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@shoni...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Love Fnds Its Way... EterNaL Love Of Maaneet..!!

A TRUE LOVESTORY😊

Chracter sketch

Maan singh khurana - He Is 15 now.. he holds a very dashing and a lovable personality...mr future perfect of evry gurl.. girls die to talk to him... but he dont care... just waiting for his childhoood friend whom he still miss alot..!! its have been 5 years ... they are not in contact bt still somwhere both the hearts are still waiting for eachothr..!! well coming back to MAAN .. he is really very dashing... a cute guy...

GEet JuneJa- a cute bubbly gurl..!! Same As she was... !! loves to listen music... giggle...hangout with her friends.. and loves gadgets..! prefers writing... and likes reading..!! she too is waiting for her best buddy to come back in her life whom she miss alot.. and experiences his absence...

PROLOGUE-

nothing has changed yet... just two hearts are waiting for eachothr... two best buddies are carving to meet eachother..!!

Now What Will Happen wen these two mischiveous friends are back in their gang..??

Just A lil suspence..!!

Wait A Lil Trust Me ITs Gonna Be Fun... cuz nothing is fake... just a real story of mine i wud like to share..!!!

Edited by shoni... - 11 years ago

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice concept
Love it
Continue soon plz

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

beautiful story😊

please start soon

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shonikasush

@shonikasush

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

am waiting too baby 😉

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shoni...

@shoni...

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Part1...

Note- now maan and geet both are on fb.. they both are chating to their mutual friend.. "Anu"... geet is just kinda addicted to fb ..

Geet- Hey anu.. sup aur bta wats gng on in ur lyf (geet typed)

Anu- Nothingg yea just nrml... tu bta..hey btw u remember maan?? our childhood frnd... who studied with us in ABC sckul ...wen we were in 5std then we guys were just separated..

Geet- Yea I Do how cani frgt him yea.. he was my best ( in her mind- i miss him )

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On the other hand.. Anu talks with Maan Too

Anu- Hey Maan DO ew Remember Geet?? she was your besty in 5std if u remember...

Maan- Ummm i remmber the name but not her face.. y r u asking this?? (in mind- how can i frgt her)

Anu- aere she is on fb yea.. why dnt u send her a frnd req...

Maan- ew serious??? hey can u pls send me her id

Anu- why not.. yea sure

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Anu- hey i told himm to send u a frnd req... hope u r fine with it..

Geet- what! u serious he is here...i mean umm... he is on fb..!! by which name.. i mean,

Anu- i can undrstnd ur excitement baby...relax... he will b sending u a req soon...

Geet-thanxx yea

Anu- idiot.. kar dia naa paraya :P

Their Chat continued.. withing few mins she got a friend req frm " Maan Singh Khurana"

she accepted it immediately she was not able to beleev its him..her bestfrnd

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Geet- hey

Maan- hiii

Geet- sup? aftr such a long tym... how are u?

MAan- yea.. m fine.. u say

Geet- m good... sup??

Maan-nothing much... tum btao.. u r in delhi?? or u left it?

geet- no m in ddlehi only..

Maan- oh i thought u left delhi.. btw i thought u must have forgotten me

Geet- naah.. i can neva frgt any of my frnd..nd then u r my besty..!!

Maan- yea ryt..

(both were feeling quit uncmfrtable...but kya krskte hain... aftr 5 years... tht too all of a sudden ... just in few mins... a new story began.. they neva realized that one day ... this day will becum a part of a new lovestory)

MAan- hey...y dnt u send me sum pics of urz.. wanna see how do u luk aftr 5 yrs

Geet- yeah sure

(geet send sum of her pics...)

He was just lost.. in her beauty her innosence.. her smile... and especially her"HAIRS" donno what was thre in her hairs.. he just loved her hairs... then her lips...wwhich were carved in a beautiful innocent smile.. a cute baby smile... which was pleasing his eyes... then her eyes... which wanted to say so many things.. which reflected naughtiness... nd her cuteness which was thre in her innosence...her innocent baby smily face pleased his eyes... he felt releived...dont know kya kashish thi ussme... he just fell fr her... but he thought its attraction...

Geet- Hey, u thre?? pics achi ni h kya?

MAan- achi o.O u crazy?? they are just mindblowing..

