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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
part 8
awesome...
Daadima is thinking that Geet is liking Maan or at least thinking about him...
how wrong she is...
and Geet dear Maan is reacting like this for a different reason...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
maan geet par fida hone laga hai

yeh kya geet aur mamaji maan par shaq karrahe hai dev ki accident ko
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Part - 9

Geet finds Maan often speaking on the phone with someone secretly...

There is something fishy about it...

He gets angry when Geet tries to follow him or get into his cabin while he is talking with that person...

Who could that be?

Zaroor koi hai jo Maan ki madat kar raha hai...

Geet ko jaldhi uska patha lagana chahiye...

Thode din Maan ke saath KC mein rehke Geet ko Maan ke barein mein bahut kuch patha chaltha...

Jaise ki woh kitna gussewala hai...

Ladhkiyon se dhoor rehtha hai...

Aur sabko apne bade bade ankhon dikahke kaam karwatha hai...

Sab usko dekthe hi gayab ho jaathe hai, usse bahut darthe hai, lekhin phir bhi Maan ki bahut izzat karthe hai, koi bhi Maan ke barein mein ek bhi bhure baat nahi kehtha, sab Maan ke barein mein bahut uncha hi sochthe hai...

Ye sab dekhke Geet bahut confuse ho jaathi...

Ye MSK villain hai ya hero?

Pehle toh lagtha tha ki ye bahut katharnaak villain hai, lekhin ab to kalnayak ke roop mein nayak lagtha...

At KC...

Maan is getting ready to meet aclient...

This is a special client...

If he is impressed they could strike gold...

They will get a huge deal...

Client arrives and Adi takes him to the conference room...

Adi asks Geet to inform Maan...

Geet goes to Maan's cabin...

Maan is busy in his work...

He is preparing for the meeting...

Geet forgets to knock the door...

She just enters and hurries to wards Maan...

Maan is shocked ...

Maan: Geeet

Geet gets angry and starts shouting...

Geet: kya geeet? Mein aapki naukrani nahi hoon, samje aap?

Maan: knock nahi kar sakthi?

Geet: kyun? Ye mera bhi office hau

Maan: par ye mera cabin hai

Geet keeps moving forward in her angry mode...

She hits the table and trips and falls...

Maan tries to stop her but within a second she is on his lap...

Maan ko shock laga...shock laga laga shock laga...

Geet is scared...

She tries to get up...

She looks at him...their eyes meet...

Maan looks into her eyes...

Maneet eyelock...

Maan's phone rings...

Maan pushes her and looks at the no...

He just throws her out of the cabin and shuts the door...

Ye zaroor uska hi call hoga...

Geet knocks the door...

Maan doesn't respond...

She knocks again but Maan is busy...

Geet keeps knocking the door till Maan comes and opens it suddenly...

Geet almost falls over him...

Maan stares her and she is realy afraid this time...

He looks very angry and irritated...

Geet: woh...Adi sir

Maan just pushes her aside and moves on...

Geet stands still and keeps looking at him...

Why is he avoiding me?

Geet is confused...

Kyun, aaise kisse baat kar raha hoga?

Suddenly Geet is worried whether that could be a girl?

Nahi nahi...iss sadu ki koi girl friend kaise ho sakthi?

Aur waise bhi, uska koi GF ho ya na ho, mujhe kya?

Ye mera pathi thodi nahi, haina babaji?

Geet tries to get rid of that thought...

But she keeps thinking about it all day...

She has to put an end to this unwanted thoughts soon...

Jaise bhi Geet ko pehle patha lagana hai ki woh koi ladhki hai ya nahi...

Nahi toh Geet ko neendh bhi nahi aayegi...

Aaj toh Geet Maan ko nahi chodnewali hai...

Office ke badh Geet hostel nahi ,seedhe KM chale jaathi...

That evening...

Geet and dadi are chatting in the hall...

Maan comes home...

Dadi: Maan bete, aaj toh aap jaldhi aagaye?

Maan: haan dadi, aaj kissi se milne jaana hai

Dadi: kisse milna hai bete?

