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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
superb & lovely updates loved it
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#32
great update. now the story is getting interesting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
ye geet aur mamji toh maan pe hi shak karne lage!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
part 6
awesome...
OMG Mamaji doubts Maan...
oh ho Maan is gonna blow a fuse...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 7

Next day...

Geet goes to see dadi...

Dadi: hare Geet, aap kal kahan the?

Geet: Dadi kal mujhe apne school ki bahut yaad aayi toh mein wahan chali gayi

Dadi: School toh band haina? Aap wahan kyun gaye?

Maan just comes...

Geet sees him and she asks dadi...

Geet: kyun Dadi? Mein wahan nahi jaasakthi? mujhe haq nahi hai kya?

Dadi: nahi bete, actually woh aapka hi hai, aap kabhi bhi jaa sakthe

Geet looks at Maan...dekha? ab kaise mujhe rokh sakthe ho?

Maan stares...

Maan: dadi, aap issko kaho ki wahan jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai

Maan is scared that she would hurt herself ...

Ye toh chalthi phirthi disaster haina?

Geet: mein jaaoongi, mujhe koi nahi rokh saktha, haina Dadi?

Maan: ek bar boltha toh tumme samaj mein nahi aatha? Tum wahan nahi jaaskthi, nahi jaaskthi, nahi jaaskthi

Maan shouts...

Geet shouts even louder...

Geet: mein jaaoongi, mein jaoongi, mein jaoongi

Maan: Dadi, mein isske saath rehtha toh mein bhi pagal hojaatha, mein bahar jaatha hoon

Geet: mujhe bhi aapke saath rehne ki koi shok nahi

Maan leaves...

Dadi: Geet, aapne khana khaya hai kya?

Geet: Dadi, mujhe bhook nahi hai

Dadi: hare, aaise kaise? Aayiye, aap bhi thoda khayiye

Geet Dadi se kuch dher Dev ke barein mein baat karthi...

Dadi recalls Dev's childhood...

She tells her how Dev lost his parents as a toddler and how Maan looked after him...

Geet: Dadi, kya mein Dev ke kamre ko dekh sakthi?

Dadil: of course beta, Nakul

Ankul: ji m'am

Dadi: Geet m'am ko Dev sab ke kamre dikhana

Geet: dadi aap thoda aaram kijiye mein aathi hoon

Dadi: teek hai beta

Nakul takes her to Dev's room...

There she finds some albums...

Dev's first b'day and some childhood pictures...

Sare photos mein Dev hi apne parents ke saath kadha hai...

Maan toh Dadi ke saath hi kadha hai...

She could find only photos of Dev with Mr. and mrs. Khurana...

She can't find a single photo of Maan with his mother...

He is either with Dadi or his Dad...

She is puzzled...

Ye shuru se hi aaisa hai kya? akkdu?

Lekhin apne maa se bhi aaise kaise ho saktha?

She finds Maan sober and lost in himself...

She wants to know more about this Mystery Maan...

She goes to Dadi's room...

Dadi is awake...

Dadi: Geet, andar aayiye

Geet : meinne aapko disturb toh nahi kiya na?

Dadi: nahi nahi, hum bhi aap ka hi intrezaar kar rahe the

Geet: Dadi, kya mein Dev ke barein mein thoda aur jaan sakthi

Dadi smiles...

Dadi: aap kya jaanna chahathe hai bete? Seedhe seedhe poochiye

Geet woh...

Geet shows the album...

Dadi: toh aapko yahi milli thi dev ke kamre se?

Geet: woh...meinne kuch galat toh nahi kiya na?

Dadi: aap kaise baat kar rahe hai? ab toh aap bhi iss pariwaar mein ek ho gayi hai

Geet wonders what Dadi wants to say...

Dadi: Yahan beititye , hummare paas

Dadi photos dekhkke purane yaadhon mein kho gayi

Khaas aaj unkka beta yahan hotha...

Maan ko ek support miltha?

