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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
very beautiful update...👏...maan and geet are facebook friends...⭐️...Geet's bf cheated on her...😭...she is drunk and is not in her senses...Maan truly loves Geet...❤️...Geet 2 loves Maan...❤️...waiting 4 next update...😊...thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Fb chat 2 ph chat.wow!their friendship is progressing.with that their silent luv is also going on.hop geet stops drinking
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Simple n sweet.continue n pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Part 3

Just a silent game was onn...
Cuz both wanted to move on..!!
Thre eyes were reflecting love fr each other..!! both wanted to talk to each other.. meet eachothr but were shy...an unknown shyness...but why??

At Night Maan called her..
Maan- Geet
Geet- haan
Maan- i Miss Ew
Geet- *shyed* Me too... ( thre voice changed cuz thre feeelings changed..!!)

At the same time Geet saw her mob..she was getting a call frm her mom.. she didnt had time so she put his call on hold and picked her mom's call .. as she was not allowed to talk someone at night..tht too so late...

Geet- haan mummy
mom- Geet .. listen kal aap sckul mat jana.. aapke dad ka kal operation h.. dadi ko bta dena.. nd apne bhai ko sckul bhej dena but u stay with ur dadi at home..
Geet- haan sure... dad keise hai
Mom- he is fine... acha kal baat krte hain ok?? bye
Geet- bye... tc love ew
Mom- bye love ew too beta...

They hanged up...
Geet- maan?? thre m sry mom ka call thha
Maan- haan.. i knw tumne by mstk call hold pe ni conference pe rkha thha :P
Geet- oops.s..
MAan- vo to acha h i didnt spoke anything
Geet- hmm.
Maan- so madam kal sckul nahi jaeingi?
Geet- Naah..
MAan- ye acha hain haaan..
Geet- hmmm

* he sensed a different tone ..her voice changed from shying to tensed..!! she seemed to be tensed bd he sensed her tnsion *

MAan- what happened??
Geet- nothing kyu??
Maan- ew knw wat jab jhoot bolna ni ata toh mat bola kro
Greet- Hmm..sachi kunnai hua
Maan- meko bhi ni btaogi??
Geet was blank.. she didnt spoke.. but was about to cry.. she was sobbing very slowly.. but it didnt went unnoticed by him... he sensed her tears...

Maan- geet?? u r crying??
Geet- no
Maan- stop lying.. tell me kya hua??
Geet- u heard naa.. dad ka operation h kal
Maan- idiot .. he will b fine aftr his surgery.. idiot.. ro kyu rhi ho?? ew shud pray to god...
Geet- hmm
Maan- see.. ur mom told u to b ith ur grandmaa cuz she is old she will b worried issliye.. nd u khud aisa krogi toh keise chalega ?? temmme.. acha listen stop crying.. listen Geet meko jokes crack krna nahi ata .. am sorrie.. i cn jus say.. BABY EW ARE NOT ALONE AM ALWYS THRE ...WENEVA EW FEEL LOW EW CAN HUG ME...cum hea
Geet- i seriously need to hug uh.. please kuch kro naa
Maan- aww mera bachcha u pooori bachi bann gyi?? mere hands me hota to aajata sachi... shona.. stop crying.. see m by ur side
Geet- hmm..
Maan- hmmm nahi :P pitogi ab ..smjhii...
Geet- u can neva do that
Maan- challenge??
Geet- haann.. open challenge
Maan- then me har gya..u r ryti cn neva beat my baby...
Geet- *shyed...* i knew it..

Maan was happie that she came out of those thoughts

Maan-- acha listn me b kal sckul ni jaunga..i wil b with u
Geet- sachi?
Maan- haan bachcha...aisa ho skta h??mishty needs me nd me naa hu uske paas??
Geet- neva eva ..!!
Maan- haanji ..i love ew..
Geet- ew know what i love ew more.. hahhaahha

that laugh of hers... was pleasing his ears/...!!
They Just Had a TAlk the whole night... then around 4'0clock Maan forced her to sleep.. as he knew she must b sleepy...!!Geet hugged her teady thinking of him... nd slept peacefully nd Maan just slept by seeing her pics in his mobile..!!
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Morning.. around 11'o clock...!!
Maan received a call... it was geet.. he was feeling on top of the wrld.. his love called hiim.. nd woke him up.. he wil b listening her voice the first today..