Maan: koi official meeting hai dadi

Dadi: teek hai bete, aap dinner bhi bahar hi karenge?

Maan: haan Dadi

Just then Maan gets a call...

He gets nervous seeing the number...

Maan: excuse me dadi

Maan tries to go away...

Geet uska peecha karthi...

Maan: fool, tumme phone karne ki kya zaroorat thi? Mein bas tumse hi milne aaraha hoon

Caller says something...

Geet could only hear Maan...

Maan: what?

Maan: are you sure?

Maan: haan haan, paise lekhe aaraha hoon, kaam ho gaya haina? Paisa miljayega

Geet is relieved that Maan has no girl friend and it's someone else...

Geet: ye kissko paisa de raha hai? aur kaise kaam hai? kahin issne hi Dev ko marne ki koshish toh nahi kiya tha? Ye mamaji hamesha sahi kaise hothe?

Still Geet wishes that mamaji was wrong judging Maan...

Ye toh utna dhust danav nahi lagthe?

Geet ka dil toh nahi mantha, par dil toh pagal haina...

Geet ka dimag kehtha hai ki Maan kuch chupa raha hai...

Ye dil aur dimag ka ladayi toh tab jaake katam hoga jab asli khooni ka patha chaltha...

Jaise bhi khooni ka patha lagana hai...par kaise, socho Geet, jaldhi kuch socho, tummare paas waqt bahut kam hai...

Geet is hiding behind the curtain and thinking about her next move...

Maan sees her hiding...

He pulls her out...

Geet stumbles on him and they fall on the ground...

Maan tries to get off but couldn't...

Geet is holding him and is not letting him go...

Maan: geeet

Geet tries to get up but her duppatta is under Maan...

She tries to pulls it but falls over him again...

Maan holds her and stops her...

He gets off her duppatta and helps her ...

They somehow manage to get up...

Maan: tum, yahan kya kar arhi ho?

Geet: woh...Dadi...dadi...

Geet struggles to find words...

Nakul comes...

Nakul: Maan sir, aapko dekhne koi aaya hai

Geet: haan, neeche koi aaya hai

Geet some how escapes...

Maan ko Geet pe shak hotha...

Koi toh baat hai, mujhe patha lagana padega...

Geet goes and meets mamaji...

Geet: no. 1, khooni apne aadmi se baat kar raha tha

Mamaji: kya? tumne unkki sare batein suna hai kya?

Geet: nahi, mein sirf khooni ki baat ko sun payi

Mamaji: very good no. 2, toh tumne kya suna?

Geet: woh koi kaam ke baat kar raha tha?

Mamaji: cold blooded murder?

Geet: aur ussko paise dene ki baat kar raha tha

Mamaji: supari?

Geet: aur aaj ussko milne jaa raha hai

Mamaji: tumne usska peecha kyun nahi kiya?

Geet: ussko mujhpe shak ho gaya

Mamaji: no. 2, tumne mere naak kaatdhi, mere assistant hokke tum itna sa kaam bhi teek se nahi kar sakthi?

Geet: sorry no. 1, agle bar aaise nahi hoga

Mamaji: aaj khooni humse bhaj gaya, lekhin jaldh hi hum usse pakadenge, haina?

Geet: haan, humme police ko inform karna padega

Mamaji police ke naam sunthe hi darjaathe...

Mamaji: police? Kahan hai police?

Mamaji table ke neeche chup jaathe...

Geet: no. 1, police nahi hai, bahar aao

Mamaji comes out...

Mamaji: mein police se nahi dartha, woh mujhse darthe hai...

Mamaji ka agla plan...

Maan ko follow karna...

Mamaji aur Gee tab Maan ko har waqt follow karenge...

Maamaji ka purana gadhi haina?

Ab toh Maan mamaji se bach nahi saktha...

Next day...

Geet ko patha chaltha ki uss raat Maan kissi ko milne jaa raha hai...

Maan Adi se phone pe baat kar raha tha...