Dadi closes her eyes and goes into her past...

Geet unkko disturb nahi karthi...

Geet takes a look aroung Dadi's room...

Yahan toh Dadi ka photo hai Dev aur Maan ke saath...

Aur Dev aur Maan ke recent photos bhi hai...

They look so happy together...

There is no photos of their parents...

Dadi unkke tasveer ko room mein rakhkke Maan aur Dev ko unkke parents ke yaad nahi dilana chahathi...

Dadi: Geet beta, aap hummare ek madat kijiye

Geet: kahiye Dadi

dadi takes the keys from her darwer and gives it to Geet...

geet looks at dadi...

dadi: Geet, uss almari ke andar kuch albums hai, ussko bahar nikahliye

geet takes them and gives it Dadi...

dadi: aap bhi aayiye

geet looks at the album...

This is Maan's b'day album...

That must be his third or fourth b'day...

He is with his parents here...

Maybe he was angry that they didn't allow him to cut the cake on dev's b'day...

Aur ye kaun hai?

Dadaji bhi saath hai...

Dadi looks so young...she is still young and energetic...

Geet is very excited ...

Geet: Dadi, ye Dadaji haina?

Dadi muskurathi...

Dadi: haan

Geet: dadi, aap toh bahut sundar lagthe ho

Dadi: ye toh tees saal pehle ka hai, Maan ka theersa janam din hoga

Geet: haan Dadi

Dadi: aur ye Maan ki maa hai

Dadi shows a lady ...

Geet looks at her and she is confused...

She is not the one she saw in Dev's photos...

Dadi: ye hummare pehle bahu hai, hummare bete Madan khurana ke pehli biwi, padmini

Geet: Dadi? Toh Dev Maan ka bhai nahi hai?

Dadi: aap ne teek samja, Dev Maan ke step- brother hai

Toh aaisi baat hai, Maan hates his step-mother...

Isska matlab Maan Dev ko bhi nafrat kartha?

Dadi: lekhin Maan ne Dev ko kabhi bhi paraya nahi samja,Dev ko apna saha bhai hi maanthe hai

Geet smiles...but she is stil has some doubts...

Dadi: Pammi toh Padmini ki behen hi hai, Maan ki mausi

Geet: achcha, issiliye donno ke resemblance hai

Dadi: Maan Pammi ko utna pasand nahi karthe the

Geet: issiliye Dev ke b'day snaps mein kissi khonne mein akhele kadhe kadhe sab ko gurthe rahe

Dadi: toh yahi aapka sawaal tha?

Geet pakadi gayi...

Dadi is happy that koi toh hai Maan ke barein mein sochne ke liye...ab toh lagtha hai ki Dadi ko Maan ki chintha karne ki zaroorat nahi padega, Geet haina?

Geet: mujhe laga woh isilye gusse mein hai kyunki B'day cake ko unkko khatne nahi diya tha

Dadi: aap toh bahut samajdar hai, ye bhi hua tha, Maan toh bachpan se sabkke pet the kaas karkke unkke maa ke, woh toh Maan ko chodkke chali gayi aur Dev ke aane ke badh sab ka attention dev pet ah toh Maan ko bahut bhura laga

Geet: toh Maan ko Dev ka ghar pe aana pasand nahi hai

Dadi: what?

Geet: kuch nahi, aap bathayiye, phir kya hua?

Dadi: phir toh ek accident mein Madan aur Pammi bhi mar gaye, Dev toh tab sirf 2 saal ka tha

Geet: bahut bhura hua, mere maa bhi mere janam hothe hi mar gaye, aur mere papa ne mujhe bahut pyaar kiya tha, lekhin unkke jaane ke badh mein iss duniya mein akheli ho gayi, khaas mujhe bhi aap jaise Dadi hothe?

Dadi: kyun Geet? Aap humme apne Dadi nahi maathe?

