*SAATHIYA* #3 PART - 37 UPDATED ON 5/1/2014 - Pg 110 - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome part... Maan-geet-maanya r so cute & happy 2gthr... Bt yeh aayan kahan se wapas agaya i hate him or ab phr maaneet ke beech prblm create krega bt geet shud hv told maan abt it oderwise baad mein kahin mu na ho jaye... Do cont soon waiting 4 d nxt chptr eagerly...
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Posted: 11 years ago
will be there any problems in their realtions
nice part ddear loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
i liked this ff so much...
its really so nyc...😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awes6e update ..

Why this aayan came back & want geet 😡

why all of a sudden itna pyaar aagaya geet per & he came back to take her ..😡

hope geet will tell abt him to maan soon so that he wont be able to create any mu between maaneet ..

waiting for nxt part cont. soon ..
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Awesome update ..loved maan n maanu's scene
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PART - 33

GEET is very much disturbed with the incident taking place in Mall. She wont said a word in whole route,just snuggling maanya close to her heart. Small baby playing with her mumma but she wont pay attention to her. Somewhere she have a fear of loosing her and Maan. Aayan's word echoing in her mind badly. Though she gave her answer clearly to him but not sure about his reactio.

'i have to tell Maan everything before its too late. Pehle mujhe pata nahi tha,but now i know who is stalking me,so its better i tell Maan.' Geet find no other option. She decided she tell everything to him as they already committed. Maan parked the car in garage and Geet moved inside. She took Maanya along with her to room and placed her in her pram. She gave her bunny to play.

Maanya jumping in a sitting posture. She patting bunny up and down,and blabbring conti.to grab her mother's attention. She wants her mumma to play with her new toy. Geet caressed her head and moved away,lossing in her thoughts. Maanya sat quitely wont like her mumma's gestures and annoying behaviour towards her. Little life wont understand why her mumma avoiding her.


'eee, ooo, aaa',Maanya making sounds to divert Geet's attention but no use.


Meanwhile Maan entered in room. Maanya get his glimpse and smile wide. She know may once her mumma avoids her but papa never do this. She moved in her pram and calls him making sounds again. Maan pass a smile to her and took her in his arms. Maanya felt happy. Maan kissed her and she move her toy up and down pacefully.

'mera shona bachha,papa k sath khelega. Maanu wants papa play with her.' Maan chat with her lovingly. May Maanya wont get his words exactly but she affected by the affection and love he always gave to her. Both played for an hour but Geet wont even realized it. She was standing alone outside in a gallery.


Maanya's eyes turn dizzy. She rubbing her eyes constantly. Maan wont take time to know that she felt sleepy. He took her again in her arms and start walking. Maany's head is falling and soon she rested her head on his broad shoulder while circling her small arms around his neck. Maan patting her back tenderly and soon she was in grip of deep sleep. Maan make her laid on bed and covered her sides with pillows. He kissed her on her forehead and tiny fists and moved outside.

Maan saw her lost in her thoughts. He went behind her and held her shoulder tenderly. 'Geet... ' He utter her name softly.

Geet came to her senses and slanted her neck to glance him. She instantly hugged Maan in a swift moment. Maan was so amused with this. He was so confused with her changed behaviour. This was the first time she hugged him herself. Maan hesitated little bit but then he embraced her.

'Kya hua Geet?', Maan asked softly. He asked the reason for her welteredness. Geet clenched him more firmly.


'Maan i...', Geet was about to open up before him but his phone allowed not allowed her. His phone buzzed and she stopped herself.

Maan answer his call. It was from Adi. An emergency occured in a office. Maan cuts the call.

'Geet tum kuchh keh rai thi?' Maan asked again.

Geet heared his convo with Adi and also read his tensed gestures. 'nahi kuchh nahi. Aap pehle office jao waha apki zada zarurat hai. Aap jao.' Geet know he needed in his office most so she allowed him to go.

Maan leave soon for office. A problem is arised in mumbai branch. Whole staff have some issues against facaulty. Maan trying to solve the problem but its not working so he decided to go there personally to sort out the issues. He informed Geet on phone and leave for mumbai.

Geet turned more gloomed in Maan's absence. She felt insecured. Seeing Geet disturbed Dadima asked for the reason. Geet felt hesitated to tell to dadima but when she insisted her Geet told her everything. Dadima too felt feared but she wont let her guess with her gestures.

'dont worry beta aap ghabriye mat. Apko darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai. Ab aap akele nahi hai. Or waise bhi Maan to kal laut hi aayenge. Unke aate hi aap unse baat kar leejiyega.' Dadima caressed her cheek and consoled her. Though she supports her but Geet really needs Maan only. He is only one who make her comfortable.


Whole night Geet wont able to sleep for a moment. One because of Aayan and second in absence of Maan, Maanya cried alot. She missed her papa badly. Until Maan called and Geet made her heared his voice. After talking to her father Maanya calmed little bit and trying to slept. Geet took her in her arms and walked for hours for her sleep. For which Maan only took 1 hr,Geet spend whole night. As she trying to parted her,Maanya again open her eyes and start crying so Geet snuggled her closly and patting her back tenderly.