Maan: Adi, aaj sham ki sare programs cancel kardo

Adi: sir, aaj Mr.Sharma ke saath bahut important meeting hai, humne iss meeting ko pehle hi ek bar postpone kar diya hai, aaj postpone nahi kar sakthe

Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha? Meeting ko postpone nahi cancel kardho, samje?

Adi: lekhin sir ye toh 2 crore ka deal hai

Maan: Adiii

Adi: ji sir

Dadi: Maan bete, subhe subhe kisska band bhajrahe hai?

Maan smiles...

Maan: Dadi, Adi ka phone tha

Dadi: toh aaj Adi pasgaya?

Maan: kya dadi? Aap bhi?

Dadi: Maan bete bechare Adi ek na ek din zaroor kahin bhaag jayega

Maan: bye Dadi, aaj mein raat ko bahar jaaraha hoon, aap mere intrezaar mat karna

Dadi: teek hai bete

Aaj toh Geet Maan ko range haath pakdegi...

She informs mamaji and asks him to be ready...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Gosh dats really funny🤣
mamaji😆
where's maan going??
Kya no 2 sach me maan ko follow karege😉
anyways awesme part
waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
awesome update
to whom maan goes to meet????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
great update I love this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Nice updatw dear
i think maan is also trying to find the culprit
geet thinking if maan has a girlfriend 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Part - 10

Mamaji apne mission ke liye tayaar hai...

Geet comes and meets him ...

Geet: mamaji, sab tayaar haina?

Mamaji: haan

Geet: toh mission shurru karein?

Mamaji: haan, aao mere saath

Mamaji takes her to his car...

Geet is surprised...it's an old Chevrolet...

Koi vintage show mein first prize zaroor milegi usko...

Geet: mamaji, ye kya hai?

Mamaji: hare, humme Maan ko follow karna haina?

Geet: haan, par woh itne raat ko walking karnewale toh nahi haina?

Mamaji: tum andar beito, phir dekho iska kamaal...

Mamaji and Geet wait in their car outside KC...

Maan leaves...

Driver bhi nahi hai, Maan kudh drive kar raha hai...

Maamji: Geet, tumne teek kaha, ye toh zaroor isska hi kaam hai

Geet: maamji, ab jaldhi gadhi start karo

Mamaji: wahi toh koshish kar raha hoon

Geet: kya?

Maamji: Geet, tum ek kaam karo , thoda gadhi ko peeche se push karo

Geet: mein? Nahi aap push karo, mein drive karthi

Mamaji push karkke gadhi ko start karthe hai...

They follow Maan's car(?)...

Maamji: hare, gadhi kahan hai?

Geet: mamaji, aap ko kya lagtha, woh hummare liye wait karthe? Woh toh chale gaye

Mamaji: tum tez jaathi toh hum ussko pakad sakthe

Geet: tez, yahi max speed hai, aapki gadhi ki

Geet is very disappointed...

She has to do this for Dev...

She is determined to find out what Maan is doing here at this time?

She drives as fast as she could...

Mamaji is worried, his car is not used to this race...

Mamaji: Geet, dhere, meri gadhi karab ho jayegi

Geet turns and stares him...

Geet: iss gadhi mein ab karab hone ki kya bachi hai?

Mamaji: hare, ye meri jet rider hai

Geet: mamajiii, aap aur aapki gadhi...

Maamji: Geet, ab hum kya karenge?

Geet: mujhe kyun poochthe ho? Aapki pyaari gadhi se poocho

Mamaji: hum wapas jaathe hai Geet, koi aur idea milega

Geet: nahi, jaise bhi aaj hum usko nahi chod sakthe

Mamaji: toh teek hai

Geet keeps driving...

She looks for Maan's car but there is no sign of it...

Suddenly mamaji jumps ...

Geet is afraid that he has got a heart attack...

Mamaji: Geeet...gadhi rokho, gadhi rokho

Geet: mamaji, kya hua?

Mamaji: woh...woh...

Mamaji had spoted Maan's car...

Luckily Maan had stopped at the nearby bunk to fill the tank...