Geet: aaise nahi Dadi, mein toh aap se milne ke badh hi pariwaar ka matlab jaana, Dev toh hamesha aapke barein mein hi baat karthe

Dadi: haan, humne hi Dev ko bachpan se pala tha, issiliye woh hummare bahut kareeb hai, Maan toh apne business mein busy ho gaye,lekhin Dev hamesha hummare paas hi rehthe, kabhi bahar jaathe toh bhi din mein 10 bar phone karthe

Dadi ke aankhon mein aasooo...

Geet: mein bhi na? meinne kamakaam aakpko pareshaan kardhi, aap thoda aaram kijiye, mein kal aakke aapse milthi hoon

Dadi: par Geet, aap thode dher rukh jaathe

Geet: nahi dadi, mujhe koi zaroori kaam hai

Geet leaves...she calls mamaji...

Pehle iss baat ko mamaji ko bathana padega...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
so geet is doubting maan as he is step brother of dev
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NICE PARTS...👍🏼

DEV AND MAAN ARE STEP BROTHERS...

GEET THE JASOOS AB APNE SENIOR KO BATAYEGI...😒

SEEDHA SHAK MAAN PAR...😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome story line...waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 7
awesome...
Geet has started doing her detective work...
but her small and incomplete knowledge is gonna land her in trouble...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 8

Geet goes and meets mamaji at a secret place...

Geet ka favourite chaat stall...

Geet gol gappe khakke mamaji ka intrezaar karthi...

Tabhi wahan ek sardarji aathe aur Geet ko side mein bhulathe...

Sardarji: ssshhh

Sardarji winks and callsher ...

Geet: teri ye himmat...

She goes and slaps him...

Usskke thadi Geet ke haath mein aagayi...

Ye toh mamaji hai...

Geet: mamaji aap?

Mamaji: No. 2, tumne ye kya kiya?

Mamaji snatches the nakli thadi and covers his face...

Geet: mamaji, ye kya mazak hai? aap kab se natak mein kaaam karne lage? Aur apkka dance school ka kaam ko kya ho gaya? aap ko kya lagtha? Hummara school hamesha hamesha ke liye band ho jayega? Mere hothe hue aaisa kabhi nahi hoga, mein bhi dekhthi hoon kikisski himmat hai mujhe rokhne ki?

Mamaji: no.,2 , dhere bolo, ye secret mission haina? Issiliye mein apna shakal badalkke aay hoon

Geet: kya? mamaji, aapne toh mujhe dara hi diya tha

Mamaji: No. 1 bolo, toh kya hua? Kuch mila hai kya?

Geet: haan, aaj mujhe ek bahut bada raaz patha chal gaya

Mamaji: mein ne kaha na? zaroor kuch gadbad hai

Geet: no. 1 , Dev Maan ka saha bhai nahi hai

Mamaji: dekha?

Geet: aur Maan toh Dev se jaltha tha, Dev Dadi ka ladla hai

Mamaji: mujhe patha tha, ye banda kuch teek nahi lagtha

Geet: haan, mamaji, ab humme savdhaan rehna chahiye

Mamaji: ab humme ussko range haath pakadna chahiye

Geet: who kaise?

Pehle hum ussko test karenge

Geet: teek hai

Mamaji: yahan aao

Mamaji Geet ke khaan mein apne plan ko bathathe hai...

Geet ko bhi ye idea achcha laga...

Maamji: toh ho jaye?

Geet: haan, mein tayaar hoon, MSK ka asliyat kal patha chal jayega

Enxt day...asper plan Geet subhe subhe KM chale jaathi...

Dadi: Geet, aap itne subhe subhe ? what a pleasant surprise?

Geet: gud mor Dadi

Geet looks at the stairs...she is looking for Maan...

Dadi samaj gayi...