Maan- ahem ahem.. rhaa ni gaya haan :P
Geet- stupid... 11 bajjgaye :P i thought u utth gaye hoge
Maan- huh :/ so what.. me faltu khush orha thha :/ not fair
Geet- hhahaa.. i love ew..
Maan- ehh..i love ew too baby.. feeling the luckiest guy
Geet- acha ji
Maan- haanji.. poocho toh kyu???
Geet- kyu jii :P
Maan- cuz m tlking to the most beautiful gurl in the wrld.. udk :P
Geet- acha tareeka hai.. indirectly bolo mtlb
Maan- kahaa :P hum toh directly bahut kuch bolna i mean krna chahte hain but
Geet- stupid bye... brush to krlo.. u idiot.. sshhhiii...
Maan- hadd hai mlb... kk bye
Geet- hahah.. bye

Maan was damn happpiee.. that simple laugh..simple i love ew.. simple talk made his morning beatuiful... he thought now his each morning nd his eachnyt will b the wrld's mst pleasing day/night.. but no one knew.. wats gonna happen in future.. no one knew unki taqdeer ..unki kismat ka kyadecision thha...but use chhodo... Geet was Happie thre...

( remember... Geet had not seenn his pic yet...she didnt knew how he luks like.. nd thy have not met yet.. its been 2months;...!!)

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Geet texted him...
Geet- Maan Vo actuallly...
Maan- haanji bolo.. aap toh hume bhaga rhi thi.. ab kya
Geet- Maaan.. dad ka operation shuru hogya
Maan- toh?? achi baat h na... he will b fine dnt wrrry.. btw ur official bf is demanding sumthing suno naaa
Geet- officccial bf jii.. kya demand krrhe??
Maan- ummm... a kisss..??
Geet- ahem ahem.. no wayz.. u see am a gud gurl...
Maan- ihihhihi... achaww ji.. i will grab u miss gud gurl of mine..
Geet- ale yaawwll.. not fair :(
Maan- evrything is fair in Love and War BABY...now u r giving me a kiss.. or i shud grab my swthrt candy?
Geet- haaye nii..!! sweethrt candy?? umm... m luving it..
Maan- ahaan wteva...
(just thre nrml talks were onn.. day by day thre frndship .. the love betwweeenn thm,..thre undrstnding thre bond thre closenesss evrything was getting deeper nd deppeer... as if thre love knew no bonds.thy talked day and night.. spending tym with each othr.. on msgs.. being in contact each nd evry sec possisble...)
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Just imagine... where they met.. how thre story started.. just in few days.. thy came so close... thy hv not yet met eachothr...then also thre love knew no bonds... distaance brnigs two people two hearts more close...!!

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The Days Went Onn and onn.. thre love story moved onn.. thre love became more deeper nd deeper.. the way he use to handle her.. the way he use to care for her... the way he use to love her ..made her cum more close to her...all these days were just a kinda miracle.. if that day anu wud nt have introduced them again.. thy wud nt hv been here.. where thy r now...

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That was all for today.. it was not a very romantic kinda update.. still a simple one.. it proves uss tht...for loving sumone u dnt need anything.. looks.. and all dosent matte.r...geet have nt seen him yet... but she still luvs him... alot.. thy r away frm eachothr...!! but thy r very close... just few simple things simple talkss... simple care nd simple love can bring two hearts this much close... A simple LOve ..without any conditionn... its called the pure love.. LOVE WHICH IS SIMPLE IS LOVE WHICH IS PURE ND TRUE...

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that was the reason i wanted to write this story.. cuz its a part of me.. and its a true love story.. for loving sumone u dnt need any reason...!! nd if u want to b loved u dnt need to b prfct... u r prfct fr ur prfct luver...!!the way u r.. luv urslf as it iss...then only u wil b able to get a true love...nd start a true LOVESTORY...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
awesome update dear
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Geet is in distress bcz of her dad's condition.how maan consoled her was so sweet.without seeing each other,inspite of staying away from each other their luv is pure.u said its a true story.which couple's story is this?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
superb update...👏...very sweet...😛...beautifully written......loved it...❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
waiting for next .
nice part
sweetgirls1 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
hey!!!
i just read first part...
loved it...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
OMG...I m aready In love wid the story...
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its just Like A reality...like A movie infront...

kuch pal mein
yaad aapki ati hai
kuch pal mwin
bichadne ka ehsaas
kuch pal mein
zindagi lagte ho
kuch pal mein
durr jaane ka ehsas
kuch pal mwin
khreeb aane ka..

kuch pal hi toh
hai jo saath hoti hai...

i just loved the xoncwpt.:j*

pm me...Waiting foe it :D

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