A Girl Who Was Born On 15th October SS completed (part 7 page 26)

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fariya20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

awsum story yaar

intersting title atrack me to read

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

a perfect ending for a perfect love story...😊...thank u for the pm...

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nelufar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Hey Maya Dear...

Congoo For The Awsome SS ...

Do you what you made to me??

I Cried... A lot .. A lot... A lot...

They Pain Of Waiting Made me cry a lot...😭

But so Happy for happy ending 😃😃😃

Maan confused For name... he knw the birth date only...

Both fall for each other ... superbbb 😳😳😳

the desire which they can't control, give a new meaning to there life 👏

There Love Night Gve birth to Their child... Zeena 😛

Geet Left Maan after the night... cuz she don't want to gve him the pain...

But Maan start searching...

Then Finally He Met His Soul child Zeena...

He come to knw about Geet's Pain...

He take her Life Zeena with his home...

then a date come of 15th october...

He celebrate it with his baby ... for Her Geet's B'day...

And The date she again come to him...

He Get His Life, his soul, His Angel Back...

The Journey Get His Final Destination ...

Believe Me Dear You're Just ...

i have No word To describe You...

Just Wanna say that, your Writings Prove That how much you love Maaneet...👏

You are Awesome Maya Dear 😊

love Nelu 😳😳

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tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

lovely rhea

loved this story so different ..and last part ..first it was so sad geet dead but later amazing u brought back geet ...

lovely ending to maneet story ...great ..

thank u for sweet story

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ramya sree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

nice story
really unique n well written.
luved it
congrats :)

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rsusmita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

just came across your story

fineished in one go ,

I thought you will make it a sad ending

but finally you made it a happy ending

nice concept beautifully written loved it dear

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krati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Oh it was so beautiful... I cried a lot both in sadness and then in happiness,.. Touched my heart

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AAINAPATEL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Wow story!!! I realy like it. Little zeena s so cute. Nd d way she was concrnd 'my mammas ring' was superb!!!
Lvd d undrstndng of both families. Lvd dis ss. Thnx 4 shrng.

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sneha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

oh gosh girl why the hell on earth ypu have to write this and made me cry in midnight

this was way tooo amazing everything so perfect last two parts were beyond words m crying since the time maan ce to calfornia and didn't find her and then baby came and her truth her love made me cry

then maan accepting and celebrating her bday was so heart touching

Happie ending I loved that bt trust me even if geet didn't come in real still this story is ma favourite

thanks for writing ds

ps ii think people should read ds anc make more comments ds deserves mre than 32 pages