Geet- thanxx.. btw can i get ur pics

Maan- actually i dnt like dng these kinda gurly photoshoots and all

Geet- hey hello.. what do u mean by gurly,,,

Maan- actually all these is just a gurly stuff.. crazy stupid gurls

Geet- u knw u have gone crazy.. cuz thre r many boys who likes this.. and u dnt have a nyc face dosent mean u will blame a photographer.. photo me ni u k face me prblm h

Maan- :O haaww how dare u.. lisen m a heartthrob

Geet- ohhh realllyy... wteva

Maan- haan fine..

Geet- huhh... leave leet it be.. wat i have to do seeeing ur pic..!!meko kya

MAan- hmm

Geet- hmm ...bye

Maan- why?

GEeet- actually mera tym hogya.. m nt alowed to use pc more than 2 hour.s..

Maan- oh..!! ur parents sounds to be strict

Geet- hmm

Maan- okie bye.. her wait y dnt u give me ur numbr i will call u

Geet- my mob is confescated ... i'll getit aftr sumtym

MAAn- :( hmm u can go

Geet- bye

Maan- wait u kal kab online aogi?

GEet- same tym... 4-6 is my fb timing...!!

Maan- okie.. i'll b thre..tc

Geet- bye :)

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that was how they met... as if god wanted them to meet again..!! Maan Knew that he had started falling for her... but he didnt wanted to admit it.. somewhere geet was vry happie too... dancing nd singing in her whole house..!! her mind was sumwhere else just waiting for tomorrow..!!she just remembered her earlier days.. dont know y but she wanted to know more about him... she was curious to kknow him talk to him fight with him... just in few mins as if they came very close.. their hearts just dieing to meet...!! but an unknown type of disagreement was coming in between as if they both dont want to realize only...

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That WAs just a sweet short nd simple meet... but no one ever imagined that this one simple meet has several secrets hidden... their future was not only frndship a lot more than that...!! this one simple meet nd those few mins will change their whole life no one ever thought that...but sumwhere in their hearts that spark was created...which just needed air ..!! lets see what happens next..

finally they slept..!! aving their dinners finishing their wrks...

may b around 4:00 i saw a dream... Ooops sorrie... around 4 geet saw A dream...

its said that dream which we saw early mrning comes true.. and that dream became true after sumttym... just wait and watch.. ooppss again sorie 'just wait nd read :P'

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In her Dream..!!

she saw him... he was having a red rose in his hands... coming forward.. and whispered in her ears " i love ew "

and she just fainted... he panicked picked her up in his armz .. as son as she felt his touch she came back to her senses... he was happpie that his touch can make his touch can make her alright anytym...!!

he just hugged her and said " agar tumhe kuch hua i will die "

she had tears in her eyes.. the next she saw was.. they both in weding outfit..!!

then her alarm clocked ringed/..!!

it was 5:30 am :P she have to get ready for her sckul...!!

the dream was broken.. that stupid alarm clock huhh..i hate it..!! ( or else may be first night bhi ahem ahem ) (:P lolz...)

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she just got ready for her sckul...!! thinking wat all happend in her dream... shying a bit thining abt in the whole day.. in her bus in sckul.. etc

similarly Maan was not able to concentrate on his studies.. that cute innocent smiling face revolving in his mind... as if his heart just took that pic inn nd stepelled it their freva...

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finnaly the intzaar session was over *

it was 4 o clock.. in the eve..

maan was waiting for her ot come online.. nd as soon as she arrived a msg popped,.. means seen toh aisa thha as if msg ready ho.. and bas enter press krna ho ... hahhaaa... but u guys knw wat uss intzzaar ki u ek " hiii " ki baat hi kuch or thi..!!

kisi ke liye pal pal tadapna...

aankhein bichakakaar uska intzaar krna...

pyar krke bhi dil ko naa sunna

apni bhaavnaein nazarandaaz krna...

uski fitrat thi... paarr ye dil hai...!! naa kisi ki suna hai naa sunega :*

( originnally by me.. please gurls do not copy this :( emotions hai ask me then u can)

again... vo nrml hii hello... keise ho aap vaali baatein.. fir uska intzaar.. dheere dheere ek hi week me inne kareeb aajana... ki harr baat share krne lagna...!!

