The Locket (12) MG FF, new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 111

Originally posted by: annbell

sorry 4 being late to comment ..

i really enjoyed d teaser .. 😆 ...

maan's entry to office ..

sasha is all set to woo maan ..

most importantly .. i didn't expect geet will apply kajal to maan ..

she is soo dreamy .. ..

maan's day starting wid d new creature called manishaaa... wow .. he is gone .. 😆 ..

update soon ..

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai avi! diwali kaisi rahi??

missing u...

Originally posted by: spvd

so u dont wanna share that? ok i will make the adjustments dear...how was the Diwali?

So its just 10 more chapter left?!?!? I started reading this story only recently so it feels like story is ending too soon... Want more of this story!!
About the update: am surprised to say I missed Dev's presence in this update!! Never thought I'd miss Dev in any of maan-geet story!! Haha!!
Geet is this child woman!! Knows her work like an experienced professional but then doesnt understand the practicalities of relationships or the obtuse comments of Sasha!!
Maan will have a tough time avoiding Geet, her presence in KM and KC has become as important as the khuranas thats this girl's magic!! :)
Waiting to read more of Geet-Maan and hopefully some of Dev n his iStar!! :)

Originally posted by: Mrs.MSKForever

So its just 10 more chapter left?!?!? I started reading this story only recently so it feels like story is ending too soon... Want more of this story!!
About the update: am surprised to say I missed Dev's presence in this update!! Never thought I'd miss Dev in any of maan-geet story!! Haha!!
Geet is this child woman!! Knows her work like an experienced professional but then doesnt understand the practicalities of relationships or the obtuse comments of Sasha!!
Maan will have a tough time avoiding Geet, her presence in KM and KC has become as important as the khuranas thats this girl's magic!! :)
Waiting to read more of Geet-Maan and hopefully some of Dev n his iStar!! :)

Part 53: 😳

Chapter 54:

Chapter 55: Love stories 😳

Originally posted by: Onir

Part 53: 😳

Lovely!!! 👏👏 Well written with the emotions bang on... Hayee I love this couple, they are so irresistible... a complete contrast in nature to M-G yet have their own standing in this story. If Maaneet are calm waters of a deep sea... these two are like two lightening strikes that illuminate the dark sky and cause a tremble within.

Aisha features again with her family... she always has a role to play for the couples here... in some way or the other... Her character makes brief appearances but they're quiet impactful. 👏

i am sure everyone that knows her will agree with you 😆

A small glimpse of Geet in the convo between Dev-Naina was good enough to know the transformation Geet has undergone from the small town girl with timid and shy nature to a girl who knows her work and is yet humble but at the same time competent enough to shoulder responsibilities with love and faith on her. 👏

that was just Avi avoiding writing a chapter on it😆 proud to be lazy

His real proposal to Naina were devoid of his flattery and were not coated/garnished with flirty or much words but what he said were true and heartfelt... loved those few words as it was Dev and not the person he presents to the world but the person he is to the one he loves... ❤️ Can I get one Dev like him??? 😉😳

to be honest Dev comes to me much easier than Maan. I battle to create this Maan. It is so tough to mess with perfection of the first few months of GHSP and yet I think I did make him different

The whole scene at the beachouse and the proposal with the song sequence was 👏 I won't add words to describe it because the whole scene was beautifully penned down by you 👏👏

I loved her acceptance and admitting her feelings for him by way of her own challenges and teasing... she is a shrew and Dev wouldn't have it without the challenge she poses at him at each step... 😆

His definition of her ability to love and their Normal was the highlight for me 😳

Loved it!! You should write more such scenes Avi

i have always lived close to a beach so I wanted a beach romantic scene so badly.. a fireplace one too😉

🤗

🤗Thanks Onir