Dadi: Maan abhi taka aye nahi

Geet: woh...mein aapse milne hi aayi thi, kal aap bahut udhaas the, issiliye meinne socha ki aaj aapke saath rahoon toh aapko thoda achcha lagega

Dadi: aap ne bilkul sahi kiya hai, aapko hummari kitni fikar, thanks bete, lekhin iss Maan ko toh bas aani koi faltu meeting ki padi

Geet: aap fikar mat kijiye Dadi, mein hoon

Dadi: hare, Maan keh rahe the ki aaj koi zaroori meeting hai, lekhin ab tak aaye kyun nahi? Geet, zara dekhiye, kahin Maan abhi tak so toh nahi rahe?

Geet: ji dadi

Geet was just waiting for this...to meet Maan alone...

She hurriedly calls mamaji...

Geet: no. 1...no.1

Mamaji: no.1 here

Geet: no. 2 speaking

Mamaji: bolo

Geet: rastha saaf hai, mission shuru karthe hai

Mamaji: Ok...

Geet upar Maan ke kamre mein jaathi...

She knocks...

The door opens...it's not locked...

Geet peeps in...

Maan is not there...

Yahi moka hai Maan ke kamre ko check karne ki...

Geet enters...

She looks for any clues...

Maan comes out of his shower...

He is shocked to see Geet there...

Maan thinks that this is his imagination...

Ek hafte se Maan ko yahi problem hai...

Kahin pe bhi ye ladhkki dikhayi dethi aur Maan ko parehsaan karthi...

Maan gets near her...

Geet senses someone coming...she turns around and hits Maan...

Maan catches hold of her and holds her against the wall...

Maneet eyelock...

Maan: tum?

Geet closes her eyes with her hands...

Maan realizes that she is really standing in front of him...

He hurries to his wardrobe and grabs his pants...

Geet abhi bhi apne aakhen band karkke kadhi hai...

Maan throws the towel on her face to cover her face and dresses up...

Geet stands there with her face still covered...

Maan: tum yahan kya kar arhi ho?

Geet: woh...Dadi aapko neeche bhula rahi hai

Maan: tum pehle bahar jao

Maan drags her and pushes her out...

Geet can't see and she tries to get out but turns around and goes and hits Maan...

Maan: Geet, darwaza wahan hai? dekh nahi sakthi?

Kaise dekhegi

Maan removes the towel...

Geet looks into his eyes...

Maan is mersmerised by her looks...

He keeps staring her...

Just then Maan's phone rings...

Geet : aapka phone

Geet gets it from the table...

Maan grabs it from her...

It's mamaji...

Maan: halo

Mamaji: maan Singh Khurana

Maan: speaking

Mamaji: tummare bhai ka accident hua na?

Maan: haan, aapko kaise patha?

Mamaji: beech mein mat bolo

Maan: halo, tum kaun ho?

Mamaji: pehle mere baat ko suno

Geet keenly observes Maan...

Mamaji: woh accidenet nahi tha, it is an attempted murder

Maan: what?

Maan turns pale...

Maan pushes Geet out and locks the door...

Maan: tumme kaise patha?

Mamaji: mein sab jaantha hoon

Maan: kya jaanthe ho?

Mamaji cuts the call

Maan: halo...halo...

Maan tries to call back but it's a local PCO no.

Geet is surprised ...

This mamaji is not a fool...he has a lot of talent...hidden talent...

Sab kuch mmaji ke plan ke hisaab se hi hua aur Maan ne bhi bilkul waise hi react kiya tha jaise mamaji ne predict kiya tha...

Ab toh koi shak nahi hai...ye toh zaroor Maan ka hi kaam hai...

Mujhe isspar nazar rakhna padega...

Geet calls mamaji and gives the good news...

Khooni range haath pakad gaya...

Lekhin unkko koi proof chahiye haina?

Geet ko hi ab saboot bhi doondhna padega...

Geet comes to KC everyday and tries to know more about Maan from dadi...

She comes to know KC is everything for Maan and dev has 50% share in KC...

She follows him everywhere and some times bumps into him trying to spy him...

Both get closer and closer...

Maan gets to see her often and has started enjoying her pranks...

But is still worried about Dev...

He keeps his feelings within himself...

But this girl is sure to win over him one day...

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