Mamaji: Geet, woh dekho, Maan

Geet: haan, thank you babaji, aapne hummare itna madat kardhi ab thoda traffic jam bhi karwathe toh hum asaani se Maan ko follow kar sakthe

Mamaji: Geet, babaji se badh mein baat karna, dekho woh chal raha hai

Maan is angry with his driver for keeping the fuel tank empty...

Maan: damn it...iss nalayak driver ko kaun kaam pe rakhega?

Maan ko dekhthe hi Geet ko patha chal gaya ki Maan kitne gusse mein hai...

Geet feels bad for the driver...

Bechara driver, usko kaise patha hoga ki Maan aaise itni raat ko kudh gadhi lekhe itna dhoor jayega?...

Kal se uski chuti...Maan ne toh abhi usse kaam se nikhaldiya hoga...

Geet follows him ...

Delhi ka traffic mein toh Geet bicycle se bhi Maan ko follow kar sakthi...

Maan kissi high way pe jaakke Delhi ke outer kahin jaatha...

Ab toh Maan ki gadhi seconds mein gayab ho gayi...

Achcha hua ki ye high way hai...

Jaise bhi ho Maan yahi rasthe pe jaa raha hoga...

They find Maan's car parked infront of a dabha?

Maan yahan khatha hai? nahi nahi, ye toh koi aur baat hai...

Geet stops the car at some distance and they go to find out what's happening inside the dabha...

Maan kissi aadmi se baat kar raha hai...

Maan is looking very angry...

Finally he thanks him and gives him the money...

Geet ussko apne phone mein video karthi...

Ab saboot bhi mil gaya, bhaago Geet bhaago...

Mamaji: Geet, mujhe dikhao, mein ek bar check kartha hoon

Geet shows him...

Mamaji galthi se video ko delete karthe hai...

Maamji: Geet, kahan hai?

Geet: mamamji, teek se dekho, meinne abhi abhi dekha tha

Mamaji: tum hi dekho

Geet looks and finds the video missing...

Geet: mamaji, aapne kya kiya ?

Mamaji: tumne teek se shoot nahi kiya hoga

Geet: mamajiii

Maan has finished his work and is ready to return...

Geet: mamaji, jaldhi karo

They run and get inside the car...

Geet: hare Mamaji, aap andar kya karthe ho? jaao jaldhi

Mamaji ko abhi yaad aatha hai ki ye unkki pyaari gadhi hai, ye tabhi start hogi jab mamaji pyaar se ussko push karthe, haina?

Mamaji pushes the car...

Maan crosses them and finds mamaji there...

Maan: ye yahan kya kar rahe hai?

He looks inside the car and finds Geet...

Maan pareshaan ho jaatha...

Ye ladhkki kabhi nahi sudheregi...

Itne raat ko iss pagal mamaji ke saath yahan kya kar rahi hai?

He stops the car and goes towards them...

Mamaji Maan ko dekhthe hi gadhi ke andar jaakkke chup jaathe...

Geet: mamaji, kya hua?

Mamaji points outside...Mana is standing there staring Geet...

Geet turns the other side and pretends not to have seen him...

Geet:mamaji, udar mar dekho, woh chale jayenge

Mamaji: nahi Geet, woh yahi aaraha hai

Geet: kya?

Maan knocks the window...

Geet looks at him...

Maan: bahar nikhlo Geeet

Geet gets down...

Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Mamaji andar hi hai...

Maan: mamaji, aap bhi bahar aao

Maamji's legs are shaking even without music...

Geet: maamji, daro mat

Mamaji: Geet, lagtha hai ki aaj hum range haath pakad gaye

Maan: Geet, jawab do, yahan kyun aayi?

Geet: hum yahan kya kar rahe hai? mamaji boliye

Mamaji : hum...hum

Mamaji toh dar se baat bhi nahi kar pathe...

Geet: haan, mamaji, hum yahan khana khane aaye hai, haina?

Geet winks...

Mamaji: haan

Maan: itne raat ko shehar se itne dhoor tum log khana klhane aaye the?

Geet: woh kya haina? Mamaji ko yahan ka khana hi pasand hai, issiliye

Maamji: puthar, yahan ka khana itna achcha hai?

