NEW SS-YOUR HOME BECAME OURS (part 9 updated on page 22) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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part-2
(past continues)

(geet goes to meet aman's mom)

aman's mom: geet tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho???

(geet what are u doing here)

geet: aap yesa kyu kar rahi hei meri didi ke saath..woh aap sabse kithna pyaar karthi hai..kithna khyaal rakhthi hai aap sabka..lekin aap unse iss thareeke se pesh aathi hain???😡

(why are doing like this to my didi..she loves and cares for u u all..then how can u bahave like this to her??)

aman's mom: woh isi ke hi laayak hai..agar ye mere bete ki zindagi me nahi aathi, naa hume isse jhelna padtha..hume bohoth umeed thi humari bahu ko lekar..par iss shagun ne mere bete par jaise koi jaadu hi kar diya hai..ye nahi aathi tho mei iss ghar ke liye ek achi bahu lathi..ek esi ladki jo bohot ameer ho;jo mere bete ke laayk ho..jisse shaadi karne se mere bete ko bohoth dehej mile..par nahi..
( she only deserves this..if she didnt hav came to my sons life then i didnt have to tolerate her now..i had so much expections about my DIL..but this shagun broke my all dreams..its like she hav done some blackmagic on my son..if she was not here;then i wud hav found out a perfect DIL for this house..who will be rich and who wud hav been perfect for my son..and my son wud hav got so much dowry..but it never happened..)

geet: issme meri di ki galthi sirf yehi thi ki meri didi ameer nahi..aur hum aapko dehej nahi de sake??

(in all these my didi's only falt is that we are not rich and cudn't give dowry)

aman's mom: ha lekin agar tum chaho tho tumhari didi ki zindagi mai phir se khushiya laa sakti ho..

(if are ready for the deal then u can bring the happiness in your didi's life)

geet: aap kahiye mei kya kar sakti hoon..jo bhi karna hoga mei karongi,kyunki..meri didi hi mere liye sab kuch hai..

(you tell me what shud i do..whatever it is, i will do it for sure coz i my didi is all i have in life..)

aman's mom: tho theek hai..tumhe pata hi hai ke hamara ghar ab puraana ho gaya hai aur hum sab chaahthe hai ki nai flat liya jaaye,aman ke office ke paas..aur iss keliye bohot paise chahiye..thode bohot paise hai..lekin 50 lakh rupai ki aur zaroorath padegi..ab tum soch rahi hogi ki mei ye sab tumse kyun keh hi hoon..tho mei ye chahathi hoon ki tum apni ghar bechkar hume paisa dedo;dehej ke roop mei..usse ghar ko kareeb 80 lacs tho mil hi jaayengi..tum humare paise dene ke baadh jo baaki hai usse ek chota sa ghar le lena..aur tum kaam bhi tho karthi ho..usse tumhare ghar kharch bhi ho jayenge...kyun manzoor hai meri baath??

(then let me tel u..u know that our house has became old...so we were planning to buy a new flat near aman's office..and for that we require a lot of money..even we have some with us but;need 50 lacs more for purchasing the flat..u will be wondering..why iam telling u all these; its because i want u to sell ur own house and give us the money we want as dowry given to ur sister..and iam sure;that property will cost nearly 80 lacs..so whatever is left after giving our share;that u can use to purchase a small house for urself..and u work also;which will be helpful in your livelihood too..so are y ready for the deal??)

so what will be our geet's decision???
wait for the next part😊
( note --- 1- thats all for this part..hope u will like it..
sorry for the mistake..
next part i will bring maan into the scene...

2- those who want imagine shagun and aman's face they are:
shagun-second naintara of geet
aman - first dev of geet
3- the english version of the update is given in brackets;for those who cant understand hindi )
Edited by revathinair - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Nice part
Poor geet will sell her house for her sisters happiness
Waiting for maan's entry
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
nice update
looks like geet with sell her house for her sister happiness
waiting for maan's entry!!!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: zariya123

poor shagun

geet is very good sister

yes shagun is facing a very tough time..
and geet is a sister who everyone wish for😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: priya111111

its different and very nice

continue dear

thank u som much for liking this story😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: gurti30

nice story dear

geet's sister is in really bad condition

thanks for commenting..
everything wil be fine in shaguns life will wait and see😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
thanks😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
thanks for the comment😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: doublecross

wow sweetheart! Good to see U writing! I would like to thank your best friend sona too for urging U to write such a wonderful part! Its beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it! But am still very down with back ache, its slip disc and am restricted to my bed, so please forgive for the brief comment


iam glad u liked my first attempt😊
iam really happy that u found time to read in this condition too..
get well soon pri..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
poor shagun got a dayan for an in law
I guess that is why Geet is selling the house.
nice part pls make it bigger yaar

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