Next day Geet get ready in the morning as she has to take Maanya to hospital for routine check up.
Edited by richadhami - 11 years ago
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PART - 34


GEET and Avika took her for a check up after breakfast. Afterwards Avika come out with Maanya while Geet talking with her doc. Suddenly she heared a scream of Avika. Geet felt scared and ran outside. She found Avika laid on floor,loosing her concious gradually. Her head is bleeding badly. Geet scared seeing her condition. Moreover Maanya is missing. Geet asked to her but she faints. Doc call her staff and took her inside for the treatment. Geet madly search Maanya in whole hospital. Her hands turned cold and heart sinks. Her little baby is missing and no clue she had. Geet instantly call Dadima and told her everything. Dadima calls the driver but same time Maan arrived from mumbai. He get worried seeing dadima's tense condition. Dadima is crying which he cant bear. He asked for the reason and Dadima told him everything about Maanya. Maan's felt as someone stole his soul. For a sec his heart stop beating. He lost his sences. Dadima shhaked him. 'beta aap sunn rae hai na jaldi chaliye.' Dadima asked him to reach hospital as soon as possible. Maan drove car at full pace and reached to hospital. He also called the police for help. Though they wont take action on missing cases quickly but they dont have a power to denied MSK.

Maan and Dadima step pacily towards child ward. Geet's tears wont taking a pause. She was sitting scattred on the floor,having no sense of her at all. Maan reached to Geet and clenched her both arms. He made her stood up on her feet. Geet was not in herself. Maan shaked her strongly and bring back to the world. Seeing Maan Geet absorbed herslef in him and cried loud. She fists his shirt firmly. With in a few second Maan's whole chest get wet wit her tears. Maan parted her to glance her face.

'Geet where is Maanya? Please bolo kaha hai meri bachhi?.' Maan's eyes turn wet and his voice fummbling. His cold hand gribbed more hard on Geet.

'mujhe nai pata Maan. Maine humari baby ko sare hospital me dekh liya par wo kahi nahi hai. Maan mujhe meri baby wapis lado. Meri baby wapis lado Maan.' Geet anwer meakly first but then again she start crying loudly and asked him to bring back Maanya. Geet only trusted him this moment. She shattred and again falls on floor. Maan too broked as his important part is missing from his life. He turn blank and wont hear anything. Dadima supported Geet. She took her in her embrace.

'shant ho jaiye beta. Sambhaliye apne aap ko. Humari Maanu hume mill jayegi.' Dadima consoling her but she too know it wont works.

Maan is standing like a dead body as he lost his soul. Meanwhile doc came and informed them about Avika. She get her concious back. All went inside. Avika also having a tears in her eyes. She felt guilty. Maan sat near her interogate her strongly. What exactly happened?

'bhai i wont know exactly. I was with Maanya when a strong thing blowed on my head two times back to back. My vision turn blurred. Only i can saw a human figure snatch Maanya from me. I m sorry bhai. Please forgive me.' Avika too crying she blamed herself as she fails to protect Maanya. Maan fists tighten and viens turn promenient. He whole body is burning in rage. Only he desired to detroy that person who dared to kidnap his soul,his life, his baby Maanya. His face turn stern and hard.

Police came do their enquiry but no clue found even after passing a sevral hours. 'insp. Listen to me. I want my daughter back at any cost. Kuchh b kar or else u and ur whole team pay badly.' Maan threatens insp. He was not in his sences. Maan is turned into a wild beast who wants to destroy whole world who dared to kidnap his daughter.

9 hrs passed. No one in KM eat a single thing. Police also searching her with their full power. Geet turn silent. She lost her part today. Maan went closer to her. She is half laying like a life less body,snuggling Maanya's bunny as she snuggling her baby. Her eyes turn blank. Neither she hear anything nor she blink.

Maan cocooned her and she too dissolved in him. Again her eyes start shedding tears. Maan's eyes joined her. Both were crying for their Angel. 'Maan pls bring back my daughter. Usko to apke bina neend b nahi aati hai. Pata nahi meri bachhi ne kuchh khaya b hai nahi.' Geet again pleading for Maanya and her words killing Maan more. He never felt helpless as he felt this time. His heart is bleeding and he wont able to do something. Maany's pram,toys her products,her giggles stille echoing in Maan's ears and make him shattred more.

On the other hands,Maanya too crying non stop for her parents.


even her throat were chocked bt still little life only searching for Maan and Geet. She was all alone with an unknown person in some weired place. He trying to make her drink water forcily to shut her moutj but Maanya slapped the bottel and crying. The small baby scared alot. She only want her mumma and papa,who are not available to her from past several hours. Maanya's eyes were aching she rubbed them again and again but her kiddnapper show no mercy on her. He wont melts for a second.
'Ro or ro, jitna tu royegi utna tera baap tadpega.' He showering his anger on her and gritting his teeth.


PRECAP: MAANYA LOST HER CONCIOUS AND ADMITT TO HOSPITAL.


PS: SORRY GUYS FOR SADDY SADDY UPDATE.

Edited by richadhami - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very saddy part. :'( poor manya-maan-geet. ;-(

that aryan... B**** hope maan find him and give him a gud pieace of mind.
Edited by SHRADDHA2102 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional tha maaanu was kidnapped maaneet can't bit and all are in the verge of breaking down
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Posted: 11 years ago
kitnaa sadyy sady update s hai
i want to kick that kidnapper or so callled mannya father

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