THE LOCKET (13) MG FF,new thread link pg 1,COMPLETED - Page 11

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! Regd note pls continue the story as planned! Well written! Hate Sasha! Bt Geet tells her off! Maan mesmerised by Geet! Bt thinks she broke his heart ! update soon!

Originally posted by: TheSunShine

Geet read the last page of maan'a diary he didn't burn it 😃🥳Sasha is in her dream world about Maan🤢. Geet innocently commenting on her dress🤣. Maan is surprised to see Geet evolved into a busineswoman 👏. Maan thinks Geet is cheating 🥺 What Maan is going to do now😕

Originally posted by: paponecon

husband...blush...shy...janam...lips...hai me really mar jawa...

Originally posted by: romanceorlove

First things first... thanks for the PM.

Now my appreciation about chap 55: love your writing style, an update about Poonam and Chandan, bringing all the characters to same time frame, giving each character its identity, story & POV 👏. But I got a bit confused here, how did they get to a desert? Did I miss reading some chapter? 😳Hopefully not! Quiet possibly I don't remember the chapter!! 😳 I have an inkling to re-read the entire story so far once again 😳

Poonam has taken a decision, a firm one finally!! Lets see if and when she realises he was a victim rather than a culprit!! It will be interesting to see how the family unites. I have a feeling the Mosquito will play a pivotal role here... let's see wat u have planned it out!!

Finally Kabir and Megha are official 👏 yay!!!

Geet is the only one who could call it a mosquito bite 😃. Poor Naintara 😆 she got bit by a very big mosquito 😆

Chap 56: I understand most of the readers and writers in this forum are for Mann and Geet, but me thinks you should stick to your storyline.

Loved their reaction to each other 😊 poor Mann doesn't know she is doing everything for him and he will repent so much once all of it is cleared 😆 silly geet has no clue about his thought process 😛

Brilliant entry of manish-a 👏😃 I imagined the guy in the serial and found it so hilarious 😆 mum saw me and asked wat happened😳😃

Poor Mann the more he wants to keep away from him, the more he finds her entwined in his life. Poor "devarji" is being assumed to be behind her change and her "love interest" 😆

I am looking forward to your idea of MSK. I only hope its a different treatment, many writers stick and weave it around the tele character!!!

Awaiting your teaser and next update!!!

Keep it coming on :)

Originally posted by: romanceorlove

Oopsie forget another aspect 😳 absolutely brilliant and perfect song selection 👏👍🏼

Torn dress and sense of fashion 😆😆

She thinks of taking her to pinky's store 😆😆 can only imagine sasha's reaction when she gets to know it 😆

Originally posted by: Alpha01

Go Geet. Wow she's becom a very professional business woman. Maan you better watch out MSK might have met his match. It'll be interesting to see how she deals with his MSK avatar. But love that Geet is still the simple and innocent Geet - she thinks Sasha is wearing ajeeb phutti clothes! Hahaha! Loved it. Finally Manishaji makes his entry - brilliant! Maan babu your izzatt needs saving!

Originally posted by: alfik

awesome update...Geet putting kaala tika was really sweet...

Then the conversation between Sasha n Geet quite hilarious...

Then evolution of Geet Handa too good...

Then the last part was more hilarious than Sasha Geet conversation...

Manish...a hahahahaha😆

But after what he decided to do i am scared to think what will happen next...😒

Originally posted by: priya111111

geet ne tara ka diya huwa dress pehliya aur maan ne tho usko door se hi pehchan liya aur beech may jealousy bhi aagayi hai 😉😆😆😆😆

Now comes the possessive passionate Dusht Danav..😃

arey waah geet ka dream poora huwa maan ki baaho mein aakar gir gayi 😳 aur maan usmein kho gaya 😳

Aakhir Geet ko bhi khush rakhna chahiye na..😆

hillarious part when geet commented on shasha's dress😆😆😆😆😆

maan came to know about geet working with dadi


arey waah geet ne tho sab kuch achi tarah se presentation dediya aur final bhi hogayi

dadi ne tho bomb phoddiya maan ke upar ki geet aur maan dono kaam karne waale hai uss project par😆😆😆😆
Dekhte hai if DD agrees to it. Daadima hai na, ussein abhi theek kar denge..😃

yehlo manisha ka entry bhi hogayi hai😆😆😆aur wo raat ko bhi available hai maan keliye uski door ke bahaar hi sojayega😆😆😆
Kaha kaha bhagega Maan. Ghar mein, office mein outhouse mein... sab jagah problems hi problems hai
maan ne tho MSK ka avatar dikhane keliye tayaar horaha hai. dekhthe hai kaise dikhayega apna yeh avatar