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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
part 10
awesome...
Geet idiot she could have gotten in trouble for roaming like this at this time...
but Maan saw her with Maamaji...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 11

He takes her to the dabha...

He sits there quietly watching what she does...

Geet looks at Maan...she looks up the sky?

Babaji...mein ab kya karoon?

Maan: beitjao

Geet: hum phir kabhi aathe hai, lagtha hai ki ab dabah band karnewale hai, dekho koi bhi nahi hai

Maan: mujhe toh abhi khana hai

Geet: kya? Par mujhe bhook nahi hai

Maan: tum toh yahan khane ke liye kitne dhoor se aayi haina? Beitjao

Maan stares...Geet sits...

Chotu comes to take the order...

Geet pretends as if she knows that place very well...

Chotu recognizes Maan...

Abhi abhi aaya tha na?

Chotu: namasthe saab, aapko kya chahiye?

Maan looks at Geet...

Geet: mujhe kyun dekhthe ho? aap ka muh toh band nahi haina?

Maan: hare, tum yahan ka regular customer ho, tumme hi patha hoga ki yahan kya achcha hai. tum hi mere liye bhi order karo

Hare babaji mein toh isko range haath pakadne aayi thi aur yahan toh sab kuch ulta ho raha hai, lagtha hai ki ye mujhe shak kartha...

Babaji, sirf aaj aap mujhe isse bachalo...

Geet prays to her babaji...

Maan enjoys her antics...

Maan: toh Geet, kya khaoge?

Geet: 4 lacha paratha, ek shahi paneer, ek dal makhanni, aur ek butter chicken

Ye sunkke chotu hastha...

Geet gets angry...

Geet: hare, kyun hasthe ho?

Chotu: butter chicken yahan nahi millega

Geet: haan haaan, mujhe bhi patha hai ki yahan Fridays ko non-veg nahi miltha, mein bas tumme test kar rahi thi, tum yahan naye naye aaye haina?

Chotu: kya? mein yahan 2 saal se kaam kartha hoon, aur jabse mein aaya hoon ye toh vegetarian dhabha hi hai

Geet: kya?

Maan smirks...

Geet: ye joot bol raha hai

Maan: tum jao

Chotu chale jaatha...

Maan Geet ko hi dekhthe rehtha...

Geet: mujhe patha hai, aap mujhe shak karthe ho, haina?

Maan: meinne aaisa kuch anhi kaha, agar tumme aaise lagtha hai toh woh teri problem hai, mein kuch nahi kar saktha

Geet: toh aap mujhe aaise kyun dekhthe ho?

Maan ko bhi patha nahi woh kyun Geet se ek pal bhi nazar nahi hata saktha...

Ussko kuch ho gay hai, Maan Singh Khurana kabhi kissi ladhkki ke saath bahar dinner nahi kartha, woh bhi dabha mein?

Lekhin Maan ko Geet pe koi shak nahi hotha, patha nahi kyun ussko Geet bahut pasand aayi, aur Maan ko lagtha hai ki ye bahut innocent hai

Geet enjoys her meal...Maan bas ussko dekhthe hi rehtha...

They drive back...

Maan drives slowly for he doesn't want this journey to end ...

Geet is still thinking about why Maan was giving money to that man...

It starts raining...

Geet ko barish bahut pasand hai...

She opens the window...

Maan gets irritated...

Maan: kya kar rahi ho? Window close karo

Geet ignores his warning, stretches her arms like a kid and starts playing in the rain...

Maan looks at her ...

She looks like a bloomimg flower smiling in the morning dew with the rain drops splashing on her moonlit face...

Maan slows down the car for her to enjoy the moment...

He doesn't want to spoil her happiness...

He is seeing her smiling for the first time...

After that accident Geet remained sad and broken...

Maan too felt bad for her illfate...

Being an orphan she grew up alone and when she met someone to share her life with her bad luck snatched him from her and pushed her back to her loneliness...

Atleast Maan has dadi to support him now...

But Geet doesn't have anyone, poor girl...

Maan keeps staring her...

Geet turns towards him...

Maan tries to take his eyes off her but couldn't...

Maneet eyelock...

Geet pleads him to stop the car...

Ankhon mein hi ishara karthi...Maan bhi uski request ko accept kartha...

Geet wants to get down and drench in the rain...she loves drenching in the rain...

But Maan has lost himself in her beauty and he keeps driving still looking into her hazel eyes...

Geet: gadhi rokho

Geet tries to stop the car...

Maan hosh mein aatha...

Maan: haan

Maan applies the breaks...

Geet gets down and starts walking in the rain...

Maan can't let her go alone...

He too follows her...

Geet ko patha nahi ki Maan peecha kar raha hai...

She hops in the rain and is fully drenched...

Maan keeps following her as if he is bound by some magic...

Haan, yahi haina Maneet ki magic?

