The Locket (12) MG FF, new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 112

Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 54:

Mixed emotions this one... 😊

The start was a bit sad seeing Khotta Maan's misunderstanding due to his jumping to wrong conclusions caused by hsi own fears and insecurities... Kya hoga iska???

The whole scene with the curtains soothing his form which was distressed and then the somber expressions of his sleeping form symbolizing his defeat to fight the pain and then seeking oblivion. Very well worded 👏

His heart is in the right place. He loves Dev and has seen him broken up by the girl who he thinks is Geet. Even Daadi was happy with Dev and Geet so he has no one to confirm anything with. Thanks.

The whole dream of how he would meet Geet again and then marry her and make her HIS 😳 Especially SRK style 😆 Loved it ... he is yet that sweet and in love Maan who is waiting for love to embrace him and soothe him, and who feels lost without him being surrounded with that unconditional and unbound love that he craves for as a boy who has everything but yet nothing to cherish if not that love.

Heartbreak for Maan and yet somehow a lot of my readers are angry with him at this point. I guess he is not the typical Maan of Geet forum, maybe I did not get the character out the way I thought of it😕

Bechara Nakul 😆😆 Avi kabhi toh us pe taras kahao 🤣 Aate hi daat pad gayi 😆 even after learning videshi language for hsi videsh returned Maan 😆 and keeping in mind two fruits and paratha recipe ... 😆 Bechara 😆

Jisse daanta na tha uske samne wo bol nahi sakta ya usse hurt nahi kar sakta toh sunaya Nakul ko... Nakul ke saath patch up karyegi Avi😉

Bambi sach mein bambi hai 😳 Her babaji talks and associations have no match yet it all seems sweet and cute 😊

Daadi is too gooda s a matchmaker and already like her grandsons dreaming about great grand child 😆😆😉 Lage raho 👍🏼 only I guess she won't have wait too long than a year seeing both Khurana brothers so impatient and weaving such dreams 😉😳😆

Who plays solitaire at work?? 😉

Precap: BF not = Boyfriend but = Bachpan ka friend 🤣 Bambi na, iska Maan kya karega 😆

I am waiting for this precap... 😊

Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 55: Love stories 😳

Poonam -Chandan are headed somewhere form here I guess.. it can't be separation after such a long time of being adrift... It can be like an oasis here but I would like it to be longer lasting for them. I loved how you showed her losing hope and then the rescue coming in... sometimes its when we don't have anything to hold onto that we get the opportunity to experience God's providence in our lives. Well written 👏

Thank you. I had written that part a long time ago and even Mari had read it stand alone and come up with the poetry then.

Megha-Kabir 😳 Another couple reaching a happily ever after... But somewhere I have a feeling that they are heading towards some revelations ...not necessarily bad that would separate them but than there are some loopholes that need to get a closure here... 😊

Yes, there is more for them. A lot of the story is left to be told in the few parts left.😃

Dev-Naina 😉 My lovely couple... Dev ko macchar banna diya Bambi ne 😆😆 Naina wants to teach her facts of life ... interesting 😆 Teach her Naina nahi toh tumhare SR ki band bhi Bambi hi baja degi... afterall both are going to be married to twins and in the same house 😉😆

Tara yeh sab karegi, toh Maan kya karega?😆😆

Maan calls for Manish(a) 🤣

Two more left now... catching up on all today 😉

Originally posted by: krati5

Chapter 54

did i mention i love d banner geet maan & taveez. deadly combo... prejudice, assumptions hamesha insaan ko le hi dubta hai... here too maan is thinking geet's love life with a different man!!! Gadha... but he is not totally wrong... but confront to karna chahiye... chodo... is waqt to ika kuch nhi hone wala

Originally posted by: krati5

Chapter 55...

i don't like to feel anything for poonam... i don't like that person who do self-pity for such a long time... again u didn't give me a chance to say she is wrong at her place coz d story covers whole points.. but still i m nt going to like her... may be a huge hush. ki aab to thodi si akal ayi. sirf thodi si kyunki fir se usne chandan ko aapne decision ke baree mein sirf order de diya... she needed to discuss that with him... ek baar uski bhi to sun le...

megha & kabir r stating their life... cute & lovely too.. they do deserve happiness. all does but they r on top for them

Geet... jhalli hai... sweet hai... bas bada hona baki hai😆 but her question was too good. dev ko bhi mosquito ne khata🤣.. NT-Dev wants to have hoochie-koo moments... green signal from my side...

but all this beat by maan inviting manish/manisha for his work & strengthening nakul doubts about maan's not to straight character...😆

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

chandan and poonam's part was very heart touching and its saddening to knw that it all this took so much time to happen but i liked it very much the way u hv brought thm in terms with the facts abt eachother 😔

so all is set with megha and kabir too ...their part was utterly sweet and luvd the way he disclosed the news of getting the job to her and wht followed later was all lovelyyy

God...geet's "babaji" only had me rofling🤣🤣 and wht followed after was a bonus treat...tara had me nodding my head with her when she was thinking abt geet and the man she wd marry...but rite now i'm in no mood of pitying maan...budhu stop assuming and start asking naa..i knw i knw if he wd hv done exactly that toh how were we to enjoy all this😉

Thank u so much for the update and Pm!!!😊😳

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Finished reading till part 52. I must say this is the only ff I loved reading on other characters other than maaneet.Naintara & Dev ,Kabir & Megha ,poonam & chandan ,Adi & pinky wow soo many interestg characters. Hats of to your writing skill. Fabulous ff loved reading it 😊