but suddenly.. as if God decided that no... its enough now.. and he decided to make those two hearts realize their imposrtance,,

around march's ending geet came to nkow her father is sufffering from heartprblm..!! his arteries are blocked..!! he needs to b treated immediately... she was broken shateered..! she dont know with whom to share al this stuff... her parents were leaving for nagpur tommoorow nd she was all shattered her exams dates were coming closer.. she was getting hyper...

that was the tym wen they came more close.. she shared it with none othr than MAAN

she told him everything... she was broken.. nd most importantly she was drunk... that time she had one bf.. a nrml one.. with whom she neva felt cmfrtable... inmfact no one can say by seeing them that they r in a realtion.. it was just on the edge of ending.. nthing was ryt... Sumwer maan knew he loved him.. he didnt liked it wen she talked to him...

but that day she broked up with his bf.. and was highly drunk.. ..then what happend was just...

To Be continued...

( ahaaann.. so guys i want ur responses now.. jitne zada likes utne jaldi update.. please tell ur frnds to read and just like the post... if u will comment it will definately encourage me nd will force me to give u a much better update... butplease if u dnt have that much tym... atleast plsss like this.. otherviews i will thnk u all didnt aprreciated a true story of mine :( nothing is fake heree ... please respect the emotions...

i dont like silent readers.. just like the post lemmme know if anyone is intrstd or i will stop writing :/ nd those only wil get my updates in their pm who really are intrstd )

Sup please do like the above post..!! pleaseee...actually i seriously want to give my best share my talent.. my story with ew..!! but if i dont get a gud response i will be disapppointed nd then may b i will nt b able to satisty ur thoughts.. jsut press the l;ike button...

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

nice concept.everything was going romantic suddenly her father fell sick.thats so depressing.wo was her ex-bf?wht rly happened?so much of suspense.but y hav u put some one else's pics as Maan & Geet?

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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

heyy dear

just caught up with the first part

n I must say it was beautiful

beautifully expressed

geet n maan chatting was a start to a new story

or maybe just a finish to their old one

somewhere somehow they know they have fallen for each other

they know they can share anything with each other

and they feel comfortable with each other too

thanks to anu she restarted their story

update soon

waiting eagerly

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shoni...

@shoni...

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maanluver
heyy dear
just caught up with the first part
n I must say it was beautiful
beautifully expressed
geet n maan chatting was a start to a new story
or maybe just a finish to their old one
somewhere somehow they know they have fallen for each other
they know they can share anything with each other
and they feel comfortable with each other too
thanks to anu she restarted their story
update soon
waiting eagerly

hey dear..!! thanxx alot...!! will update soon :)😊

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shoni...

@shoni...

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
nice concept.everything was going romantic suddenly her father fell sick.thats so depressing.wo was her ex-bf?wht rly happened?so much of suspense.but y hav u put some one else's pics as Maan & Geet?

hey dear..!! thanxx alot... ex bf its a secret.. later onn u wil cum to knw...!! nd i have put sumone else's pic.. cuz i dont have the pic of maan wen he was 15 yrs old... if u hv read the character sketch u mst hv undrstud.. thy both r 15 yrs old.. that's y...

thnx alot 😊

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shoni...

@shoni...

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

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PART 2

EterNaL LoVe

That day as we know she broked up with his bf... and was highly drnk.. she just wanted sumone jo use sambhale.. to control her.. to tell her everything will be fine.. to tell her that sumone is still with her... to tell her that she is loved..!!

and that was exactly the perfect day for him to express his feelings and tell her that he loves him.. he was not able to see her tears.. a hopeless geet... a lifeless geet... and then everything finally changed..!!

( you guys know till now they both have not met.. they just ttalk on fb.. dont have eachothr's numbrs also..!! a miracle naa..?? its said that distances brings two person more close.. nd two hearts very much close..!!)

Maan texted her..

Maan- tumhe meri kasam hai geet stop drinking...

Geet- i wil not.. ew knw no one loves me... my bf was cheat... i hate this wrld..

Maan- u knw wat tum pagal hogyi ho.. calm down and listen to me..