After a while she starts dancing in the rain...

Maan is mersmerised by this dancing beauty and he just wants to join her...

He gets closer and closer...

Geet is swirling in the rain...

She is looking up in the ksy...

Trying to spot the clouds...

She hits him unknowingly ...

She rests her head on his chest and she feels his heart beat...

She is lost in their rhymimg melody...

Maan too freezes not knowing what to do...

Thunder strikes and Geet hugs him in shock...

Maan embraces her and Geet feels like she is in safe hands now...

She feels like she belongs here, feeling comfortable within his warm embrace...

This is what she was yearning for, someone by her side, a shoulder to rest , a pair of hands to hold her whenever she feels low and someone to stand by her when she is in pain...

Just like this day...she is in deep pain that she has been hiding all these days...

She has been feeling lonely all these years and just when she thought that she has found a friend, a companion in Dev she has lost him too...

She didn't feel this intimacy with Dev, this is strange, maybe deep down in her heart she has acceptd Maan as her husband...nooo

She suddenly realizes that something is wrong...

How can I be so stupid...this is crazy...

Kaise shadhi?kaissa bandan? Sab bakwaas hai...

She steps back and tries to run away from that place...

Maan catches hold of her hand and stops her...

He looks into her eyes ...geet couldn't face them...

She could sense some kind of ownership in that look...

As if they are warning her that she is now Maan's ...Maan ki Geet...

What's he trying to say..." mujhe haq hai?"

Maan lifts her and takes her to the car...

Geet is puzzled by his behavior...

Maan also realizes that something is wrong with him...

How could he touch her, hug her and take her with him as if she is his love...

He has no right over her, this girl is not his wife...

Maan should come out of this misconception ...

Maan drives silently, looking at the road...

He can't look into her eyes...

He feels that he has commited some crime...

He feesl so guilty...

Geet too keeps looking into the darkness of the night...

She is also not feeling good...

Maan drops her at the hostel and leaves...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Awesme
first hug😳
amazng
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
amazing update waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
beautiful dear
maneet r falling for each other😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Part - 12

That night Maan has a lot of trouble getting Geet out of his mind...

He decides that it's better to keep this girl away from him...

That would be the best for both of them...

Next morning...

Geet as usual dadi se milne KM aathi...

She has come late deliberately to avoid the embarrassment of facing Maan after what happened last night...

She knows Maan leaves home at 9 sharp...

Poor Geet! How would she know that she had spoiled Maan's sleep and so he is still at home...

He is venting his anger on his tai-chi...

Geet walks in and pass thru the garden...

She heads towards the pooja room where Dadi would be performing her prayers...

On the way she stops hearing some noise...

She wonders what was that?

She doesn't know about Maan's routines...

He would finish his exercises early in the morning ...

But today he has a long session...he could not digest the fact that he has started liking Geet...

Maan Singh Khurana kissi bhi ladhkki ke barein mein kaise soch saktha?

Ye toh bahut bada paap haina?

Issiliye Maan apne aap ko saza de raha hai...

Geet goes in the direction of the sound and finds Maan...

She couldn't help gazing his bare torso...she hides behind the pillar and looks at him without his notice...

Maan feels strange...he feels that someone is watching him...

He has this bad feeling that it is Geet...

Maan stops and looks around...

Geet is scared...

She tries to get away...

Her payal lets her down...

Maan confirms that it is her...

Now Maan has become used to Geet's payal sound...

He is mersmerised by every thing associated with Geet...

Her bak bak...even her babaji...

Ab toh babaji bhi Maan ko geet ki yaad dilathe hai...

Waise Geet ke aane ke badh hi Maan bhi babaji ko yaad karne laga hai...

Her boli bali aankhen, jo hamesha sawaal karthe rehthe hai...

Aur usskke nigayen toh Maan ko hamesha confuse karthe hai...

Ek pal ko lagtha hai ki woh Maan ko paas bhulathe hai...

Aur ek pal ko lagtha hai ki Maan se darthe hai...

Pal pal badalthi Geet ki nakren bhi Geet ki tarah Maan ko aur Geet ke oor keenchthe hai...

Maan is having a hard time fighting with this new found feelings for Geet...

Ye ehsaas jinko Maan ke zindagi mein kabhi bhi koi jagah nahi tha ab toh Maan ki zindagi bangaye hai...

Inkko mitana mushkil hi nahi namunkin lagtha hai...

Still Maan keeps searching for her naughty eyes...

They speak volumes than her lips...

Maan kabhi kabhi confuse ho jaatha ki Geet ke nigayen ussko zyada tang karthe hai ya Geet ki bak bak?

How long would this hide and seek continue?

Maan wants to put an end to this game...

Maan is scared of losing to this silly girl...

Maan hates losing, that too losing to a girl...

Issiliye iss khel ko abhi katam karna chahatha...

