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Congratulations. for the new thread


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😊 Updating...



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(For banner credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


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Part - 77



Geet didn't come home that night , whole day and night full police dept was busy in tracking those B*******. Sr were there for meetings ,, media was making its pressure on situation and because of that everyone was targeting police. Police was also helpless at its place they didn't have any proper clue about r****** ,, they r working on getting smallest info. Next day Geet came only for change and left at once ,, that day also passed like d previous and police was in very pressure from all sides dept media, social grup and poli p****** . Maan was trying her number again and again in every hour but she didn't pick the phone ,, he was very tense for Geet ,, nobody was there to look after her properly in absence of CS. Maan wanted to listen her and to meet her once. He didn't go to site office that day and decided to work at KC ,,, in eve he called at her home again and the servant replied that she came and left at once.

Police was searching the culprits maniacally collecting and joining every dot and at night in late hours police got its first success ,, they caught one of them which was a big relief coz now police could get the info from that B******. They used their third degree and he started to open his mouth for his partner who run away from here s same night .


Now Geet decided to take an out of way step to catch d main criminal ,, She send her some jr to brought that criminal's family and kept that in police custody ,, they did d same and first Geet took them to hospital to show them what their son did with a Masoom girl ,, they were very ashamed and promise to support d police ,, they tried to contact that man with their number and after some efforts he picked their phone ,, d culprit's father spoke to him like police taught him ,, police tracked his location and came in action immediately and in half an hour they got d news from that area police that they had caught him at his hideout place. Relief ...


Media was giving every new news regularly threw their channels ,, Maan and his family was watching all this coz it was related to Geet's PS . Maan thought that now Geet took some relief and came back home any time ,, he decided to go her home to meet her. He told his Dad that he was going to meet Geet and came to her house ,, he waited there for her.


Geet everyday visiting d girl at hospital and enquiring about her recovery ,, Dr were trying their best to stopped d infection and after two days they got lil success in that ,,, girl body gave some positive response and all took a relief ,, now they have a hope to save her.


It was second night and Geet was in hospital and talking to docs ,, she was lil hopeful for d girl now ,, her breath was hanging in her throat for d girl coz if something serious happened to d girl then the whole situation became worst to no extent. Geet came to Girl's parents and gave them an angry glair coz they were also responsible for this ,, they left their daughter alone at home and enjoying in party ,,, they gave importance to their pleasure not to their child .


Geet: Apna sukh aur khushi tumhe apni beti se bhi jyada accha laga na ,, usse akele chod saktey thy party nahi ,, dekho ab tumhare sukho ne uski zindgi dukho se bhar di ,,, sari zindgi iss dukh ko sahegi wo ,, tum uske dukh ko na baat paoge , na mahsoos ker sakoge. Tum bhi utne hi gunahagar ho jitne wo criminals ,, unhone bhi apna sukh dekha aur tumne bhi ,, ku choda usse akele ,, ku? Police per to bharosa nahi kiya media sath laye ki wo ek accha helping hand hoga hum per pressure banane ke liye ,, lekin wo S*** naukar per bahrosa tha ,,tumhari iss samajhdari ki saza us massom ko mili aur aage apni life mei kya face karegi koi nahi janta?


They were sitting there with their hanging heads ,, now they knew that they did a blunder and their daughter is suffering coz of that . Police can't say them anything openly but Geet's bottled anger and d worst condition of girl suffocated her and she poured out her anger when she find that couple alone .


Geet came back home lil late and told d servant that she won't eat anything ,, she left to her room to change . These two days broke her mentally and physically mainly that innocent fragile girl ,, the lil child who deserves care, love and attention from elders now suffering all because of those bloody elders . Geet went to change and freshen up in wash room.


Maan was in living room when Geet came and talking to servant ,, she didn't saw him ,, Maan came out and told servant to warm up d meal and made a plate for her and a strong coffee also ,, he'll made her eat something. They did d same and sent them to take rest ,, he came in her room and put d tray on side table and waited for her to come out from washroom .


She came out after taking a relaxing bath ,, she was in her night suit looking cute and fresh ,, she took a lil relief after two days but mental pressure was still there ,, being a girl she could feel d pain of that girl . From last two days d word R*** and d serious condition of that girl slashing her ,, she just wanted to catch those beasts and killed them right there ,, but couldn't. Police is powerful, but helpless also at some places ,, they can't punish those B******* like they want ,, Rules.


Geet went to her wardrobe immersed in her thought when she heard her name ,, G e e t.



"If you feel lost, disappointed, hesitant, or weak, return to yourself, to who you are, here and now and when you get there, you will discover yourself, like a lotus flower in full bloom, even in a muddy pond, beautiful and strong."
Masaru Emoto




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Part - 78

Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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a hug for u for this song... i just love it and am hearing this after a long timeee... thanx dear...


yipeee i came first...

the issue which u have taken in the last 2 parts is just so sensitive... hate is a small word to describe how i and am sure all of us, feel towards the culprits of rape ,... and when it comes to minors ... this feeling again rises 100 folds...

i really hope and pray that all gals remain safe from these demons ... and though not fully many of these cases can be prevented... for example in ur story that gal would not have suffered if her parents did not leave the gal alone with a male helper... every parents have to ensure their childs safety ...
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loved the update ...
jo issue tum ney uthya hai ...👏

missed maaneet talk here ...
Edited by maansee - 11 years ago
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congrets for new thread ...
update asap ...

i know u r regular .. par is dil ka kya karu ...😆
Edited by maansee - 11 years ago
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amazing job...
being a girl , we know this is a very serious and sensitive issue..
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babbie tum kahaa pe ho???

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