Geet- thre's nthing left... sab meko chhodke chale jate hain

Maan- will neva leave ew Geet i promise eew

Geet- i know u will also leave me one day...!! am bad infact m the wrst...

Maan- stop it Geet

Geet- u knw i feel lyk dieing today... all over..

Maaan- ew idiot i love ew... itni si baat samajh ni aati tumhare?

Geet- i want a sex chat..

Maan- ew know u r drunk tmhe khud nii pta wat r u demanding tum pgl ho gyi ho... isse phle or kuch ho... stop drinking nd m with u remember.. i love ew

Geet- Why do u love me?? i said i need a sex chat..please..

Maan- u stupid gurl... offline jao abhi..nd i knw u've got a mob.. numbr do apna

Geet texted her numbr

Geet- 0********** ye lo..

Maan- hmm... nd ofline jao u r ntin ur senses abhi toh tumne mese bola hai..i dnt want kisi or se ye sab bolo.. please go.. i will call u aftr sumtym

Geet- u dont love me no one can love me

Maan- stop it idiot..

without saying anything Geet went ofline

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Maan was damn restlesss... he was very much worried for Geet the way she was demnding all that... he knew she is not in her senses... ussne use galat nii smjha.. neva eva... Geet was sad.. nd depressed he knew her by her heart.. she can neva say all this.. he knew kuch serious hua h..he knew her bf was a cheat... he knew evrything.. but he was just nt able to help her love... he was angry on himself... why cant he just go nd hug heis love... nd love her..telll her prove her how much he loves her...

on the other hand

Geet's condition was not gud.. she was drunk.. crying whole nyt...!! she didnt even realized what maan spoke to her...

the night went off...!! she slept hugging her teady.. but maan was not able to relax for a sec... vacations were going on...he knew she will be onnline at what tym in the morning he was waiting for her to come online

yeah... the happiness knew no bonds...she was here

Maan- Hii

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Maan was helll worried now.. she had seen his msg... but y was she not replying?? 10 mins went off,,, he became restlesss

MAan- Geet ?? ew fine?? thrE??

Geet- am Sorie... i just read what i demanded for.. am sorry...

MAan- u dont need to be yr... i know u were drunk dont wrry... i didnt tuk it wrng... u r still that inno Geet fr me

Geet- i seriously dnt knw kal kya hua thha meko... sachi... ( she still didnt paid attention towards his confession.. sshe thought-- he said that because he is her best frnd so..besty vala love... but her heart was wishing that please can he say he loves her... not cuz thy r bst frnds but cuz he loves her...)

Maan-u just calm down.. frgt abt al that.. nd tell me... how are u?? kuch khaya?

Geet- m fine... Naah..!! mood ni h

Maan- u stupid gurl.. eat smthing.. meri ksm h ( he was just wishing- please GOD make her relaize that i love her.. y is she not tlking abt tht i luv u? didnt she read it?? )

Geet- hmm.. yea i will dnt wrry.. btw u have my numbr.. thn cal kyu ni kia??

Maan- i thought u needed sum space...nd bina poochee i shud nt call..raat ho gyi thi na..

Geet- hmm ryt...

MAan- u tc of urslf.. evrything will b fine

Geet- hmm..

And the conversation went onn...

All the tym maan just wished that if she cud realize his LOVE.. he just wanted to know wats in her mind.. she read it?? or kal raat ko del to ni krdia?? she wwas nt in her senses...or ussne ignore kia?? kyu ignore krrhi h?? ussne usse baat kyu ni ki abt tht i love u??

Here Geet's heart was wishing that i love ew to be more thn frndship..!!

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Eve...

Maan- should i call u??

Geet- umm.. yea sure

Maan- hmm i will cal u aftr sumtym...

Geet- okie. i shud leave now.. subah se m onnline..

MAan- u sure?? i mean we cn still tlk

Geet- naah actually i gotta go...

Maan- okie u tc of urslf..i wil call u ok

Geet- sure

Maan- hmm bye

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then she was taching television.. that was wen she received a call from a n unknown numbr...

IT WAS MAAN

Geet- heLLo..

MAan- Hey

(Geet just lost her senses listening that melodious seductive manly voice.. the magic in his voice made her lost.. same with maan as soon as he heard an "HELLO" he lost his senses just a pretty cute innnocent voice ... both were just admiring eachothr.. their hearts became more restles..)