He finds her hiding behind the screen and pulls her out...

Geet collides on his bare body...

She looks into his eyes...

Maan doesn't feel good...

This girl has gone mad...

Yes, she is madly in love with MSK...

Maan pushes her aside and leaves immediately...

Geet runs away...

Dadi: hare Geet bete, dhere

Geet: gud morning dadi...

Dadi: gud morning Geet, aayiye hummare saath nastha kijiye

Dadi takes her to the dinning table...

Geet ko Maan ke nazar mein aaj kuch zyada hi gussa dekha...

She is very scared...she doesn't feel hungry...

Geet: Dadi, aap beitiye, meinne abhi abhi nastha kiya hai, mein aapko serve karthi hoon

Maan just comes ...

Maan sits on his chair and waits for Nakul...

Geet Dadi ko toast serve karkke Maan ko bhi serve karne jaathi...

Maan gets furious...

Maan shouts : Nakulll

Nakul has gone to the market...

Dadi: Nakul ghar pe nahi hai

Maan: Dadi, ye yahan kya kar rahi hai?

Dadi: Maan bete, ye kaise sawaal hai?

Maan: Dadi aapko patha nahi, ye yahan koi galat iradhe mein aayi hai, ussko abhi yahan se jaane ko kahiye, mein ussko dubara hummare ghar mein dekhna nahi chahatha

Geet ko lagtha hai ki Maan issiliye naraaz hai kyunki Geet ne ussko shak kiya tha...

She drops the dish in the table and walks away...

Dadi: geeet, Geet bete

Maan: Dadi, usse mat rokhiye, aap usske barein mein nahi jaathe, usska yahan se dhoor rehna hi achcha hoga

Dadi: Maan, ye teek nahi hai

Maan: nahi dadi, mujhe issko pehla hi rokhna chahiye tha, ye toh meri hi galthi hai, mein dubara aaise galthi hone nahi doonga

Dadi ko kya patha ki Maan kiss halat mein guzar raha hai...

Maan leaves without eating...

Dadi has never seen Maan getting so angry and wild...

She thinks that Maan hates Geet...

Geet stops coming to KM...

She is back to her lonely phase...

Pinky tries to take her out to cheer her up...

But Geet stays inside her room aal day...

Kabhi kabhi Dev ko dekhne jaathi aur usskke pas beitkke rohti rehthi...

Khaas aaj mein dev se baat kar sakthi?

Geet: dev, utto Dev, aaj mujhe teri saath baat karne ki sakht zaroorat hai, utto Dev, tumne teek kaha tha, tummare behar mein bikkul akhele ho gayi, kissi ko bhi mujhe pasand nahi hai, sab mujhe nafrat karthe hai

Geet feels like the whole world hates her just b'coz Maan hates her...

That means Maan is the world for her, ye toh Geet ki shatir dimag ko patha nahi?...she feels that she is being rejected...

Mamaji bhi Geet ko apna agla mission pe lagana chahathe par Geet unsse milna hi nahi chahathi...

Ab Geet ko lagtha hai ki woh sach ko jaankke kya karegi?

Dev toh jaise bhi coma mein hai...

ab usse Maan se koi lena dena nahi hai...

woh toh Maan ki shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahathi...

babaji zaroor ussko sabak sikhaayenge, haina babaji?

Next week...

As usual dadi goes to see Dev one morning...

She is surprised to see a new visitor at Dev's bed...

Dadi: ye yahan kaise ?

It's Nayan Tara...

NT is Dev's ex-girl friend...

They had been friends for years and finally one day Dev proposed NT and she also was so happy to marry him...

They decided to get married after settling in their lives...

Both were doctors...

But Dev felt that he is more into dancing than medicine...

Actually NT pestered him to take medicine and Dev was also interested in the beginning...

But as he started training as a dancer full fledges he lost concentration in his studies and lost interest inmedicine...

After graduation NT joined PG but dev started to take his dance seriously...

NT didn't like that much but ahe thought that that was just a passing cloud and dev would get back to his medical profession sober...

But as days passed dev forgot his doctorate and started this dance school...

NT got a research opportunity in the US...

She wanted to get married and go to the US with dev...

Dev can start as a research assistant to her and get back to his profession...

If she takes him to a new place then he would give up his faltu dancing...

But Dev was not ready to leave his brohher and he was neither interested in research...

They broke up but NT is still in love with him and was waiting for him to come with her to the US...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
maan is angry on geet , poor geet
NT is here chalo accha hai when dev will come back from coma he can move on with NT
and maaneet will be together😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear
confused maan shouted over geet and poor geet feeling so alone and rejected
so dev's ex GF is here
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1 - 12
awesome updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 12
nice...
oh ho Maan doesnt want to get disturbed by his growing feelings for Geet...
and OMG Dev loved Naintara?
does Geet know about this?
cont soon dear...

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