pain..

hope Geet past doesnt b a hurdle in there love...

next update Jaldi dena baby :j*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Will be updaitng a new part soon girls.. am so sry for the delay.. but exams and alll.. nd on top of that practices... m not getting time to update it...but will give ew all a sizzlling update soon ...

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