Geet: ye kya hai mamaji? Hum yahan pehle bar thodi nahi aarahe hai, hum toh har Thursday ko yahan aathe hai, haina?

Maan: Geet, aaj Friday hai

Geet: toh kya hua? Kal aa nahi paye toh aaj aaye hai

Maan:Geet, itna joot bholne ki koi zaroorat nahi, koi itne raat ko yahan khana khane nahi aayega

Geet: aap iss dabhe mein khana khane aasakthe toh hum kyun nahi aasakthe?

Maan: tumme kaise patha ki mein wahan se aaraha hoon? Kahin tum mera peecha toh nahi kar rahi thi?

Geet: nahi toh

Maan: toh teek hai, chalo, mein tumme drop kartha hoon

Geet: nahi nahi, aap jao, hum khana khakke aathe hai, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai

Maan: what? Tumne khaya nahi? Toh andar kya kar rahi thi?

Geet: mein bas yahi dekhne aayi thi ki dabha abhi bhi khula hai ya band hai

Maan: Geet, band dabhe mein itna lights nahi chaltha, itna akal hotha toh isskke saath aadi raat ko bahar nahi aathi

Geet: kya?

Maan: kuch nahi, tumne kitchen ko check kiya haina?

Geet: kya?

Maan: kahin gas katam ho gaya toh nahi?

Geet: toh aapko mere baat mein yakheen nahi hotha haina?

Maan: haan, mujhe patha hai ki tum mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Maan: toh chalo, hum saath mein khana khathe hai, mujhe bhi bahut bhook lagi hai?

Geet: toh aap bhi gas ko check karne hi gaye the

Maan: what? Geeet chalo mere saath

Maan ussko haath pakadkke zabarsathi lekhe jaatha...

Geet: mamaji aap bhi aao

Mamaji: nahi Geet, mein apne gadhi ko akhele chodkke nahi aasaktha

They reach Maan's car...

Maan: get in

Geet is a little scared...

She looks at mamaji...

Mamaji toh Geet se bhi zyada dare hue hai...

Geet: mamaji, aap ki ye kachde ki dabbe ko koi churake nahi jayega, aap aayiye mere saath

Maamji: kachda? Tumne meri gadhi ko kachda kaha

Geet: haan

Maan muskuratha hai...

Geet is surprised...ye hastha bhi hai?

Maan: tumne pehle bar koi sachi baat kaha hai

Geet looks at him and is amazed to see him cracking a joke...

She pinches herself...

Babaji! Kya ye sapna toh nahi?

maybe he is trying to divert her...

Nahi nahi, isske peeche koi na koi raaz chupa hai, Geet, tujhe toh isski raaz ko patha lagana hi padega...

Geet: mamaji, aap aathe hai ya nahi

Mamaji apne gadhi ko chodke Maan ki car ki taraf aathe hai...

Geet is a little relieved...

Maan stares mamaji...

Mamaji just stops, turns back and runs...

Geet starts shouting...mamajiii

Maan then gets in the car and starts the car...

Geet stands there and looks at maamaji's car...

If she stays back then she would have to stay in the streets all night...

It's very dark and this road is so scary...

She finds a truck stopping by and picking up someone...

Kya? Ye meinne kya kardhi? Hare babaji, mein itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahi hoon?

This is not the right time to investigate...

Mein bhi na? kitne pagal hoon?

Iss mamaji pe barosa karke yahan kaise aayi?

She then gets into the car...

She is confident that Maan wouldn't harm her...

Though she wants to find the culprit who is responsible for Dev's plight and punish him, even if it's his own brother MSK, somewhere down her heart she feels that Maan is not a bad guy and she also prays that it shouldn't be Maan...

But why is she so concerned about Maan?

Ye toh waqt hi bathayega...haina?

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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
beautiful update
geet and mamaji following maan in mamaji's jet🤣
but maan found them. geet dont want maan to be the culprit😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
part 9
awesome...
Geet and her detective work is so funny...
and Maan is getting some doubts on this...

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