Geet- who's ThiS?

Maan- ahem ahem.. guess who promised u to cal u ??

Geet- MaAn??

Maan- ahaan.. u hv gota nyc memory.. sup kya krrhi thi??

Geet- nothing just anwaii... tumm btao

Maan- same hea.. sup??

Geet- where r u?

Maan- just roaming with frnds

Geet- ahaan.. ek hi kaam h bas boys ko ghoomna nd awara gardi.. huh i hate it..!!

MAan- ohh tmhe kya ptA? dont cal my frnds awara ok??

Geet- kyu :p

Maan- huh..

Geet- wteva

Maan- Miss wteva :P

Geet- hadd hoti h

Maan- hmm.. chalo i will call u ltr i gotta go ( in his heart... actually his heart wanted her to stop him but...)

Geet- kk bye

his heart SAnk wiht those wrds

Maan- hm bye.. he hanged up

Geet tooo wanted to stop him..but her mind was just winning over her heart,,,,

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AFtr listening echothr;s seducing voice.. it made both the heartsmore restles.. now both of them were nt able to spend a sec wdout eachothr.. daily talks .. fights.... nd nw...

SCKUL STARTED ..MAaan used to take his mob along with him in sckul

Geet started missing her sckul...!! she didnt liked gng to sckul... she prefered being at home.. nd tlking to him.. waiting fr him to b bck home..!!

She didnt relaized wen she started being or say feling possessive fr him... wen he bunked with gurls... nd tlk to her.. she just got angry on him..!! Maan Liked it..!! but he actually neva showed her... why shud he show her?? he just wanted evrything to move onnn...

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Now Days Passed..!! just in a vry short span of time they both came damn close to eachothr.. which made thre separation almst next to impossible..!!

and now thre hearts were not able to cntrl..

So Now This WAs the tym..

it was tym to propose her he thought

it was tym to propose him she thought

thre hearts were out of thre cntrl now..

so thy decided to confess it anyhow

he called her..she called him

mob was busy...

again she called him ... he called her

contact was uneasy...

both the hearts were restles... thy made a pause...

and then they called...

she stopped but he now called..

she picked it up... nd togethr thy poked out

what was the matter they thought

with whom he/she was busy thy thought...

both the hearts were in same condition..

Their love knew no limitations..

both of them wanted to say the same

But dont know how to start the game...

he shivered... she rivered ...

both realized its a high tym now...

to speak out th truth now..

She spoke.. he spoke,,,

I love ew.. I love uh...

Hearts were filled with happiness now...

as thy were complete... and became one now

what a perfect timing God thought...

What a Perfect couple mob thought..!!

thre was nothing much happier then this..

Thre was nothing left thy thought..

she had tears in her eyes..

both realize its hy tym to relaize

He said he wanna hug her nd cry

She said she dnt wanna die...

she was not able to utter a wrd...

So she thought of frgetting the wrld

wat othrs will thnk thy dnt care...

thre love was ETERNAL nd it was rare...

Atrue LOVestoRy they thought

both were finally caught

by the HEART(single) that beated for both of them

by the love thre was betwween them...

they both had an neva lsting talk...

but they had to cut the call...

balance was gettting over now..

they decided to tlk in the midnyt anyhow..

Both again confessed their love

And went off to there othr wrks..(howeever thre mind nd heart was still repeating wat all happpened.. both were physically present.. but mentally absent... )

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haal behaal thha..

khabar thi naaa hosh thha..

bekaar dil thhe..

pyar jo unne kiya thha...

..those were some of the lines writtten by geet.. in her diary...!! she loves writing...

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Geet was restlesss same as maan was... both were just so shocked... what all happened in just few mins.. thre relationship life evrything changed.. thre minds thre soul thre heart all roared..!! she again called him.. both were having no wrds to say... just a silent game was onn... thy both wanted to move onn..!!

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OOpsee... here i end up for today.. hope ew guys liked it...?? tomorrow will be a mega update..!! as tomorrow is sunday... hope i will be getting some more liikes now.. but m thnkful to all my readers.. commenters nd likers... !!! thanxx alot for appreciating muh work.. if possible promote my story ❤️ur response..!!

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